Need help with my holy mark deck

Hey whats up? Hopefully you guys are a little nicer than the people at the Pojo forums but either way after a LONG break from yugioh I found the DN and had a ton of fun I might make a return when the Holy Marks come out and build a deck for them.

Anyway here is the deck I had in mind, providing I get a decent hand it does extremely well.


I'll take any ratings or suggestions (except removing Meteor dragon; he's a bro)

Also ignore 5 headed lol

Hopefully You can make the cards out, if not I'll post a list.

Phoenix Wright wrote:take out alexandrite and curse of dragons

add another holy marker of the divine dragon and trap dustshoot

find room in the extra for more thunder end dragons

why do you run 5 headed dragon with no way to get it out?

5 headed was a mistake; I used to run D mirror.

3 markers just clutters things in my experience and I have never needed more than 2.

Curse is for quick Ranked 5's and IMO they are more useful then ranked 8's as while Thunder end is always nice to have in your pocket I've never really used it except for in times where I really need a field nuke. I find the ability to maintain field presence or destroy monsters with the two keepers is always useful.

Alexandrite is for quick level 4's and can also be really useful in a pinch where as a marker is always a dead draw.

I appreciate the suggestions though, I'll take out 5 headed for another Thunder end.

Dustshoot is going in though, I can't believe I forgot that.

-1 shu
-1 nephtys

Too many monsters ss from tributes. Add in warning and the dustshoot.

-2 Bribe
-2 7tools
+1 Warning
+1 Dustshoot
+2 Super Rejuve

-2 Seven Tools
-2 Dark Bribes
-1 Curse of Dragon
-1 Alexandrite Dragon
-1 Meteor Dragon
-1 MST
+1 BLS
+1 Chaos Sorcerer
+2 Tefnut, The Holy Marked Dragon
+1 Holy Marker of the Divine Dragons
+2 Super Rejuvenation
+1 Trap Dustshoot

BLS is a given in this deck. REDMD and Chaos both provide the dark removal needed to summon both of them. I run mine with POA(Because to get the lvl 8, it comes from anywhere) and upstarts, and another enemy controller, but as the build sits, it seems a little strange. Not saying it doesnt do the job, but there are so many other options besides what you picked. Tefnut is a great special summon to tribute for another holy marked, so I would definently suggest 3. I would also lose 2 shu's.
they just dont fit (see the pun? )
In all seriousness, 2 shu's is too much. 1 would definently suffice