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Post  Ageha13 2011-07-08, 04:03

This is my story! Main characters of this story are real people and they themselves choose how their characters looks. So please don't complain about characters. If someone would like to join my story, write me in my ham: Scar-Red Nova Dragon

Burning Soul. Intro.


A mighty red demon dragon was floating in air right next to little girl with long, light brown hair and green eyes. She was quite short and she looked quite weak, but her eyes were burning with strength and confidence. Across the field was standing young man with few piercing and tattoos. His field was empty and he looked shocked. There were few other guys standing behind him and they looked just as shocked.
Girl: It’s time to finish this! Red Dragon Archfiend attack him directly! Sacred Blaze of Power!
His life points reached 0 and he couldn’t believe that he has lost to a little girl.
Girl: A deal is a deal. My prize, please!
Guy slowly walked across the field a gave the girl few pieces of paper. That was money. He obviously seemed dissatisfied, but he couldn’t do anything since he himself agreed to girls conditions. Girl walked away, but her face was still emotionless. Only thing that was making her look alive was her eyes that were burning with ambition. She didn’t fear anything and she was strong, but she was also alone.
That girl is me. My name is Ageha Takahashi and I’m an orphan. When I was just newborn, my mother left me in hospital. But that is not how I became orphan. That time my grandparents came and picked me up. I lived with them and I was happy. They taught me to be strong and independent. They took really good care of me and they were only people I ever trusted. Everyday with them I learned something new and I probably would have grown up as normal child, if I haven’t had started going to school.
At beginning I was excited, just like every child would be, but then I experienced a big disappointment. Other children didn’t want to play with me, they stayed away from me and laughed at me, because I didn’t have parents. Everyday I came back from school with tears, I would ask for my grandparents to let me stay at home, but they said that I have to go. First two years were really painful. I didn’t know what to do when my classmates would laugh at me. But soon I grew stronger. Their teasing didn’t make me cry me anymore, so they just left me alone. But I didn’t care for that, I didn’t care for any other people then my grandparents.
But at age of 14 my grandparents died from old age. Some people wanted to put me in orphanage, but I escaped. I decided to live on my own, without anyone to help me anymore. From my hometown Seapuru I went to capital city of this country - Corona city! It was only place I had any chance of surviving alone. Beginning was hard, I didn’t know where to go, where to live, what to eat. At beginning I lived in some old house and ate food I could find in trash cans.
One day I saw as two quite strong looking men were fighting over something. It was some card. They started to hit each other in face and card flew aside from fight. I don’t know what happened to me that time, but I quickly went and grabbed card. Luckily men were too busy fighting each other to notice me. That card was my first step to good life. It was one-of-kind monster card – Red Dragon Archfiend. After some time I picked up cards I needed for a deck and started dueling with people on street.
It has been two years since I started living in this city on my own. I have competed in many dueling tournaments and won quite a lot of money through duels. Right now, I have a little old house at the edge of city and food for everyday.
These two years I have lived alone with no help except for my cards. I have forgotten how it is that somebody loves you and cares about you and I didn’t care for love anymore. I didn’t need it anymore!
That is what I tough before my peaceful, lonesome life was changed forever!


Here's profile of first character:
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Name: Ageha Takahashi
Nicknames: Ageha-chan (by close friends)
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Birthday: 13th of April (Born in Corona City)
Hometown: Seapuru town
Hair color: Light brown
Eye color: Green
Family: none
Character: + determinated, strong-willed, mature, quiet, clever, quick, reliable
- hot-headed, stubborn, sometimes too rush, impatient, unsocial
Likes: Chocolate,Dragons, Animals, Fire, Heat
Dislikes: Onions, High places, Long jorneys
Main deck: Dragon/Synchro Deck
Ace monster: Red Dragon Archfiend
Key card: Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon
Goal: To peaceful life
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Post  Ageha13 2011-07-10, 07:46

Posted second chapter. It would be nice if new people would join in story.


Chapter 1. How it all started to change!

I was taking a scroll around the city as usually looking for some new duelists to duel. People who knew me didn’t dare to come and challenge me again, because I was too strong for them. Many duelists hated me and wanted to get rid of me, but so far none has succeeded.
Suddenly I felt as somebody grabbed my hands and almost lifting me up in the air.

Ageha: Who are you? What do you want?
????: Oh, so you don’t remember me now, miss Demon!
Ageha: This voice! You are that Joe guy that I defeated last week!
Joe: Wrong! You didn’t win fair! You were cheating. There’s no way that some girl like you could defeat me!
Ageha: How the hell am I suppose cheat in duel?
Joe: I don’t know and I don’t care! Only thing I know is that you are going to pay for what you have done. I won’t leave you alone till you plead for forgiveness.
Ageha: There’s no way I’m doing that!
I hit that guy with my leg right into stomach and he released my arms and fell to ground. I was about to run away, but he grabbed my leg and I fell to ground.
Joe: You are not going anywhere until I get my revenge!
Joe got up and he would have hit me right into face, but I managed to avoid his hit. I quickly stood up and was about to run away, when he crossed my road and was about to hit another blow. I evaded that one too and even though I’m not too strong I hit him in stomach and run away as fast as I could! I heard him shouting and swearing behind me, but I didn’t stop! I hate to admit it, but I have no chance of winning a fight against that elephant. I ran into little street hoping that he won’t follow me here.
I felt as someone grabbed me from behind. I automatically hit the attacker with my elbow right into face!

?????: Ouch! Why did you hit me suddenly? That hurts!
I turned around and saw a really good-looking guy at my age. He had long green hair, bright green eyes and he was wearing white shirt and light pants. He didn’t look dangerous, but I still didn’t let my guard down.
Ageha: Why wouldn’t I hit you? You suddenly grabbed me and you expect me to be all nice!
?????: I did that so that fatso who is chasing you wouldn’t notice you!
Joe finally caught up with me. He looked really angry and if he gets to me he is going to turn me into ash.
Joe: You are going to pay for what you have done!
Green-haired guy suddenly grabbed my hand and started running and pulling me behind him
?????: Let’s get away from this guy!
We ran really fast and slowly we started to lose Joe. After about 10 minutes of chasing Joe lost us. We both sat down on ground catching our breath.
?????: That was one hell of a run!
Ageha: Yeah! But I could have gotten away by myself!
?????: Haha! I’m sure you could! Why was he chasing you in first place?
Ageha: That is not none of your business!
?????: You sure a cold girl!
Ageha: Nobody is making you talk to cold girl here!
?????: But the cold girl here is quite interesting! I like girls like that!
Like? Nobody has ever liked me except for my grandparents! No, I can’t believe him! He is probably some kind of player that says that to all girls he meets! I stood up and was about to go away.
Ageha: Like I care what you like! I don’t have time for you!
?????: Leaving already! At least tell me your name!
Ageha: No way!
He grabbed my hand and wouldn’t let it go.
Ageha: Hey, let go of me!
?????: Not until you tell me your name!
I wanted to punch him into face with my free hand, but he stopped me and now I was trapped! He was too close to me and that made me feel uneasy. It has been years since I’ve been so close to any human.
?????: Tell me your name and I won’t let you go!
Ageha: Fine! My name is Ageha Takahashi.
He let go of me and a big smile appeared on his face.
?????: Ageha! What a cute name! Perfect for cute girl!
Ageha: Yeah, whatever!
I already was walking away from that guy. I don’t want to have anything to do with that guy! He is just a player. Soon he won’t even remember that he ever met me.
?????: Going away already! Why don’t we duel?
Ageha: Duel?
?????: Yeah! You have duel disk. That means you can duel!
Ageha: So be it! Let’s duel! But when I win you are going to leave me alone!
?????: You sure are confident in your skill. That makes things more interesting. But if I win, you’ll have to be friends me. By the way, my name is Yori. Yori Youdosaki!
Ageha: We won’t be friends, because I won’t let you win!
Yori: Let’s Rev it Up!
Ageha: Let’s Duel!
Ageha: You can start since you challenged me!
Yori: As you wish! I Summon Shield Wing in Defense position. I set two cards face-down (Reinforce Truth, Bottomless Trap Hole) and end my turn.
Ageha: My turn! I activate Spell – Mystical Space Typhoon. It allows me to destroy one of your set cards. I choose second one (Bottomless Trap Hole). Next when my opponent controls monster and I don’t I can Special Summon Vice Dragon from my hand with it’s original attack halved. I summon tuner monster Dark Resonator in Attack position.
Yori: I see that you have no intention of wasting time.
Ageha: I don’t have time to play around with you! I tune level 3 Dark Resonator with level 5 Vice Dragon. The rulers heartbeat will flow through air! Behold how burning flame takes shape of power. Synchro Summon! My very soul, Red Dragon Archfiend!
Yori: Wow, now that’s amazing! I have never seen this monster before.
Ageha: Because Red Dragon Archfiend is one of the kind! It cannot be duplicated. Red Dragon Archfiend attack Shield Wing! Sacred Blaze of Power!
Yori: Shield Wing has a nice effect to stop you! Up to twice per turn if it would be destroyed it is not!
Ageha: That won’t stop me! I activate Red Dragon Archfiend’s effect. If it attacks Defense position monster all Defense position on your side of field are destroyed. Flare of Destruction!
Shield Wing is destroyed and sent to graveyard.
Ageha: I set one card face-down (Dark Bribe) and end my turn!
Yori: At your End Phase I activate Trap – Reinforce Truth. It allows me to Special Summon level 2 or lower Warrior-type monster from my deck. I summon Speed Warrior in Defense Position.
Ageha: Such a weak monster is no match for my Red Dragon Archfiend.
Yori: We’ll see that! My turn! Draw! I summon tuner monster Debris Dragon is Attack position. When Debris Dragon is Normal Summoned I can Special Summon monster from my graveyard with 500 or less attack. I summon Shield Wing in Attack position.
Ageha: You can summon even hundred weak monsters, but no matter how many they are no match for my dragon.
Yori: Don’t think that you are only one who knows how to Synchro Summon. I tune level 4 Debris Dragon with level 2 Speed Warrior and level 2 Shield Wing. Gathering wishes will become a new shining star! Become the path its light shines upon! Synchro Summon! Take flight, Stardust Dragon!
A mighty white dragon roared into sky with glistering light around it! It looked as if dragon was covered in stardust and I have to admit that I have never met opponent like this. Opponent that could match my strength!
Yori: You are not the only one with rare dragon!

Here's profile of second character:
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Name: Yori Youdosaki
Nicknames: none
Age: 16
Sex: Male
Birthday: 18th of December
Hometown: Aero City
Hair color: Green
Eye color: Green
Family: none
Likes: Dueling , Hanging out with friends, Chasing cats and fighting for friends
Dislikes: Boring things, quitting and being judged
Main Deck: Synchro/Machine
Ace Monster: Stardust Dragon
Key card: Quickdraw Synchron
Goal: To be next king of games
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Post  Yusei Fudou 2011-07-10, 11:26

... This yori character sounds familiar.
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Post  Lovelace 2011-07-10, 12:39

N is a character in your story?! =O. I def gonna read this if you got N in there =/
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Post  Ageha13 2011-07-10, 14:10

@ Yusei Fudou Yeah, you probably know him quite well! XD

@ thecicade He only looks like N, in my story it's Yori!
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Post  Lovelace 2011-07-10, 15:25

I never new N had an identical twin =O
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Post  Ageha13 2011-07-10, 15:54

I honestly don't know if Yori is N's twin! Ask him yourself! xD
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Post  Lovelace 2011-07-10, 19:55

Just finished reading this. It was good. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Post  Ageha13 2011-07-12, 03:48

Chapter 2. New friend!

Ageha: Even if you summon Stardust Dragon, it cannot defeat my Red Dragon Archfiend.
Yori: We’ll see that! I activate Spell – Rush Recklessy. This card increases attack of one monster on field by 700 till end of turn. I choose Stardust Dragon.
Ageha: I don’t think so! I activate Trap – Dark Bribe! It negates activation of your Trap card and let’s you draw one card!
Yori: I see you are always ready for anything! You are one of the best duelist I have ever met.
Ageha: Keep the talking to someone else!
Yori: Cold as always. I set one card face-down and end my turn.
Ageha: My turn! Draw! Red Dragon Archfiend attack Stardust Dragon! Sacred Blaze of Power!
Yori: I activate Quick-play Spell – Shrink! It halves attack of one face-up monsters of my choice. I choose Red Dragon Archfiend! His attack is now 1500, which is less then Stardust!
Ageha: What?! NO!
Red Dragon Archfiend is destroyed and Ageha’s life points drop from 4000 to 3000.
Ageha: No matter! I will win anyway! I summon tuner monster Baby Dragon in Attack position. This monster cannot be selected as attack target by Dragon-type monster. Which means that Stardust Dragon can’t attack it. I end my turn!
He can’t attack me so I’m save till next turn and then I will be able to Synchro Summon again!
Yori: Well I guess it’s time to end this!
Ageha: End?!
Yori: My turn! Draw! Great, just what I need! I activate Spell – One for One! By discarding 1 monster from my hand I can Special Summon level 1 monster from my deck! I discard Max Warrior to summon Stardust Xioalong in Defense position. Next I summon miracle tuner monster Majestic Dragon.
Ageha: Miracle tuner monster?
Yori: This little monster will bring me to victory! I tune level 1 Majestic Dragon with level 1 Stardust Xioalong and level 8 Stardust Dragon. Gathering starlight will enlighten a new miracle! Become the path its light shines upon! Synchro Summon! Arrive in light, Majestic Star Dragon!
A dragon even stronger then then Stardust Dragon and Red Dragon Archfiend soared into sky! I was amazed by it’s power and beauty! I have honestly never seen something so outstanding!
Yori: I activate Majestic Star Dragon’s effect. Once per turn I can negate one of your face-up monsters effects! I negate Baby Dragon’s effect!
Ageha: What?! No! Impossible!
Yori: Majestic Star Dragon attack Baby Dragon! Shooting Blaster Sonic!
Baby Dragon is destroyed and Ageha’s life points drop to 0.
Ageha: How? I haven’t lost even once in my life. How did you manage to defeat me? That’s impossible!
Yori: Everything is possible! I defeated you because I have a reason to win!
Ageha: Reason?
Yori: Yes, if I would have lost I could never be friends with you, but now we are going to be the best of friends! Please take good care of me!
I honestly don’t know what is that guy thinking! Is he really missing attention from girls? No, he is handsome, so that couldn’t be the problem! Maybe, he is just an idiot! I stood up and looked angrily at him!
Ageha: Fine, so be it! Since I lost I'm going to be your friend now! BUT don’t expect me to act all nice and stuff!
Yori: You can act just like you want, Ageha-chan!
Ageha: Ageha-chan?!
I launched my fist against him but he avoided it quickly.
Yori: Missed me! You shouldn’t fight so much! Girls shouldn’t act like that!
Ageha: I act the way I want and I’m going to beat you next time for sure.
Yori: Okay, good luck with that, but now show me where are you living!
Ageha: Why should I do that?
Yori: Because we are friends now! I have to know where my precious friend lives.
Precious? We met only an hour ago. That guy doesn’t give up easily does he? Maybe after I show him my house he’ll leave me alone!
Ageha: Fine so be it!
Yori: You are much more nicer then you look at first glance!
Ageha: You are just so annoying that I can’t say “no”!
Yori: And you are funny too! Well lead the way!
While we were walking on way to my house, Yori was talking all the time. He asked me about tournaments I have been in and duels I have won. I have to admit it wasn’t bad to talk to him, but I don’t thrust him anyway!
Finally we arrived at my house. It was actually quite big with two floor and an attic too. My house was big enough for a whole family, but I was living in it alone!

Ageha: Here’s my house!
Yori: Wow, it’s really big! Your parents must have quite a good job!
Ageha: I’m living here alone and I was the one who bought this house!
Yori: What? You bought by yourself! That’s really cool! But how did you get the money?
Ageha: I won it through duels!
Yori: That makes it even cooler, but isn’t it lonely to live in such a big house by yourself?
Ageha: Not really! I have been alone for long time!
Yori: Oh! Well, not anymore! I bet it will be fun to live together with you!
Ageha: What? Live with me? What the hell are you talking about?
Yori: I’m talking about us living together now!
Ageha: Wha? Why would I live with you?
Yori: Because I’m your friend and I have just escaped from my home and I have nowhere to go! Friends have to help friends!
He showed me a big smile, while I was just standing there looking at him with shocked expression on my face!
Yori: Well, are you going to just stand there or will you show me around OUR home!
That guy is much smarter then I thought he was!

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Post  Lovelace 2011-07-12, 14:39

Another good chapter. Good job Very Happy +rep'd
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Post  Ageha13 2011-07-13, 07:32

Chapter 3. Unexpected Meeting.

