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Post  {EX} TheVoid 2011-11-11, 12:49

This topic is for all feedback of my fanfic, Alpha X. A link to Alpha X can be found here
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Post  S.S.A. 2011-11-11, 13:13

reminds me of naruto
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Post  Phoenix Wright 2011-11-11, 13:49

If Sirus could read minds, wouldn't he know Raviel's name and intentions to marry his girlfriend?
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Post  {EX} TheVoid 2011-11-11, 13:52

@Anaconda =\ Okay thats what teh original RP was about, but we strayed so far off Naruto it cant even be considered a Naruto fanfic/roleplay anymore.

@Pox He can choose when to use it and when not to use it. Every time he uses it, it taxes his body. Thatll be explained more later on.
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Post  S.S.A. 2011-11-11, 14:41

well i mean, the beasts thing, obviously its quite different, and i did not mean to imply it was the same, just i saw some similarities
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Post  {EX} TheVoid 2011-11-11, 14:42

Lol its all good. i was hoping Id get a few more chapters in before someone called it. I only really remake a few characters from Naruto, anyone who can guess them as they come up get bro points.
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Post  Phoenix Wright 2011-11-11, 14:48

TheVoid wrote:Lol its all good. i was hoping Id get a few more chapters in before someone called it.



Let's see....Demons sealed away in small children, and everyone has amazing fighting skills and can do magic?

Yeah, how long did you think that would last Razz

in any case, Sirus' wife is definitely Sakura
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Post  {EX} TheVoid 2011-11-11, 14:50

1) Sirus and Hina arent married.
2) No, never. Sakura should be shot.
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Post  Phoenix Wright 2011-11-11, 14:51

Well then she's fluttershy
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Post  {EX} TheVoid 2011-11-11, 14:51

Much closer, but she doesnt want to be a tree.
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Post  S.S.A. 2011-11-11, 14:53

well i mean, hina hinata lol
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Post  {EX} TheVoid 2011-11-11, 14:55

Yea shes based off Hinata.
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Post  S.S.A. 2011-11-11, 14:57

and sirus smelled alittle like sasuke, dark hair and eyes, lightning bolts
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Post  {EX} TheVoid 2011-11-11, 15:00

...No.
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Post  S.S.A. 2011-11-11, 15:05

fair enough, it was just me trying to draw connections lol
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Post  {EX} TheVoid 2011-11-11, 15:06

Im not sure if Sasuke will be remade or not, but he might down the road. He will be mentioned though, without a name for the time being.

Before anyone tries drawing more Sirus connections, Ill throw this in. Sirus and Raviel are both original characters.
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Post  S.S.A. 2011-11-11, 15:15

eh i would have gone more towards a raviel uchiha connection
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Post  {EX} TheVoid 2011-11-14, 12:38

Being as it's Monday, I've updated the opening post with the characters introduced in Chapter 1.
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Post  {EX} TheVoid 2011-11-18, 00:35

Just bumping this up. In about 25 minutes it'll be Friday for me which means Chapter 2 - Mother's Tomb will be released.
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Post  Rose Dragon 2011-11-18, 01:33

< wants more fan fic

reps 8D
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Post  Exiled 2011-11-28, 23:24

I dont think once a week is enough for me :$
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Post  Adept VantageSP 2011-12-02, 02:20

I promise I will read some of this. Not gonna, not a reading fan xd. Sure it is good though.
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Post  {EX} TheVoid 2011-12-09, 01:09

Chapter 5 is up. Inb4WTFISGOINGON?!?!
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Post  {EX} TheVoid 2012-02-05, 20:43

Are people, aside from Exiled, still reading this?
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Post  Zero2Hero 2012-02-05, 21:36

{EX} TheVoid wrote:Are people, aside from Exiled, still reading this?
Why didn't you tell me you were writing fan fics? I would've read it, now I'm so backed up...
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Post  {EX} TheVoid 2012-02-05, 21:45

Its been sigged... for... ever
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Post  Zero2Hero 2012-02-05, 21:47

{EX} TheVoid wrote:Its been sigged... for... ever
Since when have I been known to actually pay attention to signatures? O_o

Only a few get my attention, and that's when I actually pick links... |:
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Post  {EX} TheVoid 2012-02-05, 22:12

=\ GET READING
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