I slowly open my eyes and feel the warmth of my bed around me! I look at my clock and see that it is still 8 o’clock. I pulled blanket higher and closed my eyes again. I quietly laugh and talk to myself.
Ageha: I had such a weird dream! That I met some weird Yori guy and that I had a duel with him and that I lost. That’s impossible, I never lose! And later he even came to live in my house! How stupid?! I probably ate something bad before going to sleep.
I was about to fall asleep again, when I heard some noise. Probably just some neighbor cat or something. After a little while I heard noise again, but this time it was louder and….CAME FROM MY KITCHEN. I quickly jumped out of bed and ran to look what is happening there.
In my kitchen I saw Yori standing in front stove cooking something.

Ageha: WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING HERE?
Yori: Oh, good morning, Ageha! I’m cooking some delicious breakfast, because you were so kind to let me live in your house!
Ageha: THAT WASN’T A NIGHTMARE?!!!
Yori: Did you mean dream? No, it’s real from now on we are living together!
I felt a nasty stench fill the kitchen and I noticed that smoke is coming from whatever it was Yori was cooking!
Ageha: You idiot, look what you have done!
Yori looked at his masterpiece and finally noticed that the food was burned.
Yori: I never said that I was a good cook!
Ageha: If you don’t know how to cook, WHY DID YOU COOK?!
Yori: I hoped it’ll make me happier, besides it’s the though that counts.
Ageha: Not in my case. Look how much food you wasted!!!
Yori: Sorry!
I looked at little pile ash that once was edible and sighed. This guy will bring me nothing but trouble, I have to get rid of him as fast as possible! But I have to clean up this mess.
Ageha: Since you ruined all the food, I’m going to market to buy new one!
Yori: I’ll go with you!
Ageha: NO FREAKING WAY!
Yori: Why not?
Ageha: You will sit here and clean up the mess you have made!
Yori: Okay, that sounds fair. I’m going to do my best!
Ageha: If you break something, I’m going to send you to hell!
Yori: Don’t worry, I won’t! You can go now without worries!
I dressed up and left, but I couldn’t help but feel worried. What if that idiot burns down my house? I honestly don’t know how one guy can bring so much trouble.
On my way back from market sombody bumped into me and all the food I have bought fell on the ground.

???: I’m so sorry! I wasn’t watching where I was going! Sorry!
Ageha: No, it’s okay..OMG! DRAGAN?!
Dragan: AGEHA?!

*flashback*
Teacher writes on board all the conditions for new project we needed to make. I was really excited since it was about thing you wanted to do in future and obviously it was an interesting theme. I couldn’t wait to start doing it, but then teacher announced something that would normally ruin everything.
Teacher: You will do this project in pairs, so please choose your pair now and tell me with who are you working together.
Everyone became even more excited only not me. I hated to work in pairs, because usually person who was in one pair with me didn’t want to see me and in the end I had to do all the work. But from this time on, I didn’t hate pair projects anymore.
Dragan: Hey, Ageha, let’s work together!
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Dragan: I can’t believe I’ll see you here! I though that after your grandparents death you were taken to orphanage!
Dragan was my classmate and the only person I respected expect my grandparents. He never pushed me away like others did. I have always respected him, because he respected me and he was also very smart. We both were top students in class.
Ageha: Well, I escaped and came to live in city on my own!
Dragan: On your own? You have lived alone for two years?
Ageha: Yeah, kind of!
Dragan: That’s amazing! But how did you survive?
Ageha: I made my own deck and now I’m a duelist.
Dragan: Duelist?! I would have never though that you would become a duelist, you never seemed to be interested in dueling.
Ageha: I started dueling only because of one certain monster card!
Dragan: Mind showing me it in duel?
Ageha: Sure, why not?!
Dragan: Then let’s duel!
Ageha: Let’s duel! I’ll go first! I summon Red-Eyes Wyvern in Attack position, set card face-down (Ring of Destruction) and end my turn.
Dragan: My turn! Draw! I summon Elemental Hero Woodsman in Defense position, set a card face-down (Hero Barrier) and end my turn!
Ageha: My turn! Draw! I summon tuner monster – Delta Flyer in Attack position. Next I activate Delta Flyer’s effect. Once per turn I can select 1 my monster on field and increase it’s level by 1. I select Red-Eyes Wyvern whose level is equal to5.
Dragan: Could it be?! Synchro Summon?!
Ageha: Yes! I tune level 3 Delta Flyer with level 5 Red-Eyes Wyvern. The rulers heartbeat will flow through air! Behold how burning flame takes shape of power. Synchro Summon! My very soul, Red Dragon Archfiend!
Dragan: Amazing! I have never seen a monster like that before!
Ageha: And you’ll never see a monster like this! Red Dragon Archfiend is one of the kind and he is the one who gave me hope to survive! Now, Red Dragon Archfiend attack Elemental Hero Woodsman! Sacred Blaze of Power!
Dragan: I activate Trap – Hero Barrier! If I control “Elemental Hero” monster I can negate one of your attacks!
Ageha: That won’t stop me for long! I end my turn!
Dragan: It’s my turn! Draw! During my Stand by phase I can activate Woodsman effect. I can add 1 Polymerization from Deck to my Hand. Now I activate Spell – Polymerization! I fuse Elemental Hero Avian and Elemental Hero Burstinatrix from my hand to Fusion Summon – Elemental Hero Flame Wingman in Defense position! I end my turn!
Ageha: Is that all you can do? My turn! Draw! Red Dragon Archfiend attack Elemental Hero Flame Wingman! Now, I activate Red Dragon Archfiends effect. When he attacks Defense position monster all Defense position monster on your side of field are destroyed! Flare of Destruction!
Elemetal Hero Flame Wingman and Elemental Hero Woodsman are destroyed and sent to grave.
Ageha: I end my turn!
Dragan: My turn! Draw! I summon Elemental Hero Clayman in Defense position! Next, I activate Spell – Meteor of Destruction! It inflicts 1000 damage to my opponent!I set a card (D-set) and end my turn!
Ageha's life points drop from 4000 to 3000.
Ageha: My turn! Draw! I activate spell – Enemy Controller. It allows to change battle position of one of your cards! I change Elemental Hero Clayman into Attack position! Red Dragon Archfiend attack Sparkman! Sacred Blaze of Power!
Elemental Hero Clayman is destroyed and Dragan’s life points drop from 4000 to 1800.
Dragan: I activate Trap – D-Set! When “Elemental Hero” monster is removed from field, I can add 1 “Elemental Hero” monster from my deck whose levels is equal to removed monsters level. I’ll add Elemental Hero Sparkman.
Ageha: I end my turn!
Dragan: My turn! Draw! It’s time to make things interesting! I summon The Light – Hex Sealed Fusion! I can substitute this monster for any 1 Fusion-Material monster for LIGHT Fusion monster. Next, I activate spell - Polymerization! I fuse The Light – Hex Sealed Fusion with Elemental Hero Sparkman to Fusion Summon – Elemental Hero Shining Flare Wingman!
Ageha: That monster is still no match for Red Dragon Archfiend!
Dragan: I think it is! I can increase attack of this monster by 300 for every “Elemental Hero” monster in my Graveyard. I have 5 and that means that Shining Flame Wingman’s attack is now 4000.
Ageha: 4000!?
Dragan: Elemental Hero Shining Flare Wingman attack Red Dragon Archfiend! Shining Flare Slash!
Red Dragon Archfiend is destroyed and Ageha’s life points drop from 3000 to 2000.
Dragan: I activate Shining Flare Wingman’s effect! If it destroys monster by battle then I can inflict damage to opposing player equal to destroyed monsters attack!
Ageha: I activate Petal Dragon’s effect from my hand! I can discard this monster to make effect damage become 0.
Dragan: You got lucky I see, but how are you going to win with your dragon gone?

Profile of third character and new card:
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Name: Dragan
Nicknames: Dragon
Age: 16
Sex: Male
Hometown: Seapuru town
Hair color: Black
Eye color: Deep brown
Family: Mother, Father, Older sister
Main Deck: Elemental Hero
Ace Monster: Elemental Hero Shining Flare Wingman
Key Card: Super Polymerization
Goal: To be the best

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Post  Lovelace 2011-07-13, 15:08

Another good chapter, and more +rep Smile
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Post  Ageha13 2011-07-15, 03:45

Chapter 4. Farewell peaceful life!

Ageha: It’s my turn! DRAW! I don’t intend to leave my field clean! I activate Spell – Stardust Shimmer. I can select 1 Synchro monster in my graveyard, remove from play monsters whose total level is equal to selected monsters level and Special Summon that monster.
Dragan: What?!
Ageha: I remove from play Red-Eyes Wyvern, Delta Flyer and Petal Dragon! Arise once more Red Dragon Archfiend! Next I activate Equip Spell – Silver Wing and equip it to Red Dragon Archfiend. With it’s help up to twice per turn if my dragon would be destroyed by battle it is not.
Dragan: Even if your dragon is back on field it is no match for my Shining Flare Wingman.
Ageha: We’ll see that! I end my turn!
Dragan: My turn! Draw! I activate R – Righteous Justice! It allows me to destroy Spell and Trap cards equal to number of face-up “Elemental Hero” monsters I control. Since I control 1, I can destroy one card. I choose to destroy Silver Wing.
Ageha: NO!
Dragan: Now, Elemental Hero Shining Flare Wingman attack Red Dragon Archfiend. Shining Flare Slash!
Ageha: I won’t let Red Dragon Archfiend be destroyed again! I activate trap – Ring of Destruction. It allows to destroy 1 monster on field and inflict damage to both players equal to ATK of that monster. I choose to destroy Shining Flare Wingman.
Elemental Hero Shining Flare Wingman is destroyed. Dragan’s and Ageha’s life points drop to 0.
Dragan: Wow! That was an amazing duel! You are really good duelist!
Ageha: Thanks! You are really good too!
Dragan: So how exactly are you living here all by yourself?
Ageha: By dueling mostly!
Dragan: I see, so where do you live?
Ageha: I have bought a house, come and visit if you like!
Dragan: Sure, why not?!
While we were walking to my house, Dragan told me about my old hometown and what has happened there. Nothing really changed after I left, since nobody cared about me anyways. My old house is still standing there and I could actually go back and live there, but since I already have grown used to life in here, I won’t go back. Finally we reached my home! Dragan looked surprised when he saw it!
Ageha: This is my house!
Dragan: It’s really big! Where did you get the money for such a big house!
Ageha: I just compete in lot of tournaments. The prize money is usually quite big and I haven’t lost even once. Well, until yesterday.
Dragan: That’s really amazing, but..
Dragan didn’t get to finish what he was saying, when Yori jumped out of front door and hugged me!
Yori: Ageha-chan! You’re back! I missed you so much!
Ageha: WHAT THE HELL ARE DOING!?
I quickly broke out of Yori’s grasp and pushed him 5 metres away from me!
Yori: But I just missed you so much, Ageha-chan!
Ageha: Don’t call me like that!
Dragan: Is that your boyfriend?
Ageha: NO WAY! Yori just lives with me, because I lost a bet!
Dragan: Oh that’s what you meant until yesterday! Well, I think it’s best if I leave now, my bus will come soon.
Yori: Yes, leave faster please!
Ageha: Shut up! Nobody asked you anything!
Dragan: Anyway, I hope you stay well Ageha and here’s a little gift for you!
He hands over a card with a monster on it. It’s Dragon Knight Draco-Equiste!
Ageha: A card? I can’t take it! It’s yours!
Dragan: It’s okay! I can’t use it anyway! Besides this card fits you well!
I looked at card that Dragan gave me. It was a beautiful blue Dragon Knight with big sword in it’s arm. This card can be a big power-up for my deck. I quickly put in Dragon Knight into my deck with the right card that is needed to summon it.
Dragan: Stay well, Ageha! And you there! Yori!
Yori: What is it?
Dragan: Take care of her!
Ageha: WHAT!?
Yori: I will!
Yori’s expression was really serious and for a moment there I believed it! But there’s no way that this guy could be serious. He is just lying all the time to get what he wants.
Dragan waved at me and then left. At that moment I didn’t know if I see him ever again, but I was glad that I meet him. He reminded me how nice my grandparents were.

Yori: Who was that guy?
Ageha: My old classmate.
Yori: You went to school?!
Ageha: Of course I went to school! Who do you think I am?
Yori: Sorry, I just don’t know much about you! How about you tell me more?
Ageha: No.
Yori: Why not?
Ageha: Because you are annoying me!
Yori: You are mean!
Ageha: I never said that I was nice.
Yori: Well, we have a lot of time to spend together, so I will find out more about you anyway.
Ageha: Yeah, right! Now let’s go inside and see what else you have broken!
I expected that my entire kitchen will be turned into war zone, but it was all clean!
Ageha: You actually cleaned it up!
Yori: Of course I did!
A loud growl came from Yori’s stomach. That duel with Dragan must have lasted longer then I thought.
Yori: Sorry, I haven’t eaten anything yet!
Ageha: Sit down, I’ll quickly make something!
Yori: Wow, Ageha-chan, you are actually a really nice person!
Ageha: Well, I can’t just let you die from hunger.
I quickly made some pasta for Yori and myself and somehow it felt nice to eat together with someone. Food seemed to taste little bit better then it usually does!
Yori: You are amazing cook! This is delicious!
Before I could answer Yori I heard a loud explosion coming from forest that wasn’t far from my house! Smoke showed up from the forest, but it wasn’t smoke from fire. It was black just like dirt! Smoke from fire is white or little grayish, but definetly not that black.
Ageha: What was that?
Me and Yori ran outside to look closer at what happened. Place where something exploded wasn’t too far from here.
Yori: Let’s go and look what was that!
Ageha: Okay!
We ran as fast as we could through the forest to see what have happened! When reached the place where the place of explosion should be, the smoke was all gone and there was no sign of anything that could be related to explosion! There were two men dressed up in dark cloaks and an injured guy with short, silver hair lying on the ground.
Cloaked man 1: Oh, no! Someone have noticed the smoke!
Cloaked man 2: It’s no matter we can take care of those two!
Yori: Who are you and what did just happen?
Cloaked men 1: Us? Well, I guess I could tell you since soon you will be one of us! We are Shadow Riders!
Ageha: Shadow Riders?
Cloaked man 2: Yes, that’s right! And now that we have told you that, we cannot let you leave without a duel!
Ageha: What? A duel?
A guy that was lying on ground, now looked at me and I saw pain and terror in his expression! What did these men do to him?
Injured guy: You must run!
Yori: Run?
Injured guy: Quickly! Run while you can!
Suddenly mine and Yori’s duel disk activated on their own! Everything around turned dark and a circle of blue fire surrounded me, Yori and both men in dark cloaks!
Yori: What is happening here?
Injured guy: Oh no! It’s too late now!
Cloaked man 1: Duel! And the bet will be high! If you lose then you’ll become slaves of Shadow Riders forever!
Ageha: Slaves? And happens if we win?
Cloaked man 2: That shall never happen!
Ageha: We’ll see that!
Yori: Let’s rev it up!

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Name: Damir Matsumoto
Nickname: Damir-sama
Age: 18
Sex: male
Hometown: Corona City
Hair color: Silver
Eye color: Golden
Family: Great grandmother and younger brother
Likes: Motorbikes, Women, Hitting cars and buses with water baloons...
Dislikes: Chores, School
Main Deck: Lightsworns
Ace Monster: Judgement Dragon
Key Card: Ryko, the Lightsworn Hunter
Goal: To become a number 1 duelist in the world and to marry a nice girl

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Post  Ageha13 2011-07-16, 08:03

Chapter 5. Shadow Riders!

Yori: I’ll start then! By sending 1 monster card from my hand to graveyard I can Special Summon this monster from my hand. I send to grave Quillbolt Hedgehog to Special Summon tuner monster Quickdraw Synchron! Next I tune level 5 Quickdraw Synchron with level 2 Quillbolt Hedgehog to Synchro Summon – Junk Archer! I set a card face-down (One for One) and end my turn!
Cloaked man 1: It’s my turn! Draw! I activate Field Spell – Pandemonium! With this card on field neither player has to pay for “Archfiend” monster during their Standby Phase. Next I summon Darkbishop Archfiend in Attack position, set a card (Negate Attack) and end my turn!
Yori: Those Archfiends seem awfully familiar!
Cloaked man 1: What are you talking about?
Ageha: You’ll see that soon! My turn! Draw! I summon Black Cave Dragon in Attack position! When Black Cave Dragon is Normal Summoned I can Special Summon level 4 or lower Dragon-type tuner monster from my hand! I Special Summon tuner monster Debris Dragon from my hand.
Yori: Nice one, Ageha-chan! Show them what you’ve got!
Ageha: I tune level 4 Debris Dragon with level 4 Black Cave Dragon! The rulers heartbeat will flow through air! Behold how burning flame takes shape of power. Synchro Summon! My very soul, Red Dragon Archfiend!
Cloaked man 2: Red Dragon Archfiend?! So you’re that little thief who stole it from us two years ago!
Both men took down their cloaks to reveal their faces. I was surprised to find out that I know them! They were fighting each other two years ago for Red Dragon Archfiend!
Cloaked man 1: I guess you don’t even know our name’s! My name is Vincent and my partner here is Tao and now we would like our card back!
Ageha: Sorry to disappoint you, but Red Dragon Archfiend is now mine! If you want to get it back, you will have to kill me first!
Vincent: That is fine by me!
Yori: But not by me! I won’t let you hurt Ageha!
Ageha: I can take of myself!
Vincent: Maybe continue the duel and leave your lovers quarrels for later!
Ageha: HE IS NOT MY BOYFRIEND!
Yori: Ageha!
Ageha: What is it?
Yori: Use Junk Archer!
Ageha: I don’t really want to do that, but okay! I activate Junk Archer’s effect, once per turn I can remove from play one of my opponents monsters! Monster who is removed by this effect returns to field at the End Phase! I choose to remove from play Darkbishop Archfiend! Dimensional Arrow!
Vincent: Not so fast! I activate Darkbishop Archfiend’s effect. When an effect that targets “Archfiend” monster is activated I can roll a six-sided die. If result is 1, 3 or 6, effect is negated and card destroyed!
Ageha: What?!
Vincent: It seems that luck is not on your side! Die result is 3!
Junk Archer is destroyed and sent to graveyard!
Ageha: I still have Red Dragon Archfiend! Attack! Sacred Blaze of Power!
Vincent: I activate Trap – Negate Attack! It negates your attack and ends the battle Phase!
Ageha: I set card face-down (Red Screen) and end my turn!
Tao: It’s my turn! Draw! I release Darkbishop Archfiend to summon Skull Archfiend of Lighting! Next I activate Equip Spell – Dark Aura and equip it to Skull Archfiend of Lighting. It’s ATK is increase by 500, DEF is decreased by 200 and it can’t be destroyed in battle with a monster that has same ATK.
Ageha: WHAT!? NO!
Tao: Skull Archfiend of Lightning attack Red Dragon Archfiend! Lighting Nightmare!
Red Dragon Archfiend is destroyed and sent to graveyard.
Tao: You cannot win against us no matter how hard you try!
Yori: We’ll see that! It’s my turn now! Draw! I summon Synchron Explorer and activate it’s effect! When this monster is Normal Summoned I can select and Special summon 1 “Synchron” monster from my graveyard with it’s effect negated! I Special Summon tuner monster Quickdraw Synchron! Then, I activate a Spell – Double Summon! It allows me to Normal summon a monster one more time this turn! I summon Tuningware!
Ageha: Somehow I’m glad that you are on my side this time!
Yori: I tune level 5 Quickdraw Synchron with level 2 Synchron Explorer and level 1 Tuningware! Gathering wishes will become a new shining star! Become the path its light shines upon! Synchro Summon! Take flight, Stardust Dragon!
Vincent: That dragon has no chance against Skull Archfiend of Lighting!
Yori: That’s what you think! I activate Tuningware’s effect! If it’s send to graveyard for Synchro Summon, I can draw one card as a bonus! I set a card face-down (Cosmic Blast) and end my turn!
Vincent: In the end you did nothing! My turn! Draw! It’s time to get rid of that little dragon of yours!
Ageha: I won’t allow it! I activate Trap – Red Screen! By paying 1000 life points during each of my Standby Phases I can stop your monsters from declaring attack!
Vincent: Pss! That won’t stop me for long! I end my turn!
Ageha: My turn! DRAW! It’s time to use my new strength given from an old friend! I activate a Spell – Miracle Synchro Fusion! By removing from play, from my side of the field or graveyard, Fusion Material monsters listed on Fusion Monster card that list Synchro monster as one of Fusion Material monsters, I can Special Summon that Fusion monster!
Yori: That guys card actually came in handy!
Ageha: Is it okay, if I use your monster?
Yori: Of course! You don’t have to ask!
Ageha: I remove from play Red Dragon Archfiend and Junk Archer to Fusion summon – Dragon Knight Draco-Equiste!
Tao: No way! Thhh! Doesn’t matter! You still can’t win!
Ageha: I don’t think so! Dragon Knight Draco-Equiste attack Skull Archfiend of Lighting! Javelin Blast!
Skull Archfiend of Lighting is destroyed! Vincent’s and Tao’s life points drop from 4000 to 3800.
Ageha: Now, Stardust Dragon attack their life points directly! Shooting Sonic!
Their life points drop from 3800 to 1300.
Vincent: Just what we wanted!
Ageha: What!?
Vincent: I Special Summon Gorz The Emmisary of Darkness. When I take battle damage and if I control no cards I can Special Summon this card and Emmisary of Darkness token, whose ATK is equal to damage I’ve taken. I took 2500 damage from Stardust’s attack so Emmissary of Darkness Token’s ATK is equal to 2500.
Ageha: Damn! I set a two cards face-down (Shadow Spell, Call of The Haunted)! During my End Phase I pay 1000 life points to keep Red Screen on the field and end my turn!
Ageha’s and Yori’s life points drop from 4000 to 3000.
Tao: My turn! Draw! I summon tuner monster Sinister Sprocket in Defense position! Next, I tune level 1 Sinister Sprocket with level 7 Emmisary of Darkness token to Synchro Summon – Thought Ruler Archfiend!
Ageha: I activate Trap – Shadow Spell! I can select one monster one field and decrease ATK of that monster by 700. Selected monster cannot declare attack!
Tao: I don’t think so! I activate Thought Ruler Archfiend’s effect! By paying 1000 life points I can negate activation of card that targets Psychic-type monster and destroy that card!
Vincent’s and Tao’s life points drop from 1300 to 300. Shadow Spell is destroyed.
Tao: Next I activate Spell – Mystical Space Typhoon to destroy Red Screen! Thought Ruler Archfiend attack Stardust Dragon! Archfiend Burst!
Stardust is destroyed and our life points reduce from 3000 to 2800.
Tao: I activate Thought Ruler Archfiend’s effect! When it destroys monster by battle, I regain life points equal to ATK of destroyed monster.
Opponent’s life points increase from 300 to 2800.
Yori: Not for long! I activate trap - Cosmic Blast! When a Dragon-type Synchro monster is removed from field I can inflict damage to opponent equal to ATK of that monster!
Tao: What?!
Opponent’s life points reduce to 300 again.
Tao: Doesn’t matter! I end my turn!
Yori: It’s my turn! Draw! Hmmm….
Tao: What is it?! Out of your cheap tricks already? Hahaha!
Yori: Phhh! They were never cheap! If only I had Stardust now!
Ageha: Yori, use my set card!
Yori: Is it okay?
Ageha: Of course! Right now we fight together, like it or not!
Yori: Okay! Lend me your strength then! I activate trap – Call of The Haunted! It allows me to summon 1 monster from my graveyard in Attack position! I summon Stardust Dragon! Next I summon miracle tuner monster – Majestic Dragon!
Tao: Miracle tuner?! That thing has 0 ATK and DEF! What can it do?!
Ageha: It brings miracles!
Tao: Wha?!
Yori: I activate Boost Warrior’s effect from my hand! If I have tuner monster on field, I can Special Summon this monster from my hand! Come, Boost Warrior! I tune level 1 Majestic Dragon with level 1 Boost Warrior and level 8 Stardust dragon!
Vincent: Synchro Summon with Synchro monster?!!
Yori: Yes! Gathering starlight will enlighten a new miracle! Become the path its light shines upon! Synchro Summon! Arrive in light, Majestic Star Dragon! I activate Majestic Star Dragon’s effect! Once per turn I can negate effect of one face-up monster and apply it to this card. I negate Thought Ruler Archfiend’s effect!
Vincent: No way! We cannot lose!
Yori: I think you can! Ageha, let’s do this together!
I couldn’t believe what he was saying! Together! I looked him deep in eyes and I could see that his words came from heart! I smiled a little and nodded my head!
Yori: Majestic Star Dragon attack Thought Ruler Archfiend!
Yori and Ageha: Shooting Blaster Sonic!
Thought Ruler Archfiend is destroyed and opponents life points drop to 0.
Both Vincent and Tao started screaming the same moment their life points reached 0!
Vincent: Please Master! Spare us!
Tao: We promise we won’t let you down no more!
Suddenly a dark figure appeared behind them. It wasn’t a human, it looked more like a ghost, since it was transparent.
Dark voice: You are no use to me no more!
The next moment both of them disappeared into dark only leaving behind their scream echoes! The dark figure looked me right into eyes and then it started to laugh!
Dark voice: So you are the one who took Red Dragon Archfiend! That moment when you took that card in your hand you have doomed yourself!
Ageha: Doomed?!
Dark voice: Red Dragon Archfiend is going to destroy you!
Dark figure disappeared just as fast as it appeared. Dark mist cleared and the circle of blue flame disappeared!
Yori: What is that suppose to mean?
Ageha: I don’t know!
Yori: What should we do with that guy now?
He pointed at guy who injured was lying on ground.
Ageha: We can’t just leave him here! Let’s carry him to my house!
Yori: Agreed!
We carefully lifted that guy up and he regained cautiousness. He looked really weak and also little scared.
Guy: You…
Ageha: Don’t worry! We won’t hurt you; we are going to help you!
Guy: Thank you! My name is Damir!
He lost consciousness again and we slowly carried him back to my house!

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Post  Risewing 2011-07-16, 23:42

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Post  Ageha13 2011-07-18, 02:53

Chapter 6. Morgrim appears!

When we got Damir to my house, I carefully cleaned and bandaged his wounds and put him to sleep in one of free bedrooms. I sent Yori to sleep and myself stayed up to watch over Damir in case he wakes up. All these events made me thinking. I wonder what happened with Damir? And what happened to those two men that claimed to be Shadow Riders? Are they dead? And most importantly what did that Dark figure meant when he said that Red Dragon Archfiend will destroy me? I can’t imagine that Red Dragon Archfiend would turn against me! I have been together with him for two years now and Red Dragon Archfiend has never let me down!
Suddenly I noticed that Damir is slowly starting to wake up.

Damir: Where am I?
Ageha: Don’t worry! You’re save in my house.
Damir: What happened to Shadow Riders?
Ageha: I’m not sure myself, after we defeated them, a dark figured appeared and like swallowed them into darkness.
Damir: They are dead then!
Ageha: Dead?!
Damir: Yes! Morgrim kills anyone who is useless to him!
Ageha: Morgrim?! Who is he?
Damir: He is one of five leaders of Shadow Riders!
Ageha: There are five creepy guys like him!
Damir: Yeah, but I do not know anything about other. Morgrim is the only one who dared to show his face! Damn, I can’t believe that I almost got killed there! Angie will be so mad when she finds out about this!
Ageha: Angie? Is she your girlfriend?
Damir: Yeah! Please, don’t tell her about what happened!
Ageha: I won’t!
Damir: Thanks! By the way, can I stay in your house till I heal? If my grandma sees that I’m all beaten up like this, she will never let me out again!
Ageha: Won’t she be worried that you are away from home for so long?
Damir: No, she is fine as long as I’m not injured!
Ageha: Oh, then you can stay! You definitely won’t cause as many problems as that guy!
Damir: That guy?! Oh, your boyfriend!
Ageha: HE IS NOT MY BOYFRIEND!
Damir: Hahaha! Anyway, what is your name then?
Ageha: My name is Ageha and the other guy is Yori.
Damir: Nice to meet you then!
Ageha: It’s really late! It’s better if you go back to sleep.
Damir: Okay. Wait! Then why are you up so late?
Ageha: Just to check that you are alright!
Damir: Oh! You sure are nice!
Ageha: Not really! Well, good night!
Damir: Good night!
I quietly went to my room to sleep. Damir is a really good guy, much better then Yori! His girlfriend must be a really lucky girl!
At night I had a nightmare. I was in middle of forest and everything seemed peaceful at beginning, but then a flames swallowed forest and surrounded me. Out of middle of flames Red Dragon Archfiend arose! He looked at me and let out a terrible roar. After a while he slowly started to change….

Yori: AGEHA-CHAN! WAKE UP!
Ageha! Wha?!
I almost fell out of bed from sudden waking. Yori was standing next to my bed and looking at me with his stupid expression.
Yori: Ageha, I’m hungry! Make me something to eat!
Ageha: I’m not your personal cook and what the hell are you doing in my room?
Yori: I came to wake you up, because I’m hungry!
Ageha: Couldn’t you wait till I wake up?
Yori: No!
Ageha: You little..! Fine I’m waking up! But now! GET THE HELL OUT OF MY ROOM!
I kicked Yori out and changed my clothes. I wonder what was that dream about? And what was Red Dragon Archfiend changing into? Whatever it was, I have a feeling that I don’t like.
After feeding annoying Yori, I decided to check on Damir. When I entered in his room he was checking some books from shelves.
Ageha: Oh, you are up already!
Damir: Yeah! Sorry, that I took these books! I was kind of bored!
Ageha: It’s okay! You can take them if you want. I wanted to call you for breakfast!
Damir: Yeah, I’m coming!
Even though still injured, Damir looked much better then yesterday. He seemed in high spirits, which I couldn’t say about Yori. He suddenly got all gloomy, which is weird for this guy who always runs around like a puppy dog.
Damir: So, Ageha since you are a duelist, how about we duel?
Ageha: Su…
Yori: Duel me first!
Ageha: Oi, Yori!
Damir: It’s okay! Let’s duel!
Ageha: Is it okay to duel? You are still injured.
Damir: It’s okay!
Yori: Well, then... Let’s rev it up!
We all went outside, Yori on one side of street, Damir on other and me in middle like a judge.
Damir: I’ll go first! I summon tuner monster Belle, The Lightsworn Archer in Defense position! I set one card face-down (Lightsworn Barrier) and activate Belle’s effect! Once per turn I can send top 2 cards of my deck to graveyard (Pot of Duality; Wulf, Lightsworn Beast) to inflict 500 damage for each spell and trap card I control!
Yori’s life points drop from 4000 to 3500.
Damir: Next, I activate Wulf, Lightsworn Beast’s effect. When this card is sent from deck to graveyard I can Special Summon it! Come forth, Wulf, Lightsworn Beast! I end my turn!
Wow! Damir is really amazing duelist! Rarely which duelists can inflict damage in their first turn. Damir must be experienced.
Yori: It’s my turn! Draw! I summon Speed Warrior in Attack position! During the Battle Phase of turn this monster was Normal Summoned its ATK is doubled! Now Speed Warrior attack Belle, The Lightsworn Archer!
Belle, The Lightsworn Archer is destroyed and sent to graveyard.
Damir: I activate Belle’s second effect! When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to graveyard, I can Special Summon up to 2 Belle, Lightsworn Archer from my deck! I summon 2 Belle, The Lightsworn Archer in Defense position.
Yori: What?! Now there are even more of them! I set two cards (Scrap-Iron Scarecrow; Half or Nothing) and end my turn!
Damir: It’s my turn! Draw! I activate Continuous Spell – Realm of Light! Each time I send cards from my deck to graveyard I can place 1 “Shine” counter on this card. All “Lightsworn” monsters gain 100 ATK for each counter on this card! Now, I activate Belle’s effect! By sending top 2 cards of deck to graveyard (Call of The Haunted; Lumina, The Lightsworn Summoner) I can inflict 500 damage for each spell and trap I control and Realm of Light gains 1 “Shine” counter.
Yori’s life points drop from 3500 to 2500.
Damir: Now, I tune level 2 Belle, The Lightsworn Archer with level 4 Wulf, The Lightsworn Beast to Synchro Summon – Lilia, Lightsworn Magician! Next, I activate Lilia’s effect! I can send top 3 cards (Jenis, Lightsworn Mender; Dark Bribe; Shira, Lightsworn Spirit) of my deck to graveyard to destroy 1 spell or trap card on field! I choose to destroy second card! And also Realm of Light gains another “Shine” counter.
Half or Nothing is destroyed and sent to graveyard.
Damir: I switch Belle to attack position. Lilia attack Speed Warrior! Light Magic Burst!
Yori: I activate Trap – Scrap-Iron Scarecrow! It allows me to negate one attack each turn and re-set this card!
Damir: What?! Now that’s something unseen before! Now then, it’s time to make things more interesting!
Yori: Interesting?
Damir: I tune level 2 Belle, The Lightsworn Archer with level 6 Lilia, Lightsworn Magician! The light will shine on bright future of truth! Protect those who we were sworn to protect! Synchro Summon! Appear before me, Noran Ancient Dragon of Lightsworn!
Ageha: Wow! Amazing!
Damir: During the End Phase, when Noran is on the field I have to send top 3 cards of my deck to graveyard (Dust Tornado; Ryko, The Lightsworn Hunter; Lighting Vortex) and Realm of Light gains third counter. I end my turn!
Yori: It’s my turn! Draw! I summon tuner monster Hyper Synchron in Attack position! Next I activate Spell – Double Summon! It allows me to Normal summon one more time this turn. I summon Shield Wing in Defense position!
Damir: Synchro Summon huh? Nice to see that you have some tricks too!
Yori: Of course! I tune level 4 Hyper Synchron with level 2 Speed Warrior and level 2 Shield Wing! Gathering wishes will become a new shining star! Become the path its light shines upon! Synchro Summon! Take flight, Stardust Dragon!
Damir: Wow! Amazing dragon, but it can’t fight against Noran!
Yori: I think it can! I activate Hyper Synchron’s effect! When it’s sent to graveyard for Synchro Summon of Dragon-type monster, that monster gains 800 ATK.
Damir: What?!
Yori: Stardust Dragon attack Noran, Ancient Dragon of Lightsworn! Shooting Sonic!
Suddenly duel stopped and everything around became covered in dark mist!
Ageha: What happened?
Damir: I don’t know! Duel just stopped now!
Then a dark figure appeared not too far from me and looked me into eyes. His eyes where dark as night without stars! Somehow beautiful and yet deadly!
Damir: Morgrim!?
Yori: What?! It’s him?
Morgrim: We meet again, Ageha!
Ageha: Did you miss me THAT much?
Morgrim: Well I wanted to pay you and Red Dragon Archfiend a visit!
Ageha: Is that so?
Morgrim: Yes! I thought that maybe we could duel!
Damir: Ageha don’t do it! That guy is dangerous!
Ageha: I can beat him! Let’s duel!

New cards I created:
Burning Soul! 381529a Burning Soul! 381529i Burning Soul! 381529


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Post  Gorz 2011-07-18, 04:04

Noran is kinda busted. He would get instabanned.
His effect should be...


Effect wrote:When this card attacks increase its ATK by 400 for every "Lightsworn" Monster in your graveyard until the end of the Battle Phase. Your opponent can not select another "Lightsworn" as an attack target. During your End Phase send the top 5 Cards to the graveyard or banish this target. You can only control 1 face-up "Noran, Ancient Dragon of Lightsworn"

I like the last effect, because he can't deck you out and is still extremely balanced.

I'm liking the story so far. Keep it up!

Edit - I wouldn't mind being in the Fan Fic. PM me and I'll get all the info for you on the character.


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Post  Ageha13 2011-07-18, 04:15

@Gorz Thanks for suggestion for my card! I changed effect a little.
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Chapter 7. Betrayal!

Morgrim: Well, since you are a girl, I’ll allow you to go first!
Ageha: As you wish then! Draw! I summon Blizzard Dragon in Attack position! Then set a card face-down (Sakuretsu Armor) and end my turn!
Morgrim: My turn! Draw! I activate Field Spell – Pandemonium! I’m pretty sure you already know what it does!
Ageha: Yes, indeed I do! So you have Archfiend Deck just like those guys yesterday!
Morgrim: Of course! You have to know that in this deck is made especially for Red Dragon Archfiend!
Ageha: It’s a shame that your deck fails, since Red Dragon Archfiend is with me!
Morgrim: Not for long! I summon Archfiend General in Attack position! If there isn’t Pandemonium on field this monster is destroyed! Now, Archfiend General attack Blizzard Dragon!
Ageha: I activate Trap – Sakuretsu Armor! When opponent monster declares attack, I can destroy the attacking monster!
Archfiend General is destroyed and sent to graveyard.
Morgrim: It’s nice to see, that you won’t give up so easy! That makes things more interesting! I set two cards (Tuner’s Scheme; Call of The haunted) and end my turn!
Ageha: It’s my turn now! Draw! I summon tuner monster Influence Dragon in Attack position! Next I tune level 3 Influence Dragon with level 4 Blizzard Dragon! The ruler's shouts echo throughout! Hammer of Victory, shatter the very earth! Synchro Summon! Flap your wings, Exploder Dragonwing!
Morgrim: A Synchro Summon! How suprising, it’s not Red Dragon Archfiend!
Ageha: Don’t worry, you’ll see him soon enough! Now, Exploder Dragonwing attack him directly! King Storm!
Morgrim’s life points drop from 4000 to 1600.
Ageha: I end my turn!
Morgrim: It’s my turn! Draw! I activate Trap – Call of The Haunted! It allows to Special Summon 1 monster from my graveyard in Attack position. I Special Summon Archfiend General! Next, I release Archfiend General to summon Dark Ruler Ha Des! Dark Ruler Ha Des attack Exploder Dragonwing! Punch of Darkness!
Exploder Dragonwing is destroyed and Ageha’s life points drop from 4000 to 3950.
Ageha: That is nothing!
Morgrim: Oh, you’ll see something great real soon! Don’t worry! I end my turn!
Ageha: My turn! Draw! When my opponent controls a monster and I control no monsters I can Special Summon Vice Dragon from my hand! In this case his original attack is halved. Next I summon tuner monster Dark Resonator in Attack position!
Morgrim: So it begins!
Ageha: Wrong, it ends! I activate a Spell – Hammer Shot! It allows me to destroy monster with highest ATK on the field, which is Dark Ruler Ha Des!
Dark Ruler Ha Des is destroyed and sent to graveyard!
Ageha: Now, I tune level 3 Dark Resonator with level 5 Vice Dragon! The rulers heartbeat will flow through air! Behold how burning flame takes shape of power. Synchro Summon! My very soul, Red Dragon Archfiend!
Morgrim: HAHAHA! I activate Trap – Tuner’s Scheme! When my opponent Synchro summons a monster, I can take control of that monster!
Ageha: NO! RED DRAGON ARCHFIEND!
Morgrim: Red Dragon Archfiend is now MINE!
Ageha: I won’t leave it that way! I set a card (Mirror Force) and end my turn!
Morgrim: My turn! Draw! I summon tuner monster Dark Tinker in Attack position! Now, I tune level 2 Dark Tinker with level 8 Red Dragon Archfiend!
Ageha: WHAT?! Impossible!
Morgrim: The blaze of power will turn into darkness! Destroy everything that stands in your path! Synchro Summon! Arise in darkness, Wicked Dragon Archfiend! Unfortunately for you Wicked Dragon Archfiend can’t be destroyed by Spell and Trap card effects!
Ageha: HOW IS THAT POSSIBLE!?
Morgrim: You have forgotten that Red Dragon Archfiend was mine to begin with! And now I’m going to destroy you completely!
Ageha: No! I…
Morgrim: You have nothing left! Even your little friends have fled in fear, your ace monster has betrayed you! What can you do?! Hahaha!
I looked around and saw that I really had nothing! Yori and Damir are nowhere to be found! Red Dragon Archfiend has turned against me! I’m done for!
Morgrim: Don’t worry! I won’t kill you! I’m nice you see! You are going to be my eternal servant! Wicked Dragon Archfiend attack Ageha directly! Dark Flare of Hatred!
Damir: Oh no! You won’t!
Suddenly Damir and Yori flew from sky on a D-Wheel and landed right in front of me! Yori quickly pulled me on D-Wheel and Damir drove away before Wicked Dragon Archfiend could finish me off!
Yori: Sorry, Morgrim! But we need this girl so you’ll have to find yourself another eternal slave! See ya!
Morgrim: You can run all you want, but you can’t hide! I will get you, Ageha! Hahaha!
Damir drove me to his home where his grandmother gave me a bath and warm blanket. I was in shock after losing Red Dragon Archfiend! He was my ace monster! Without him I’m totally weak and defensless. I can’t duel without him!
Yori: Ageha, cheer up! I know that Red Dragon Archfiend meant lot to you, but you just can’t lock yourself up because you lost him! You need to move on!
Damir: He is right! You should stand up and fight! Find a new power!
Ageha: Sorry, you’re right! I will fight!
Yori: Now that’s the Ageha I know!
Ageha: And I will get Red Dragon Archfiend back!
Yori: WHAT?! Are you crazy? Morgrim is really strong! You don’t stand a chance against him without Red Dragon Archfiend!!!
Damir: You are NOT helping!
Ageha: Yes I know, but I HAVE TO TRY! Red Dragon Archfiend is not bad! I know it! He helped me a lot of times! And I won’t let him down! I will get him back no matter what!
Yori: Ageha!
Damir: It can’t be helped then! I’ll help you!
Yori: Me too! You will need all the help you can get!
Ageha: Thank you! But I’ll have to find a new strength before I fight Morgrim!
Damir’s grandmother: You should go to Aero City then!
Ageha: Aero city?
Damir’s grandmother: Yes! It’s a beautiful city and it’s famous for having good duelists!
Damir: Wow, granma! How did you know that?
Damir’s grandmother: I know a lot of things! I’m already really old you know!
Ageha: Then I’m going to Aero City!
Yori: I’m going with you!
Damir: And how do you two intend to get there?
Ageha: Umm…how can we get there?
Damir: By D-Wheel!
Ageha: D-Wheel? I don’t have a D-Wheel!
Yori: Me either!
Damir: Can’t be helped then! I’ll lend you some!
Ageha: Really?
Damir: Yes! You have ridden D-Wheel before right?
Ageha: Yes, I have! What about you Yori?
Yori: Of course I have!
Damir: Well, then problem settled! Ageha you can take my D-Wheel and you Yori can take the other D-Wheel in my garage!
Ageha: You have two?
Damir: Yeah, but second one isn’t that good!
Yori: It’s fine as long as it can get us to Aero city!
Damir’s grandmother: Yes, but now it’s time to go to sleep! You have long and hard journey ahead!
Ageha: Ok! Thank you for taking care of us!
Damir: No problem! I’m always glad to help out a friend! Besides you saved my life there!
Ageha: I just couldn’t leave you there!
Yori: Ageha-chan is just too kind, but she can’t admit it!
Ageha: How many times have I told you! DON’T CALL ME LIKE THAT!
Damir: HAHAHA! You two are interesting. Anyway, good luck!

New evolution of Red Dragon Archfiend:
Burning Soul! 381529
Effect: 1 DARK tuner monster + "Red Dragon Archfiend"
Once per turn you can discard one card to destroy one monster your opponent controls and inflict damage equal to half of that monsters ATK. This monster can't declare attack during turn you activate this effect.This card cannot be destroyed by Spell or Trap card effects.



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Post  Gorz 2011-07-19, 08:51

Great Chapter. Liking where the story is going. ^^
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Post  Ageha13 2011-07-20, 09:15

Chapter 8. Tournament in Aero City!

Me and Yori are riding on D-Wheels over big bridge that separates Aero City from the rest of world. Aero city was like a big island in middle of lake and it was really beautiful! Only way to get there was by D-Wheel and that is why this city is full of Turbo duelists! I was riding a fast, black and purple D-Wheel, while Yori had an old brown D-Wheel! But it worked well so it was fine with him.
Ageha: Remind me! Why are you coming with me?
Yori: Because you asked me to come!
Ageha: STOP TALKING BUL****T!
Yori: Sorry! Actually Damir couldn’t come because his girlfriend would be worried!
Ageha: That doesn’t explain why are you coming with me!
Yori: Because you can’t go alone! Someone has to watch over you!
Ageha: Like I need your watch over! I’ll get in more trouble with you then without you!
Yori: Aww! Don’t say that Ageha-chan!
Ageha: I told you already! DON’T CALL ME AGEHA-CHAN!
Finally we reached the city of Aero. It was so beautiful! There were a lot of big buildings, but also all kind of trees and flowers around! Seemed like the city was shining with radiance of flowers!
Yori: Well, firstly we should find some place to stay!
Ageha: Agreed! But where could we stay?
Yori: I dunno….
?????: Yori, is that you?
Yori: Genou?
A guy with green eyes and black hair ran up to Yori and gave him a handshake.
Ageha: Do you know each other?

Yori: Know? We are childhood friends!
Ageha: Wha?
Yori: Genou this is my friend Ageha, Ageha my friend Genou!
Ageha: I’m not your friend and nice to meet you, Genou!
Genou: It’s nice to meet you to! Anyway, what are you doing here Yori?
Yori: I and Ageha came in search of new power and now we need place to spend the night!
Genou: You can stay at my place then!
Ageha: Is it okay?
Genou: Of course! But for what kind of power are you looking for?
Ageha: Power to return back my ace monster!
Genou: I see! Dueling! Why don’t you participate in Aero City Tournament then?
Ageha: Tournament?
Genou: Yes! Winner gets a new rare Synchro monster card and status of Aero City champion!
Ageha: Where can I sign up?
Genou: Right there, across the street!
Ageha: Thanks!
I quickly signed up for tournament! I was in luck, because today is last day I could sign up and tournament is starting tomorrow. At beginning Yori wanted to participate too, but I didn’t him do it! I wanted to do it by myself! I have to get Red Dragon Archfiend back with my own strength.
In sign up I had to duel some kind of judge to determinate if I can even participate in tournament. Of course, I passed the test without any problems. Totally this tournament has 64 participants that passed the test.
At the evening I went to room that Genou showed to me and looked through my deck to see what I can do about lost of Red Dragon Archfiend. I realized that it might be harder to win this tournament then I think. I don’t have any level 8 Synchro monster to replace Red Dragon Archfiend with! Suddenly I heard a knock to my door!

Genou: Can I come in?
Ageha: Yes, of course!
Genou: I heard from Yori what happened with Red Dragon Archfiend, so I decided to give you this card!
He gave me a card of Butterfly Dragon, Choru. Level 8 Synchro monster!
Ageha: I can’t take this!
Genou: Take it! I myself don’t need it! I have dragon of my own!
Ageha: But….
Genou: You don’t have a card to replace Red Dragon Archfiend with right?
Ageha: Yes, but…
Genou: Use this card! I would be happy to see you use it!
Ageha: I…Okay! Thank you!
Genou: No problem! I have to help a friend here! Good luck!
Ageha: Thank you!
Genou left and I carefully looked at my new card. Butterfly Dragon, Choru wasn’t as strong as Red Dragon Archfiend, but it had a really good effect and it looked really nice too! With this card I can win!
Next day my first opponent for tournament was announced and times when duels will happen was set. My duel was first one to happen!

Jiro: Welcome, welcome, ladies and gentlemen, to 21st Aero City Tournament! Get ready to see the most spectacular duels ever!!! I’m your host tonight – Jiro!
Crowd seemed to be very energic and happy that the tournament is about to start. People in this city enjoy dueling a lot!
Jiro: All duels will take place in Aero City stadium! Duelists have a choice to duel Normal duels or Turbo duels! It doesn’t matter which choose if you lose your duel, you are out of this tournament! The winner of this tournament will get status of Champion of Aero City and this rare card!!!
On big screen a monster card was shown – Northen Light Dragon!
Ageha: This is the card I need to Red Dragon Archfiend back!!!
Yori: Ahh! You’re right! His effect is perfect!!!
Ageha: I have to win this tournament no matter what! For the sake of Red Dragon Archfiend!
Yori: Your duel is going to start soon! Go!
Ageha: Okay!
Yori: Don’t lose, Ageha-chan!
Ageha: As if I would!!
I stepped out in duel arena and saw my opponent. It was a big…no GIANT man with tattoos and piercings all over the body. Honestly that was looking bit silly!
Jiro: Now then, ladies and gentlemen, it’s time to announce the first duel! On the right is one of the best duelists in Aero City – Gary Hitsuyama!!!!!!
A crowd cheered up and applauded a lot to this guy. What where they thinking? Maybe they where afraid of him or something?
Jiro: And on the left is a visitor from our capital Corona City – Ageha Takahashi!
I was surprised to hear that crowd cheered up me too. Maybe me being a girl made them feel some kind affection for me. Well, that doesn’t matter! I won’t win this tournament with affection!
Gary: This will be fast! A little girl is no match for my skill!
Ageha: Yeah, only later you will go home crying that a little girl beat you!
Gary: HAHAHA! Big words won’t help you here!
Jiro: Now then computer will determinate who will go first! And the one who goes first is ....Gary!
Ageha: Let’s duel!
Gary: Let’s duel! Draw! I summon Chainsaw Insect in Attack position, set two cards (Solemn Judgment; Negate Attack) and end my turn!
Ageha: A bug? Is that all you can do? My turn! Draw! I summon tuner monster Dread Dragon in Attack position! Next I activate Spell – Double Summon! It allows me to Normal summon one more time this turn!
Gary: Summon all you want but that won’t do you any good!
Ageha: We’ll see that! I summon Dodger Dragon in Attack position! Next, I tune level 2 Dread Dragon with level 4 Dodger Dragon to Synchro Summon – Agile Sky Dragon!
Gary: Hahaha, I….
Ageha: I’m not done yet! The Synchro Summon of Agile Sky Dragon cannot be negated and you cannot activate traps during the turn this monster was Synchro Summoned!
Gary: What?!
Ageha: Agile Sky Dragon attack Chainsaw Insect!
Chainsaw Insect is destroyed and Gary’s life points drop from 4000 to 3900.
Jiro: What an amazing start has Ageha shown! It seems that Jiro has underestimated strength of this girl!
Ageha: I set a card face-down (Dark Bribe) and end my turn!
Gary: It’s my turn! DRAW! I summon Jirai Gumo in Defense position and end my turn!
Ageha: My turn! Draw! I summon Blizzard Dragon in Attack position! Now, Blizzard Dragon attack Jirai Gumo!
Jirai Gumo is destroyed and sent to graveyard.
Ageha: Agile Sky Dragon attack him directly!
Gary: I don’t think so! I activate Trap – Negate Attack. It allows me to stop your attack and end the Battle Phase
Ageha: I set a card face-down (Dimensional Prison) and end my turn!
Gary: You are going down, girl! My turn! Draw! I remove from play Jirai Gumo and Chainsaw Insect to Special Summon – Doom Dozer! Now, Doom Dozer attack Blizzard Dragon!
Ageha: I activate Trap – Dimensional Prison! When my opponent declares attack I can remove from play the attacking monster!
Gary: I don’t think so! I activate Counter Trap – Solemn Judgment! By paying half of my life points I can negate activation of Trap, Spell card effect or summon of monster and destroy it!
Ageha: Sorry, this must be unlucky day for you! Because I activate Counter Trap – Dark Bribe! It allows me to negate activation of Trap or Spell card and destroy it!
Gary: What?!
Ageha: Don’t worry you get to draw a card, thanks to Dark Bribe!
Doom Dozer is removed from play.
Jiro: AMAZING! Ageha managed to counter Gary’s attack and Solemn Judgment! It looks like this girl is much stronger then she looks!
Gary: I set a card face-down (Mirror Force) and end my turn!
Ageha: My turn! Draw! Perfect! I activate Spell – Mystical Space Typhoon to destroy your set card!
Mirror Force is destroyed and sent to graveyard.
Gary: What?! NOOO!
Ageha: Now it’s time to end this! I summon tuner monster – Influence Dragon in Attack position! Next, I tune level 3 Influence Dragon and level 4 Blizzard Dragon! The ruler's shouts echo throughout! Hammer of Victory, shatter the very earth! Synchro Summon! Flap your wings, Exploder Dragonwing!
Jiro: Stunning! Ageha has Synchro Summoned another Synchro monster!
Ageha: Agile Sky Dragon attack Gary directly!
Gary’s life points drop from 3900 to 1500.
Ageha: Let’s finish this! Exploder Dragonwing attack! King Storm!!!
Gary: NOOOOOO!
Gary’s life points dropped to 0.

New cards:
Burning Soul! 381529 Burning Soul! 381529Burning Soul! 381529
1 tuner monster + 1 or more non-tuner monster(s)
Once per turn you can place one Butterfly counter on this card. You can remove Butterfly counters to activate effect:
1 - Destroy 1 Spell or Trap card on the field
3 - Destroy 1 Monster on the field
4 - Add 1 monster card from your grave to your hand
6 - Special Summon 1 monster from your hand
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Chapter 9. Call of Victory!

Jiro: Amazing!!! Ageha has defeated Gary without even losing any life points!!!! I have a feeling that this fiery girl will show us many surprises ahead!
The crowd was cheering on me, calling my name and screaming all kinds of compliments at me. I guess if you win even one duel in this tournament, you already get some respect.
I quietly went back to where Yori and Genou were standing. Genou seemed little shocked about my easy victory, but he was happy that I won.

Genou: I would have never thought that you are such a good duelist. Defeating Gary is something only skilled duelist can do.
Ageha: Is he really that good?
Genou: Yes! His strategy revolves around summoning overpowered monsters and destroying opponents monsters by card effects, but you easily defeated him.
Ageha: I see!
Yori: That means that Ageha has to win 4 more duels to win tournament!
Genou: That’s right!
Ageha: Is everyone out here using decks like Gary?
Genou: Not really. Actually duelists in Aero City use all kinds of decks. You’ll see that in your next duels.
After 3 days the first round of tournament has been finished and our next opponents where selected. I had to duel against some guy named Mizuki who used fairies. His strategy was good and quite interesting, but I still won without losing a life point. With that second round was complete. Only 16 more participants left.
Next duel was against a girl named Sayu who used Amazoness. Her strategy was good amd moves where fast, but I defeated her without life point loss. And the duel before semi-finals was against old man named Seichiro who was using Machina monsters. The beginning seemed really good for him, but I managed to summon Agile Sky Dragon, which gave me a possibly to pass his traps for one turn, which was enough for me.

Jiro: And once again Ageha claims victory. A girl with her dragons seems to be unstoppable!!! And now it’s time to announce Ageha’s opponent in semi-finals! And it is……..Tazuki Nagahara!
Ageha: Tazuki Nagahara?
Jiro: What will happen when plants meet dragons! Will plants be burned? Or will dragons be wrapped up in vines!!! That will be an amazing duel!!
I went back to Genou and Yori. Yori was as cheerful as always, but Genou was worried about something.
Ageha: Genou, is something wrong?
Genou: I’m worried that you might lose against Tazuki!
Yori: What are you saying, G.P?! Ageha successfully defeated all the other opponents!
Genou: Yes, but Tazuki is really strong with his plants! He has never lost before!
Ageha: Never?
Genou: No, not even once! Even though this is the first tournament I have seen him participate in, because usually he competes only in street duels.
Ageha: I see…
This left me bit uneasy. What if I really can’t win against Tazuki?! With Red Dragon Archfiend I wouldn’t worry about it, but without him I feel weak and defenseless.
At the evening I was walking around Genou’s house worrying about my duel against Tazuki. In the I just lied down in my bed and thought about strategies I could defeat Tazuki. There were many ways, but I don’t know how strong exactly he is! Suddenly Yori rushed into my room with my phone in his hand.
Yori: You have a call from Damir!!!
Ageha: Damir?!
Quickly took the phone from him and pushed Yori out of my room, so he wouldn’t listen to what I’m saying.
Ageha: Yes, I’m listening!
Damir: Ageha! Hi! How’s it going in Aero City?
Ageha: Hi! Quite good. I’m participating in tournament to get card that would help me to get Red Dragon Archfiend back, but it seems that my next opponent has never lost before! I bit worried. What if I can’t defeat him?
Damir: Don’t worry! I know you can do it, no matter how strong that guy is!
Ageha: What makes you think that?
Damir: Because I have never seen a girl so kind and determinated before! You can do it, Ageha! I believe in you!
A new feeling just ran through my body and hit my cheeks. They felt….hot and burning. And my heart seemed to skip a beat. What is this feeling? Why am I suddenly feeling like this?
Damir: Ageha, are you listening?
Ageha: Yes, of course! Thank you a lot, Damir! I’ll be sure to come back with victory!
Damir: Good luck! Bye!
Ageha: Bye!
I don’t know what just hit me, but this new feeling is giving me strength to move forward! I will win to get Red Dragon Archfiend back from that Morgrim guy!
Next day semi-finals finally started. I was standing on my side of field and looking at my opponent. I cannot underestimate him, I must fight with all I’ve got.

Jiro: Ladies and gentlemen, it’s here!!! The semi-finals of Aero City Tournament. As you see on the duel field there are standing two GREAT duelists with amazing skill on their side! On the right is the unbeaten champion of Street duels of Aero City! Master of all Plants – Tazuki Nagahara!!!
Crowd cheered so loud that for a moment it seemed that the roof of stadium will fly down!!! Tazuki must have impressed them a lot in past duels.
Jiro: And on the left is a rising star from Corona City! The Queen of all dragons – Ageha Takahashi!!!
For my surprise crowd cheered loudly for me too. I thought that they would definitely cheer for someone from their own town!
Tazuki: Well, it’s nice to be in this duel with you, Miss Ageha! Let’s make this duel unforgettable!
Ageha: Yes! Let’s make this duel spectacular!
Jiro: Now computer will choose who will have the privilege of first turn! And it is………Ageha!!!
Tazuki: Let’s start this duel!
Ageha: Let’s Duel! Draw! I summon Red-Eyes Wyvern in Attack position! I set card face-down (Sakuretsu Armor) and end my turn!
Tazuki: My turn! Draw! I summon Botanical Lion in Attack position! This monster gains 300 ATK for each Plant-type monster I control including itself. Botanical Lion attack Red-Eyes Wyvern!
Ageha: I activate Trap – Sakuretsu Armor! When my opponent declares attack I can destroy the attacking monster.
Botanical Lion is destroyed and sent to graveyard.
Tazuki: I set two cards face-down (Plant Food Chain; Bottomless Trap Hole) and end my turn!
Ageha: My turn! Draw! I summon tuner monster Debris Dragon in Attack position! Next I activate Spell – Mystical Space Typhoon to destroy your second set card!
Bottomless Trap Hole is destroyed and sent to graveyard.
Jiro: Oh, could it?! Is Ageha trying to Synchro Summon?!
Ageha: I tune level 4 Debris Dragon with level 4 Red-Eyes Wyvern! Flap of butterfly wings will change into hope! Bring the roar of dragon’s beauty and grace! Spread your wings, Butterfly Dragon, Choru!
Jiro: Oh My GOD! I have never a dragon more graceful and beautiful then this one! Ageha always seems to amaze us with new monsters and strategies!
Ageha: Once per turn I can place one “Butterfly” counter on this monster. Right now Butterfly Dragon, Choru has one “Butterfly” counter. Butterfly Dragon, Choru attack Tazuki directly! Butterfly Tornado!
Tazuki’s life points drop from 4000 to 2000.
Ageha: I set a card face-down (Protection of Dragon) and end my turn!
Tazuki: My turn! Draw! I summon Lonefire Blossom in Defense position! Next I activate Lonefire Blossom’s effect! I can tribute 1 Plant-type monster on field to Special Summon 1 Plant-type from Deck. I tribute Lonefire Blossom to summon – Tytannial, Princess of Camellias! Now, attack Butterfly Dragon, Choru! Petal Rain!
Ageha: I activate Continuous Trap – Protection of Dragon! If a Dragon-type monster I control would be destroyed by battle, I can remove from play 1 Dragon-type monster in my graveyard instead. I remove from play Red-Eyes Wyvern to save Butterfly Dragon, Choru!
Tazuki: But you still take battle damage!
Ageha’s life points drop from 4000 to 3200.
Tazuki: I end my turn!
Ageha: My turn! Draw! I activate Choru’s effect and place another “Butterfly” counter on it!
Tazuki: What good do those tokens do to you?
Ageha: You’ll see! I set a card face-down (Dust Tornado) and end my turn!
Tazuki: My turn! Draw!
Ageha: I activate Trap - Dust Tornado! It allows me to destroy one spell or trap card my opponent controls!
Plant Food Chain is destroyed and sent to graveyard.
Tazuki: That won’t help you much! Tytannial, Princess of Camellias attack Butterfly Dragon, Choru! Petal Rain!
Ageha: I activate effect of my trap! By removing from play Debris Dragon I can save Choru!
Ageha’s life points drop from 3200 to 2400.
Tazuki: I summon Rose Fairy in Defense position and end my turn!
Ageha: It’s my turn! Draw! I place third “Butterfly” counter on Choru and activate its effect! By removing 3 counters from Butterfly Dragon, Choru, I can destroy 1 monster on field!
Tazuki: WHAT?!
Ageha: I choose to destroy Tytannial, Princess of Camellias!
Tytannial, Princess of Camellias is destroyed and sent to graveyard.
Jiro: What an amazing effect! Who would have ever thought that this beauty is hiding a deadly effect!
Ageha: Now, Choru attack Rose fairy!
Rose Fairy is destroyed and sent to graveyard!
Ageha: I end my turn!
Tazuki: It’s my turn! I summon tuner monster Twilight Rose Knight in Attack position! When Twilight Rose Knight is Normal summoned, I can Special Summon level 4 or lower Plant-type monster from my hand! I Special Summon Rose Witch from my hand!
Ageha: Synchro Summon!
Tazuki: I tune level 3 Twilight Rose Knight with level 4 Rose Witch! Chilling flames engulf the entire world. Pitch-dark flower, set into bloom! Synchro Summon! Appear now, Black Rose Dragon!
Jiro: Here it is!!! Tazuki’s ace monster has appeared!!! BLACK ROSE DRAGON!

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Name: Genou Perry
Nickname: G.P.
Age: 19
Sex: Male
Hometown: Aero City
Hair color: Black
Eye color: Green
Family: Brother, Mother
Likes: Long walks at the park, Draw the world as if made it
Dislikes: Jerks
Main deck: Blackwings
Ace monster: Black-Winged Dragon
Key card: Gale The Whirlwind
Goal: To keep moving forward

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Chapter 10. Scrap Arise!

Ageha: Oh my God! So beautiful!
Tazuki: Thank you! And now Black Rose Dragon attack Butterfly Dragon, Choru! Black Rose Flare!
Butterfly Dragon, Choru is destroyed and Ageha’s life points drop from 2400 to 2000.
Tazuki: I end my turn!
Jiro: Ageha’s ace monster is destroyed! What is she going to do now in this hard situation??
Ageha: My turn! Draw! I activate Spell – Monster Reborn! It allows me to Special summon a monster from graveyard. I Special Summon Butterfly Dragon, Choru! Next I release Butturfly Dragon, Choru to summon….
Tazuki: What?! Release!
Ageha: Strong Wind Dragon!! When this monster is Tribute summoned by releasing Dragon-type monster, then this monster gains half of released monsters ATK!
Tazuki: That means….
Ageha: That Strong Wind Dragon’s ATK is equal to 3400!! Strong Wind Dragon attack Black Rose Dragon! Wind Huricane!
Black Rose Dragon is destroyed and Tazuki’s life points drop from 2000 to 1000.
Ageha: I set a card (Compulsory Evacuation Device) and end my turn!
Tazuki: My turn! DRAW! I activate Spell – Mark of Rose! By removing from play 1 Plant-type monster I can take control of one of your monster till the End Phase of my turn! I remove from play Rose Fairy and take control of Strong Wind Dragon!
Ageha: WHAT? NO!
Tazuki: It was nice playing against you, Ageha, but it’s time to end this! Strong Wind Dragon attack Ageha directly! Wind Huricane!
Ageha: It’s not over yet! I activate Trap – Compulsory Evacuation Device! This card allows me to send one monster on field to its owner hands! Strong Wind Dragon returns back to my hand!
Tazuki: I summon Botanical Girl in Defense position and End my turn!
Ageha: My turn! Draw! PERFECT! I summon Blue Dragon Spirit in Attack position! During turn this monster was Normal Summoned I can attack with this monster directly!
Tazuki: WHAT!?
Ageha: Blue Dragon Spirit attack Tazuki directly!
Tazuki’s life points drop to 0.
Jiro: AMAZING! Ageha defeated Tazuki! This girl is UNSTOPPABLE!
Crowd cheered up really loud. I could see that Tazuki was shocked about his loss, but he acted like a man.
Tazuki: Congratulations on your victory! That was a really good duel!
Ageha: Thank you!
Tazuki: I will be cheering for you in finals!
Jiro: Ladies and gentlemen, I happy to announce that final duel of Aero City Tournament is here!!! Ageha will face our unbeaten champion – Ryusei Kiriyuu!!!
I saw that a guy with a confident face came out and smirked at me. He could be about 25 years old and obviously he had a big ego.
Ryusei: So this year it’s a girl! Well, you should be honored that you will be defeated by a champion like me!
Ageha: I have no intention of losing!
Ryusei: You have no chance of winning against me!
Ageha: We’ll see that!
I went back to Genou’s house to get some advice from him. He lives in Aero city all life and he must know something about this Ryusei guy.
Ageha: Hey, Genou?
Genou: Yes?
Ageha: What kind of monsters is Ryusei using?
Genou: I don’t know!
Ageha: WHAT? But don’t you live in Aero city all your life?
Genou: I do, but Ryusei changes his deck in every tournament!
This made me worried. I went to room and looked carefully through my deck! He changes decks every tournament and yet he has won all of them!!! I cannot underestimate that guy. I must give all I’ve got in that duel to get Red Dragon Archfiend back! Knock to my door brought me out of my thoughts.
Ageha: Yes?
Yori: Can I come in?
Ageha: Of course!
Yori: I wanted to say that you can win against that Ryusei guy. I think he is big only with his mouth.
Ageha: I don’t think so. He has WON all previous Aero City Tournaments he has participated in!
Yori: That’s true, but I’m sure you can beat him!
Ageha: I…
Phone call stopped my sentence midway. I picked up the phone!
Damir: Hi, Ageha!
Ageha: Oh, hi, Damir!
Damir: How are you doing?
Ageha: Well, I’ll have to fight against champion tomorrow!
Damir: Wow! That’s amazing! Do your best!
Ageha: I will! Anyway, did you want to tell me something that you called me?
Damir: Well, it might sounds like I’m complaining!
Ageha: It’s okay! I don’t mind!
Damir: Angie broke up with me!
Ageha: What? Why?
Damir: She said something about getting sick of me!
Ageha: How could she?
Damir: It’s okay! I saw this one coming!
Ageha: Damir!You…
Damir: Anyway, win in that tournament for sure!
Ageha: I will!
Damir: Later!
I put down phone and looked at screen. Damir sounded so sad. I don’t understand how can a girl get sick of her boyfriend. She didn’t even love Damir in first place then!
Yori: What’s wrong?
Ageha: Damir’s girlfriend broke up with him!
Yori: What? Why?
Ageha: Because she got sick of him!
Yori: That is just low! She was just using him!
Ageha: Yeah…
Yori: Come on, Ageha! You can’t be sad now! You have to pumped up for you duel tomorrow!
Ageha: Okay! I’ll leave this issue for later!
Yori: Now that’s better! Well, I’ll go now, but you get some rest!
Ageha: Okay! Good night!
Luckily I fell asleep fast and my sleep was tight. In the morning my head was clean and fresh, ready for dueling. In the stadium Ryusei was giving some kind lecture about how awesome he was! Honestly, what a show off!
Genou: Good luck, Ageha!
Yori: Go and beat him, Ageha-chan!
Ageha: I told you, don’t call me that!
Yori: You never change do you?
Suddenly Yori grabbed me and hugged me tight!
Ageha: What are you…
Yori: Shhh!
He held me tight and gently. I have to admit that it felt nice. It calmed me down a lot and felt more peaceful now. He slowly let me go and I noticed that my cheeks were little bit red.
Yori: This should help you!
Ageha: Idiot! That doesn’t help at all!
Yori: Hahaha! As cruel as always I see!
I quickly went into duel stadium! Honestly I don’t know what the hell Yori is thinking about! Hugging me suddenly like that! And why did I think it was nice?
Ryusei: Well are you ready to lose?
Ageha: I should be the one saying that!
Ryusei: Nice to see that you have some spark in you or else it would be completely boring duel!
Ageha: Let’s duel not talk!
Jiro: Well, here it is! The final duel! On the right is the beautiful and deadly – Ageha Takahashi! On the left the champion of Aero City – Ryusei Kiriyuu! WHO WILL BE THE CHAMPION THIS YEAR?
Ryusei: Me!
Jiro: Let’s see who will be the one to go first! And it is…………AGEHA!
Ryusei: Let’s play then!
Ageha: Let’s duel! Draw! I summon Stardust Xioalong in Defense position, set a card face-down (Book of Moon) and end my turn!
Ryusei: My turn! Draw! I summon Scrap Beast in Attack position. Attack Stardust Xiaolong!
Ageha: Once per turn if Stardust Xioalong would be destroyed by battle, it is not destroyed!
Ryusei: I set two cards face-down (Scarpstorm; Waboku) and end my turn!
Ageha: My turn! Draw! I guess it’s no use of playing easy now, is there?
Ryusei: Come at me with all you’ve got, girl!
Ageha: As you wish then! I remove from play Stardust Xioalong to Special Summon Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon from my hand!
Jiro: Oh here it is! The ruler of all dragons! RED-EYES DARKNESS METAL DRAGON!

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LOVE TRIANGLE!!! Can;t wait to see who she hooks up with. ;D
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Post  Ageha13 2011-07-24, 08:56

Chapter 11. New Hope!

Ryusei: This duel might turn out to be more interesting then I thought!
Ageha: I activate Darkness Metal’s effect! Once per turn I can Special Summon 1 Dragon-type monster from my hand or graveyard. I Special summon Des Volstgalph from my hand! Next I summon tuner monster Dread Dragon in Defense position.
Jiro: Oh my God! This is amazing! Ageha managed to summon three monster in one turn and I think that this in only the beginning!
Ageha: I tune level 2 Dread Dragon with level 6 Des Volstgalph! Flap of butterfly wings will change into hope! Bring the roar of dragon’s beauty and grace! Spread your wings, Butterfly Dragon, Choru!
Ryusei: A dragon with butterfly wings! That’s something new!
Ageha: And that’s not the only new thing you’ll see! Once per turn I can place 1 “Butterfly” counter on Choru! I place 1”Butterfly” counter and attack Scrap Beast with Butterfly Dragon, Choru! Butterfly Tornado!
Ryusei: I activate Trap – Waboku! Until the end of this turn, my monster can’t be destroyed by battle and I take no battle damage!
Ageha: I set a card face-down (Barrier Wave) and end my turn!
Ryusei: I summon Scrap Shark in Attack position! Next I tune level 4 Scrap Beast with level 4 Scrap Shark. When the pieces of the Scrapyard reunite, everybody knows that the mightiest Dragon is born! Synchro Summon! Attack fiercely, Scrap Dragon!
Jiro: HERE IT IS! Ryusei’s ace monster – SCRAP DRAGON!
Ryusei: I activate Scrap Dragon’s effect. By destroying one card I control I can destroy one card you control! I destroy my set card – Scrapstorm to destroy Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon!
Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon and Scrapstorm are destroyed and sent to graveyard.
Ryusei: Scrap Dragon attack Butterfly Dragon, Choru! Scrap Slash!
Ageha: I activate Trap – Barrier Wave! When my opponent declares attack I can Tribute one Synchro monster, switch all Atttack position monster in Defense and inflict damage equal to DEF of attacking monster! I tribute Butterfly Dragon, Choru and switch Scrap Dragon in Defense!
Ryusei’s life points drop from 4000 to 2000.
Ryusei: Interesting! You actually reduced my life points! But doesn’t matter! You will still lose! I set a card face-down (Mirror Force) and end my turn!
Ageha: My turn! Draw! I activate Choru’s effect! By removing 1 “Butterfly” counter, I can destroy one Spell or Trap card on field! I choose the card you just set!
Mirror Force is destroyed and sent to graveyard.
Ageha: I end my turn!
Ryusei: Let’s make things more interesting! My turn! Draw! If my opponent controls a monster, I can Special Summon Scrap Breaker from my hand! When this card is Special summoned this way, I have to destroy one “Scrap” monster I control. I destroy Scrap Dragon.
Ageha: WHAT? Why would you destroy Scrap Dragon? He is stronger then Scrap Breaker.
Ryusei: True! But this sacrifice is needed to bring out stronger beast! I summon tuner monster Scrap Goblin.
Ageha: Synchro Summon again?!
Ryusei: I tune level 3 Scrap Goblin with level Scrap Breaker. When the amount of pieces is doubled, so shall be it's power, and the double dragon shall appear! Synchro Summon! Eradicate my enemies, Scrap Twin Dragon!
Jiro: AMAZING! Ryusei summoned a monster even stronger then Scrap Dragon!
Ryusei: Scrap Twin Dragon attack Butterfly Dragon, Choru! Scrap Explosion!
Ageha: I activate Quickplay Spell – Book of Moon! It allows me to switch one Attack position into Defense.
Ryusei: Protecting your little dragon won’t help you for long! I end my turn!
Ageha: My turn! Draw! I summon Masked Dragon in Defense position and end my turn!
Jiro: It seems that Ageha is in tight situation here! Is she going to find a way out of it?
Ryusei: My turn! Draw! I summon Scrap Worm in Defense position! Next, I activate Scrap Twin Dragon’s effect! By destroying one card I control, I can destroy 2 cards you control! I destroy Scrap Worm to destroy Choru and Masked Dragon!
Scrap Worm, Butterfly Dragon, Choru and Masked Dragon are destroyed and sent to graveyard.
Ageha: WHAT?
Ryusei: But that’s not all! When Scrap Worm is destroyed by effect of “Scrap” monster, I can add one “Scrap” monster from my graveyard to my hand. I add Scrap Beast to my hand! Now, Scrap Twin Dragon attack Ageha directly! Scrap Explosion!
Ageha’s life points drop from 4000 to 1000.
Ryusei: Give up! You can’t win now! I end my turn!
Ageha: I can win and I will! For Red Dragon Archfiend!
Ryusei: Red Dragon Archfiend?
Ageha: My turn! DRAW! I will win no matter what!!! I activate Spell – Monster Reborn and bring back Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon! I activate Darkness Metal’s effect and revive Des Volstgalph!
Ryusei: Revive all you want, but you can’t win!
Ageha: I activate another Spell – Foolish Burial! With its help I can send one monster from my deck to graveyard! I send Decoy Dragon from Deck to my graveyard! Now, I summon tuner monster Debris Dragon in Defense position! When Debris Dragon is Normal summoned I can Special a monster with 500 or less ATK from my graveyard! I Special Summon Decoy Dragon in Defense!
Jiro: What an amazing comeback! Ageha has summoned 4 monsters in one turn!
Ageha: And that’s not the end! I tune level 4 Debris Dragon with level 6 Des Volstgalph. Rising in flames of hell! The ruler of all dragons will rise! Synchro Summon! Appear before me, Trident Dragion! I end my turn!
Ryusei: My turn! Draw! I think you have forgotten about Scrap Twin Dragons effect! I summon Scrap Beast in Attack position! Now I activate Scrap Twin Dragon’s effect! By destroying Scrap Beast I can destroy two of your cards! I destroy Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon and Trident Dragion!
Jiro: Oh no! All Ageha’s hard work of summoning more monsters has gone to waste!
Ryusei: Scrap Twin Dragon attack Decoy Dragon! Scrap Explosion!
Ageha: Just like I planned!
Ryusei: What?
Ageha: I activate Decoy Dragon’s effect! When this card selected as an attack target, I can Special Summon level 7 or higher Dragon-type monster from my graveyard and switch attack target to that monster! I Special summon Trident Dragion!
Ryusei: Psshhh! I’ll stop my attack for now! This won’t save you, because next turn I will activate Scrap Twin Dragon’s effect!
Ageha: Will you now?
Ryusei: Wha?
Ageha: My turn! Draw! It’s time to end this! I release Trident Dragion to summon…
Ryusei: What? Release?!
Ageha: Strong Wind Dragon! When this monster is Tribute summoned by releasing Dragon-type monster this monster gains half of released monster’s ATK!
Ryusei: Impossible! Strong Wind Dragon’s ATK then is…
Ageha: 3900!!! Now, Strong Wind Dragon attack Scrap Twin Dragon! WIND HURICANE!
Scrap Twin Dragon is destroyed and Ryusei’s life points drop from 2000 to 1100.
Ageha: I end my turn!
Ryusei: My turn! Draw! This is your end, girl! I activate Spell – Dark Hole! It destroys all monster on field!
Decoy Dragon and Strong Wind Dragon are destroyed and sent to graveyard!
Ryusei: Next I summon Scrap Recycler in Attack position! Scrap Recycler attack Ageha directly!
Ageha’s life points drop from 1000 to 100.
Ryusei: I end my turn!
Ageha: It’s my turn! DRAW! It’s over! Everything is over now!
Ryusei: Yes, indeed it is! I’m the champion of Aero City again!
Ageha: Over for you I mean!
Ryusei: What?
Ageha: I summon Blue Dragon Spirit in Attack position! During the turn this card was Normal Summoned I can attack my opponent directly!
Ryusei: HOW?!
Ageha: Blue Dragon Spirit attack Ryusei directly!
Ryusei: IMPOSSIBLE!!!!
Ryusei’s life points drop to 0.
For a second whole stadium is quiet as a graveyard. When people finally understood what happened, they started cheering loudly!
Jiro: Unbelievable! She did it! AGEHA BEAT THE CHAMPION!
Yori and Genou happily ran to me and congratulated me! Everyone was in really high spirits except Ryusei, who now went away with a broken pride!
Ageha: Yo, Ryusei!
Ryusei: Oh, now you wanna laugh at me! GO AHEAD!
Ageha: No, I wanted to say that it was a really great duel! I had fun!
Ryusei: ……Thanks!
Jiro: Congratulations, Ageha! Now, you’re champion of Aero City! Please, accept your prize – Northen Light Dragon!
Ageha: Thank you!
After my victory was celebrated in Genou’s house, I and Yori decided to go back to Corona City. I got the strength I need to get Red Dragon Archfiend back, so there’s no need for us to stay here anymore!
When we were about to ride of, Genou showed up in his D-Wheel!

Yori: What’s with this, G.P.?
Genou: I’m going with you, guys!
Ageha: What?
Genou: I decided it’s time I leave this city and move on!
Yori: As you wish, my friend! You can live with me in Ageha’s house then!
Ageha: MY HOUSE?! It’s not a hotel!!!
Yori: Please! G.P. did let us stay at his house!
Ageha: Fine! You can stay at my house! I have to repay my debt to you after all!
Genou: Thanks, Ageha!
Ageha: Let’s hurry and ride back home! I have a feeling that something not very good happened there while we were gone!
Yori: You mean Damir?
Ageha: Yes!


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Chapter 12. Turbo Duel!

After two weeks in Aero City, me and Yori finally went back to Corona City. Genou now joined us too and from now on he will be living in my house, just like Yori. Honestly it’s amazing how my life changed in few weeks. Not too long ago, I was living alone and was friends with no one, but now I’m living with two guys and I have friends. It doesn’t feel bad to have friends. They support you and help you so I think I’ll stick around with them.
We decided that we go to my house first to show Genou where he can put his D-Wheel. After that we will go to Damir’s place to return D-Wheels we borrowed.
When we reached my house I saw Damir in my front yard with something that was covered with white blanket of some sort! I was surprised to see him here.

Ageha: Damir? Why are you here?
Damir: I came to congratulate you on your victory!
Ageha: How do you know about it?
Yori: I told him that! I hope you don’t mind!
Ageha: No! Not at all!
We stepped down from D-Wheel and Damir came closer to me.
Damir: Congratulations on winning your tournament!
He hugged me tight and I felt that my face turned hot and red. I think I could hear Yori mumble angrily a little, but maybe it was just my imagination. Damir let go of me and gave a big smile!
Ageha: T-Thank you!
Damir: While you were gone I was working on something for you!
Ageha: What? Damir, you shouldn’t have! I can’t accept any more presents!
Damir: I think you can accept this one! This will help you get Red Dragon Archfiend back! Also Yori!
Yori: Yes!
Damir: That D-Wheel I lent you! Do you like it?
Yori: It’s old, but it works well and with some recoloring it should look great!
Damir: Well, then you can keep it!
Yori: What? Really?
Damir: Yes, as thanks for saving me! And Ageha! Take these!
He gave me a little a pile of cards. I looked at them carefully. It was Speed World 2 and bunch of Speed Spells.
Ageha: Speed Spells?
Damir: Yes, I will teach you how to do Turbo duels!
Ageha: But how? I don’t have a D-Wheel!
Damir: Oh, you do now!
He took down the white blanket to reveal a beautiful D-Wheel! It was red and purple and looked really graceful! I was amazed by Damir’s work! Did he make this D-Wheel by himself?
Damir: This is your D-Wheel!
Ageha: Damir, I can’t….
Damir: Please, accept it or I will feel bad!
Ageha: I…..Okay, but no more presents!
Damir: I can’t promise you that!
Ageha: Hahaha! Damir meet our new friend Genou! We meet him at Aero City and he helped us a lot!
Damir: Nice to meet you, Genou!
Genou: It’s a pleasure to meet you, Damir!
Damir: Ageha, Let’s Turbo duel!
Ageha: What? Right now?
Damir: I want to show a new strength that you will need to defeat Morgrim! Yori and Genou, you watch too!
Yori: Sure!
Genou: Of course!
Ageha: Okay, give me a second to get my deck ready!
Luckily I have seen Speed Spells and Riding Duels before, so I know how they work. I quickly replaced Normal Spell cards in my deck with Speed Spells! Me and Damir got onto D-Wheel’s and took our positions ready to duel!
Damir: Let’s begin!
Ageha, Damir: RIDING DUEL! ACCELARATION!
Damir: Since it’s your first Riding Duel, I’ll let you take the first corner!
Ageha: Okay! My turn! Draw! I summon Dread Dragon in Defense position, set a card (Dimensional Prison) and end my turn!
Damir: It’s my turn! Draw!
Ageha and Damir have 1 Speed Counter now.
Damir: I summon Lyla, Lightsworn Sorceress in Attack position. I can switch this card in Defense and destroy one spell or trap you control!
Dimensional Prison is destroyed and sent to graveyard.
Damir: If I control a “Lightsworn” monster, I can Special Summon Mary, Lightsworn Elf from my hand. I Special Summon tuner monster Mary, Lightsworn Elf in Defense position.
Ageha: Synchro Summon?
Damir: I tune level 1 Mary, Lightsworn Elf with level 4 Lyla, Lightsworn Sorceress! The guardian of those who were sworn will arise! Synchro Summon! Pull your sword and unite the light, Tagon, Guardian of Lightsworn! When Tagon is on field other “Lightsworn” monsters, cannot be selected as attack target.
Ageha: Amazing monster!
Damir: Tagon attack Dread Dragon! Lightsworn Blade!
Dread Dragon is destroyed and sent to graveyard.
Ageha: I activate Dread Dragon’s effect. When it is destroyed by battle and sent to graveyard, I can add level 3 or lower Dragon-type monster from deck to my hand! I add Delta Flyer!
Damir: I end my turn!
Ageha: My turn! Draw!
Ageha and Damir have 2 Speed Counters.
Ageha: I summon Lancer Lindwurm in Attack position, set a card (Negate Attack) and end my turn!
Damir: My turn! Draw!
Ageha and Damir have 3 Speed Counters.
Damir: I summon Shire, Lightsworn Spirit in Defense position! While Shire is on the field, she gains 300 ATK for each Lightsworn monster with different name in my graveyard. Now, Tagon attack Delta Flyer! Lightsworn Blade!
Ageha: I activate Trap – Negate Attack! It negates your attack and ends the Battle Phase!
Damir: I set a card face-down (Lightsworn Barrier). During the End Phase, due Shire’s effect I have to send top 2 cards of my deck (Mirror Force, Book of Moon) to graveyard.
Ageha: My turn! Draw!
Ageha and Damir have 4 Speed Counters.
Ageha: I summon tuner monster Delta Flyer in Attack position. Next I activate Delta Flyer’s effect! Once per turn I can increase level of one of my monsters by one! Lancer Lindwurm is level 5 now! I’ll show you monster which helped me win tournament!
Damir: I’ll be glad to see it!
Ageha: I tune level 3 Delta Flyer with level 5 Lancer Lindwurm! Flap of butterfly wings will change into hope! Bring the roar of dragon’s beauty and grace! Spread your wings, Butterfly Dragon, Choru!
Damir: How beautiful! This dragon suits you well!
Ageha: Thank you! Once per turn I can place 1 “Butterfly” counter on Choru. I place one counter on Choru and end my turn!
Damir: I’ll show the way how to defeat Morgrim! Watch this carefully, Ageha! My turn! Draw!
Ageha and Damir have 5 Speed Counters.
Damir: I summon tuner monster Belle, The Lightsworn Archer in Defense position! Next I tune level 2 Belle, The Lightsworn Archer with level 3 Shire, Lightsworn Spirit! Hope will take shape of beauty and thrust! Show the new path to those who are lost! Synchro Summon! Come forth Synchro Tuner – Siria, Hope of Lightsworn!
Ageha: What? A Synchro tuner?
Damir: Yes! Siria cannot be destroyed by battle if I control another Lightsworn monster! I end my turn!
Yori: In the end, that Sychro Tuner didn’t do any good!
Damir: You’ll see what she can do!
Ageha: My turn! Draw!
Ageha and Damir have 6 Speed Counters.
Ageha: I activate Speed Spell – Shift Down! By removing 6 Speed counters, I can draw 2 cards!
Ageha’s Speed Counters are 0.
Ageha: I place second counter on Choru and summon Stardust Xioalong in Defense position! Next I remove from play Stardust Xioalong to Special Summon Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon!
Damir: It’s time I bring forth miracle!
Suddenly a red aura surrounded Damir! A heart shaped mark appeared on his arm and started glowing bright red!
Damir: BRAVE HEART! I tune level 5 Siria, Hope of Lightsworn with level 5 Tagon, Guardian of Lightsworn. Ancient Light will come forth to shine! Bring out Ancient power of true ruler! ACCEL SYNCHRO! Banish the dark, Siron, Ruler of Lightsworn!
Yori: SYNCHRO SUMMON ON OPPONENT’S TURN?!!!
Ageha: Accel Synchro?!!
Damir: This is the power you need to defeat Morgrim! I showed it to you, because I believe that you have that power in you!
Ageha: Inside me?
Damir: Yes! If you learn how to Accel Synchro, you’ll be able to defeat Morgrim! While Siron is on the field it gains 200 ATK for each Lightsworn monster in my graveyard and it can’t be destroyed by Spell and Trap effects.
Yori: What a powerful monster!!
Ageha: I end my turn!
Damir: My turn! Draw!
Damir has 7 Speed Counters. Ageha has 1 Speed Counter.
Damir: I activate Speed World 2 effect! By removing 4 Speed Counters I can inflict 800 damage to my opponent for each Speed Spell in my hand! I have two (Dash Pilfer; Overboost).
Damir’s Speed Counters become 3. Ageha’s life points drop from 4000 to 2400.
Damir: Next, I activate Speed Spell – Overboost! I gain 4 Speed Counters and at End Phase my Speed Counters become 1.
Damir has 7 Speed Counters.
Damir: I activate another Speed Spell – Dash Pilfer. If I have 4 or more Speed Counters I can take control of one of your Defense position monsters until End Phase of this turn! I take control of Butterfly Dragon, Choru.
Ageha: No way!!!
Damir: I switch Choru in Attack position! Now Siron, Ruler of Lightsworn attack Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon. White Stream!
Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon is destroyed. Ageha’s life points drop from 2400 to 500.
Damir: Butterfly Dragon, Choru attack Ageha directly! Butterfly Tornado!
Ageha’s life points drop to 0 and her D-Wheel slowly stops.
Damir came to me and looked me deep in eyes. For moment I thought that Damir is looking into my soul. He gave me back card of Butterfly Dragon, Choru and showed me a warm and calming expression.

Damir: I will now tell you everything about Accel Synchro and Light Saviors.
Ageha: Light Saviors?
Damir: Yes! Yori and Genou must listen too. This is very important!

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Post  Gorz 2011-07-26, 04:21

Liking the new cards. And the new chapters. Not going to lie Ageha. This is my favorite Fan Fiction on the site. I can't get enough of it. I mean heck you were the one who inspired me to write mine. Keep it up. I hope you have more for us soon. ^^
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Post  Ageha13 2011-07-26, 04:30

Thanks a lot! I'm really glad you like my fic! ^^
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Chapter 13. The Truth!

We all went inside in my living room to listen to what Damir has to say. I honestly don’t understand what happened. Synchro Summon during opponents turn? Brave Heart? Accel Synchro? Light Saviors? My head is a mess!
Damir: I’ll start with story of ancient time! A long time ago a group of people with special dark powers brought a devil with enormous evil power to life! Those people with dark powers were five Shadows Riders that possessed dark power that combined could revive the Red Devil! Shadow Riders wanted that Red Devil would listen to them and help them to realize their evil plans, but….. Red Devil didn’t listen to them. He killed the Shadow Riders and started to destroy everything in its path. Many villages and cities were swept off the Earth forever. For a moment it seemed that Red Devil will destroy everything, but five brave people with light power appeared! Those were Light Saviors! Each of them possessed special power and a dragon that would help them fight Red Devil. The fight was long and painful and few of Light Saviors almost paid with their life, but in the end Red Devil was sealed away!
Yori: Sealed away? Why not killed? Wouldn’t it bring trouble in future if Red Devil is alive!
Damir: Yes, indeed, but Red Devil’s power was too strong to be destroyed, that is why Light Saviors did only thing they could do to stop him! Seal him away! But….. Time has passed and the strength of seal has been weakened and now Shadow Riders want to make same mistake they did in past! They want to revive Red Devil!!!
Ageha: But it will destroy everything!!!
Damir: Yes! That’s why five Light Saviors must be found before Red Devil is revived! Only with combined strength of all five Light Saviors can stop Red Devil from reviving!
Ageha: But that thing before… Are you a Light Savior, Damir?
Damir: Yes, I am! I possess power of Brave Heart! I have ability to feel what other person is feeling just by touching them.
Yori: That’s almost like reading minds!!
Ageha: I don’t understand why are you telling this to us?
Damir: Because I have a feeling that probably all three of you are Light Saviors!
Genou: All three of us?
Damir: I’m not so sure about Yori and Genou, but Ageha is a Light Savior for sure! She has amazing power inside her, since she was able to control the lower form of Red Devil!
Ageha, Yori, Genou: WHAT?
Ageha: What are you talking about? I have never even heard of Red Devil before!
Damir: Do you know Red Nova Dragon?
Ageha: Yes, I’ve heard of him. It’s a really powerful dragon with disastrous power! Nobody could control Red Nova Dragon.
Damir: Yes, that’s right! Do you know how Red Nova Dragon can be summoned?
Ageha: No, nobody has seen card of Red Nova Dragon for thousands of years!
Damir: Well, I don’t know details of summoning conditions either, but I know one monster which is necessary to summon Red Nova Dragon!
Yori: What is that monster?
Damir: Red Dragon Archfiend!
Ageha: Wha?! Okay! Fine! But even if Red Dragon Archfiend is needed to summon Red Nova Dragon, what does it have to do with Red Devil?
Damir: Red Nova Dragon is Red Devil!
Me, Yori and Genou were left speechless. How could Red Dragon Archfiend be lower form of Red Devil? Red Dragon Archfiend isn’t bad! I know it!
Ageha: So what that Red Dragon Archfiend is lower form of Red Devil?! Red Dragon Archfiend isn’t bad! He always helped me! He isn’t bad!!!
Damir: Ageha, calm down! I’m not saying that Red Dragon Archfiend is bad! I’m saying that you have power to restrain Red Devil’s power! You could control lower form of Red Devil for two years and it would still obey you if Morgrim wouldn’t have stolen Red Dragon Archfiend from you!
Ageha: I have that kind of power in me?
Damir: Yes! As for Yori and Genou, I’m not sure! I can feel that you two have power inside you too, but I don’t know if that’s the power of Light Saviors!
Yori: Well, I guess we’ll just have to figure that out soon!
Damir: Yes! But to become a Light Savior completely you will have to learn secrets of Accel Synchro!
Genou: Then what is the secret of Accel Synchro?
Damir: I cannot tell you that! You will have to find that out for yourself! Also, it’s already late! We should all go to sleep now! Ageha, do you mind if I spend the night here?
Ageha: No, I don’t mind! Well, then good night everyone!
I couldn’t stop thinking about what Damir said! Me – a Light Savior! That sounded impossible! If I was able to control Red Dragon Archfiend doesn’t that make me the bad guy? Or does it make me a very strong Light Savior? Honestly, I don’t understand anymore what is right and what is wrong!!! Slowly I fell into sleep full of dreams!
In my dream was in some kind of dark place full of flames. In front of me Wicked Dragon appeared. It let out a terrible roar and then rushed at me with eyes that were telling me “I’m going to kill you!”. Before Wicked Dragon Archfiend could destroy me, Red Dragon Archfiend arose and protected me from Wicked Dragon Archfiend’s attack. Red Dragon Archfiend was protecting me with all he could, but he was weaker then Wicked Dragon Archfiend and it looked that soon Red Dragon Archfiend will fall! I had to help him! I screamed out loud but I didn’t hear what I was saying. Suddenly, Red Dragon Archfiend started to change. He became a strong dragon that was covered in flames! Wicked Dragon Archfiend yanked away, because burning dragon burned its skin. A dragon who once was once Red Dragon Archfiend looked at me and let out a little growl, but then stopped flames on his body and carefully lifted me up! “I will protect you!” he said.
I quickly woke up catching for breath! That Dream! Red Dragon Archfiend is not lost! I have to free him from Morgrim and bring him back to me! I have a feeling that I know how to defeat Morgrim! I have the power I need!
I went down to kitchen to see if anyone was up. Looks like everyone were already up. I was the only one sleeping that long.

Damir, Yori, Genou: Good morning, Ageha!
Ageha: Good morning! Listen, guys! I think I know how to defeat Morgrim!
Yori: You do?
Ageha: Yes! I’m sure of it!
Damir: You think you can defeat Morgrim?! Then before you fight him, I really want to see if you’re ready! Duel one of us!
Ageha: Okay! Which one of you wants to duel me?
Genou: I will duel you, since we haven’t dueled before!
Ageha: Okay!
We all went outside to duel. I and Genou were standing opposite of each other, while Damir and Yori were standing aside, ready to watch.
Ageha, Genou: Let’s duel!
Genou: I’ll go first if you don’t mind! Draw! I summon Blackwing – Calima The Haze in Defense position. I set two cards face-down (Blackwing Boobytrap; Black Thunder) and end my turn!
Ageha: My turn! Draw! I summon Black Cave Dragon in Attack position! When this monster is Normal Summoned I can Special level 4 or lower Dragon-type tuner monster from my hand. I Special Summon tuner monster Influence Dragon in Defense position.
Yori: Ageha always goes for Synchro Summons on first turn!
Damir: Yeah! Being fast is important in duel!
Ageha: I tune level 3 Influence Dragon with level 4 Black Cave Dragon! The ruler's shouts echo throughout! Hammer of Victory, shatter the very earth! Synchro Summon! Flap your wings, Exploder Dragonwing! I attack Calima The Haze with Exploder Dragonwing and activate it’s effect! When Exploder Dragonwing battles monster whose ATK is equal or lower then this monster ATK, I can destroy that monster and inflict damage equal to destroyed monsters ATK.
Blackwing – Calima The Haze is destroyed and Genou’s life points drop from 4000 to 3400.
Ageha: I set a card face-down (Dark Bribe) and end my turn!
Genou: My turn! Draw! I summon tuner monster Blackwing – Breeze The Zephyr in Attack position! Next, if I control a Blackwing monster I can Special Summon Blackwing – Bora The Spear from my hand.
Yori: Ageha is in BIG trouble now!
Damir: Why?
Yori: You’ll see!
Genou: I tune level 3 Breeze The Zephyr with level 4 Bora The Spear. Darkened gales, become the wings which will soar to heavens! Synchro Summon! Fly up in sky, Blackwing – Armor Master!
Ageha: Somehow I don’t like that!
Genou: You shouldn’t, because Armor Master has unbeatable effect! It can’t be destroyed by battle and I take no battle damage from battles involving this monster!
Ageha: WHAT?!

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Chapter 14. Black Feathers!

Genou: Now Blackwing – Armor Master attack Exploder Dragonwing! Black Hurricane!
Exploder Dragonwing is destroyed and Ageha’s life points drop from 4000 to 3900.
Genou: I end my turn!
Ageha: My turn! Draw! I summon Blizzard Dragon in Attack position! I activate Blizzard Dragon’s effect. Once per turn I can select 1 monster you control! That monster cannot declare attack or change battle position until End Phase of you next turn. I choose Blackwing – Armor Master!
Genou: Trying to buy time now, huh?
Ageha: I set card face-down (Cosmic Blast) and end my turn!
Genou: My turn! Draw! I summon Blackwing – Fane The Steel Chain in Attack position. This monster can attack you directy! Fane The Steel Chain attack Ageha directly!
Ageha’s life points drop from 3900 to 3400.
Genou: When Fane The Steel Chain attacks directly it can change one Attack position in Defense! I switch Blizzard Dragon in Defense and end my turn!
Ageha: My turn! Draw! I activate Spell – Pot of Greed! It allows me to draw 2 cards from my deck! Next, I activate another Spell – Hammer Shot! It allows me to destroy monster with the highest ATK on field. Right now monster with highest ATK is Armor Master.
Blackwing – Armor Master is destroyed and sent to graveyard.
Ageha: I activate one more Spell – Mystical Space Typhoon! It allows me to destroy 1 Spell or Trap card on field. I choose your first set card!
Genou: I activate Trap – Blackwing Boobytrap! When this card would be destroyed by your card effect, I can inflict 1000 damage to you and draw one card!
Ageha’s life points drop from 3400 to 2400.
Ageha: I summon tuner monster Dread Dragon in Attack position and switch Blizzard dragon in Attack. Now Dread Dragon attack Fane The Steel Chain!
Blackwing – Fane The Steel Chain is destroyed and Genou’s life points drop from 3400 to 2800.
Genou: I activate Trap – Black Thunder. When Blackwing monster is destroyed by battle, I can inflict 400 damage for each card you control!
Ageha’s life points drop from 2400 to 800.
Ageha: Blizzard Dragon attack Genou directly!
Genou’s life points drop from 2800 to 1000.
Ageha: Now, I tune level 2 Dread Dragon with level 4 Blizzard Dragon to Synchro Summon – Frost Dragon! I end my turn!
Genou: My turn! Draw! If I control no cards I can Special Summon Blackwing – Gust The Blackblast from my hand! Next, I summon tuner monster Blackwing – Blizzard The Far North in Defense position! When this card is Normal Summoned I can Special Summon level 4 or lower Blackwing monster from my graveyard! I Special Summon Blackwing – Bora The Spear!
Ageha: Wow! Three monster in one turn!
Genou: Now, I tune level 2 Blizzard The Far North with level 2 Gust The Blackblast and level 4 Bora The Spear! Darkened gales, become the wings that soar from resolved hope! Synchro Summon! Soar, Black-Winged Dragon! Black-Winged Dragon attack Frost Dragon! Noble Stream!
Frost Dragon is destroyed and Ageha’s life points drop from 800 to 400.
Ageha: I activate Trap – Cosmic Blast! When a Dragon-type Synchro monster is removed from field, I can inflict damage to my opponent equal to ATK of removed monster!
Genou: I activate Black-Winged Dragon’s effect! When effect damage would be inflicted I can place one Black Feather counter on Black-Winged Dragon instead! Black-Winged Dragon loses 700 ATK for each counter!
Ageha: Psshh! That’s not all! When Frost Dragon is sent from field to graveyard, I can add 1 Dragon-type tuner monster from graveyard to my hand! I add Influence Dragon!
Genou: I set a card face-down (Mirror Force) and end my turn!
Ageha: My turn! Draw! I summon tuner monster Influence Dragon in Attack position! Then I remove Influence Dragon from play to Special Summon Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon! I activate Darkness Metal’s effect! Once per turn I can Special Summon 1 Dragon-type monster from my hand or graveyard! I summon Frost Dragon!
Yori: This could be bad for Genou!
Damir: You don’t know that! He has that face-down card!
Ageha: Frost Dragon attack Black-Winged Dragon! Ice Beam!
Genou: I activate Trap – Mirror Force! When my opponent declares attack I can destroy all Attack position monsters you control!
Ageha: I activate Counter Trap – Dark Bribe! With its help I can negate activation of Trap or Spell and destroy it!
Genou: NO!!
Black-Winged Dragon is destroyed and Genou’s life points drop from 1000 to 700.
Ageha: Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon attack Genou directly! Darkness Blast!
Genou’s life points drop to 0.
Yori: What an amazing duel!!!!
Genou: Yes, indeed it was! You are really a great duelist, Ageha!
Ageha: Thank you!
Damir: Well, it seems that you really are ready to face Morgrim!
Ageha: Do you know where I can find him?
Damir: I think that there won’t be any need to search for him! He will find you himself! Until he shows up you better save your strength for duel against him!
Ageha: Okay!
We all went inside to rest. Damir decided that he will stay in my house for while, since he feels bored at home. Of course, I don’t mind, since it’s always fun to be around him. It sounds quite weird that I’m living in one house with three guys at my age. But I don’t really mind.
Guys started playing some kind of board game, so I decided to take a bath while they were playing. Bath calmed me down a lot and being calm is important now. In that duel against Morgrim I will have to use all my strength. With help of Northen Light Dragon I should be able to get Red Dragon Archfiend back. But I have a feeling that it won’t be enough to defeat Morgrim. That guy is strong! He must have some tricks up his slave in case I figure something out! I’ll have to be very careful when I duel him and if possible I will have to learn how to Accel Synchro.
After bath, I went to my room and saw that Yori was sitting on the edge at my bed and smiling at me.

Ageha: What are you doing here? I think I already told you to stay out if my room!
Yori: Oh, come on, Ageha-chan! No need to be so cold towards me!
Ageha: I told you! Don’t call me Ageha-chan!
Yori: Did you know that you look sexy when you’re angry?
Ageha: HUH? Have you lost my mind completely?!
He stood up, came closer to me and whispered in my ear.
Yori: Yes, I have lost my mind over you!
Suddenly, he pushed me into bed and crawled on top of me. My face turned bright red.
Ageha: WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING?
Yori: Ageha-chan, you’re blushing!
Ageha: I’m not! GET OF ME!!!!
Yori: No way!
He leaned closer to me, gently took my face in his arms and kissed me on my cheek! I was so shocked that I couldn’t move anymore.
Yori: Don’t worry! I won’t do anything bad to you unless you want me to!
He let go of me and went at direction were door was. I though that he will go away, but he stopped right before the door.
Yori: There’s something I have to tell you, Ageha!
Ageha: W-WHAT?
He turned his face around and gave me warm and gentle expression.
Yori: I’m in love with you!
He left my room and closed door quietly. I just stared at wall speechless. Is he teasing me? But his expression was sincere and true! Then what he said was truth! But it can’t be truth! There’s no way it could be!!! Or is there? YORI IS IN LOVE WITH ME!


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Post  Gorz 2011-07-28, 09:00

Woah!! Yori came on nice and strong. XD... That scene made me go a little crazy inside. Loving it Ageha, but Frost is a little broken in todays meta, but it's a fan fic. Just saying that if you used Debris on Ryko and summoned this guy you never lose him. Just make it destroyed by battle that would nerf it to be acceptable.

Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Post  Ageha13 2011-07-29, 06:32

Chapter 15. Duel for Dragon!

Despite Yori’s confession, I was able to sleep nicely. I went down to kitchen to make breakfast for everyone. Since they all helped me a lot, I decided to make something really delicious!
First one to wake up was Genou. After him was Damir and lastly Yori. When Yori showed up, I felt as little blush appeared on my cheeks. What is happening with me? Why am I blushing? I shouldn’t be blushing because of Yori!

Yori: WOW! Breakfasts this morning are especially tasty! Is there any special occasion?
Ageha: I just wanted to say thanks that you, guys, are always helping me!
Damir: We are always glad to help you! Isn’t that right?
Genou: Yes!
Yori: Yep, he is right! We are right behind you!
Ageha: Thank you!
Rest of morning was covered in silence. Nobody said anything, everyone were enjoying peace until Morgrim will appear. I was just lying on bed and thinking of all different combos I could use against Morgrim and things he could use against me! I couldn’t stop thinking about Accel Synchro either. If I want to win I’ll have to master it, but I don’t know much about it. Let’s see what I know. I know that you can Accel Synchro during your opponents turn. I also know that two Synchro monsters are used for Accel Synchro, but that’s it! I really don’t know how am I suppose do it. But I cannot give up, I MUST try!!!
In the evening everyone were sick of lying around and doing nothing, so we decided to take a little ride down forest with our D-Wheels.
It felt really good and wind cleared my mind. This is definitely better then lying around and doing nothing. Suddenly on our way a black D-Wheel showed up blocking our way. We stopped to see who it was that was stopping us. Man slowly took down his helmet to reveal his face….

Ageha: MORGRIM!!!
Morgrim: Hello, Ageha! We meet again!
Damir: You sure found us fast.
Morgrim: It wasn’t hard! I followed you all the way to Aero City and I would have destroyed you there, but it wouldn’t be fun if I did that! So I decided to duel you when you’re ready! Are you ready now?
Ageha: Yes, I’m ready to duel you Morgrim!
Morgrim: Excellent! Let’s make it interesting then. If you lose you will become my eternal slave!
Ageha: And if you lose, you will give me back Red Dragon Archfiend and leave forever!
Morgrim: Deal! Now, how are we going to duel? Normal Duel or Riding Duel?
Ageha: Riding duel!!
Morgrim: As you wish! HAHAHA!
We both got ready to duel. Yori, Damir and Genou decided to follow us with their D-Wheels to see our duel!
Ageha: Riding Duel….
Morgrim, Ageha: ACCELARATION!
We both rode as fast as we could! But due some trick, Morgrim was able to get first corner.
Morgrim: I’ll start! Draw! I summon Archfiend Soldier in Attack position! I set two cards face-down (Archfiend’s Roar; Negate Attack) and end my turn!
Ageha: My turn! Draw!
Ageha and Morgrim have 1 Speed Counter.
Ageha: I summon Axe Dragonute in Attack position! Attack Archfiend Soldier!
Archfiend Soldier is destroyed and Morgrim’s life points drop from 4000 to 3900.
Ageha: When Axe Dragonute attacks it is changed in Defense position at end of Damage Step. I set card face-down (Red Screen) and end my turn!
Morgrim: My turn! Draw!
Ageha and Morgrim have 2 Speed Counters.
Morgrim: I activate Trap – Archfiend’s Roar. By paying 500 life points I can Special Summon 1 “Archfiend” monster from my graveyard. That monster cannot be tributed and it is destroyed at End Phase! I Special Summon Archfiend Soldier!
Morgrim’s life points drop from 3900 to 3400.
Morgrim: Next, I summon tuner monster Shadow Archfiend in Defense Position.
Ageha: Oh no!
Morgrim: Oh YES! I tune level 4 Shadow Archfiend with level 4 Archfiend Soldier! The rulers heartbeat will flow through air! Behold how burning flame takes shape of power. Synchro Summon! Bring forth darkness, Red Dragon Archfiend!
I looked at monster that once was called my own and almost fell of my D-Wheel! Red Dragon Archfiend looked angry, dark……EVIL!
Ageha: What have you done to him?
Morgrim: Nothing! He just became the way he was before!
Ageha: I’ll never forgive for this!
Morgrim: Hahaha! Red Dragon Archfiend attack Axe Dragonute! Darkness Blast!
Axe Dragonute is destroyed and sent to graveyard.
Morgrim: I end my turn!
Ageha: My turn! Draw!
Ageha and Morgrim have 3 Speed Counters.
Ageha: I summon tuner monster Sunrise Dragon in Defense position and end my turn!
Morgrim: Is that all you can do? My turn! Draw!
Morgrim and Ageha have 4 Speed Counters.
Morgrim: I summon tuner monster Dark Tinker in Defense position. I tune level 2 Dark Tinker with level 8 Red Dragon Archfiend. The blaze of power will turn into darkness! Destroy everything that stands in your path! Synchro Summon! Arise in darkness, Wicked Dragon Archfiend!
Ageha: Again that monster! I won’t let him attack! I activate Trap – Red Screen! By paying 1000 life points at each of my End Phases, I can stop your monsters from declaring attack!
Morgrim: Such a desperate thing to do. Once you don’t have enough life points to pay, I will destroy you! I end my turn!
Ageha: My turn! Draw!
Ageha and Morgrim have 5 Speed Counters now.
Ageha: I summon Red-Eyes Wyvern is Defense position. Next, I tune level 4 Sunrise Dragon with level 4 Red-Eyes Wyvern. Light from far north will fill the sky! Bring back what once was lost. Enlighten sky, Northen Light Dragon!!!
Morgrim: That dragon won’t help you!
Ageha: I activate Sunrise Dragon’s effect. When Sunrise Dragon is sent to graveyard for Synchro Summon of Dragon-type monster, I can draw one card. If that card is Dragon-type monster I can reveal it to draw another card. Draw! I reveal White Night Dragon and draw another card!
Morgrim: Luck won’t save you!
Ageha: I’m not relying on luck! I activate Northen Light Dragon’s effect! I can select 1 Synchro monster you control. By discarding monster whose total level is equal to selected monsters level I can take control of Synchro monster. That monster cannot declare attack or change battle position.
Morgrim: WHAT?!
Ageha: I discard White Night Dragon and Dread Dragon and take control of Wicked Dragon Archfiend!
The moment Wicked Dragon Archfiend came to my side, I felt as if darkness was trying to swallow me! My vision started to become unclear and I felt like fainting!
Yori, Damir, Genou: AGEHA!!!
Morgrim: AHAHAHA! That moment you took control of Wicked Dragon Archfiend you have already lost!!!! AHAHAHA!
I heard Morgrim crazy laugh and I looked at my cards to save myself. I saw a card that wasn’t suppose to be here, but it somehow fell in my deck by accident. It will be a high cost, but this card can save me!
Ageha: I activate Spell – De-Synchro! I can return one Synchro monster to Extra Deck and Special Summon Synchro Materials from graveyard. I send Wicked Dragon Archfiend to Extra Deck and Special Summon Red Dragon Archfiend and Dark Tinker!
The pressure disappeared and my vision cleared again. Wicked Dragon Archfiend would have killed me if I wouldn’t have stopped him.
Morgrim: HAHAHA! What a stupid move! Have you forgotten rules of Turbo Duels.
Ageha: I remember them clearly! For using any spell card, that isn’t Speed Spell I take 2000 damage!
Ageha’s life points drop from 4000 to 2000.
Ageha: I switch Dark Tinker in Attack position and attack you directly.
Morgrim: I activate Trap – Negate Attack. It negates your attack and ends the Battle Phase!
Ageha: Due to Red Dragon Archfiends effect, monsters who didn’t declare attack this turn are destroyed.
Northen Light Dragon is destroyed and sent to graveyard.
Despite losing Northen Light Dragon, I’m still glad. Red Dragon Archfiend is back on my side!
Ageha: At my End Phase I pay 1000 life points to keep Red Screen on field.
Ageha’s life points drop from 2000 to 1000.
Morgrim: I’m happy to see that you have some tricks up your sleeve but it’s time to end this little game!

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Chapter 16. Protector from Hell!

Morgrim: My turn! Draw!
Ageha and Morgrim have 6 Speed Counters now.
Morgrim: I activate Shadow Archfiend’s effect in my graveyard. By removing from play this monster and 1 other “Archfiend” monster I can Special Summon 2 “Shadow Archfiend tokens”. I remove from play Shadow Archfiend and Archfiend Soldier to Special Summon 2 Shadow Archfiend tokens in Defense. Next, I summon Lancer Archfiend in Defense.
Damir: This doesn’t look good!
Morgrim: Now I tribute 2 Shadow Archfiend tokens and Lancer Archfiend to Special Summon – Raviel, Lord Of Phantasms!!!
Ageha: What’s with this monster?!
Damir: Oh no!! That is one of Wicked Gods!
Morgrim: Luckily you still have your Red Screen to protect you, but it will disappear next turn! And when it does I’m going to destroy you! I end my turn!
Ageha: My turn! Draw!
Ageha and Morgrim have 7 Speed Counters.
Ageha: I activate Speed Spell – Fall Down! If I have 4 or more Speed counters, I can reduce level of one of monsters I control by 1. I reduce level of Dark Tinker.
I don’t understand what this feeling is! It’s as if someone if whispering in my ear what to do. Is this way to Accel Synchro?
Ageha: I activate effect of Speed World 2. By removing 7 Speed Counters, I can draw 1 card.
Ageha’s Speed Counters become 0.
Ageha: Next, I summon Petal Dragon in Defense Position.
Morgrim: I activate Raviel’s effect. When my opponent Normal summons a monster I can Special Summon 1 Phantasm token on my side of field. Also, once per turn I can tribute one monster I can control to increase Raviel’s ATK equal to tributed monsters ATK.
Ageha: I tune level 1 Dark Tinker with level 1 Petal Dragon! Light and Dark, Day and Night will go into eternal balance! Bring forth miracle of future! Synchro Summon! Take flight, Synchro Tuner – Balance Dragon!
Morgrim: Synchro Tuner?!
Damir: She’s on it!
Morgrim: Does it matter? You still can’t do anything! That monster is useless!
Ageha: We’ll see that! During my End Phase, since I cannot pay anymore, Red Screen is destroyed.
Red Screen is destroyed and sent to graveyard.
Ageha: I end my turn!
Morgrim: Time to end this! My turn! Draw!
Ageha has 1 Speed Counter, Morgrim has 8 Speed Counters.
Morgrim: I will now activate….
Ageha: I activate effect of Effect Veiler! By discarding this card during your Main Phase I can negate effect of one of your monster until End Phase!
Mogrim: Pshhhh! Even if you have stopped Raviel’s effect, he is still strong enough to destroy you!!!
This is my chance! I have to Accel Synchro before he attacks! I felt like fire was running through all of my body to gather in one place. I closed my eyes and felt power flowing through my veins. I CAN DO THIS!!!
Ageha: I tune level 2 Balance Dragon with level 8 Red Dragon Archfiend!
I feel it! The burning power flowing through by body and soul. I saw it! The burning dragon which will lead me to my victory. An orange aura, like a flame surrounded me and a red mark which looked like flame appeared on my hand.
Morgrim: WHAT?! Synchro summon during opponents turn?!
Ageha: BURNING SOUL! A burning flame will fill the field and perish the enemies! Blaze air with heat and power! ACCEL SYNCHRO!!! Burn up, Blazing Hell Dragon!
A dragon from my dream flew into sky! Is was the same dragon that said will protect me. It was strong and beautiful covered in flames!
Morgrim: YOU!!!! It doesn’t matter! That monster is still weaker then Raviel!
Ageha: I think not! Blazing Hell Dragon gains 500 ATK for each tuner monster in my graveyard. With this effect his total ATK is 5000!
Morgrim: Grrr! I set a card face-down (Sakuretsu Armor) and end my turn!
Ageha: You made a mistake by summoning that Phantasm token! Blazing Hell dragon attack Phantasm token! Burning Hell Stream!
Morgrim: I activate Trap – Sakuretsu Armor! When my opponent declares attack, I can destroy attacking monster!
Ageha: I activate Blazing Hell Dragon’s effect! When this monster would be destroyed by card effect, I can remove from play one Dragon-type monster in my graveyard instead! I remove from play Axe Dragonute to save Blazing Hell Dragon!
Morgrim: IMPOSSIBLE!!!
Morgrim’s life points drop to 0.
Morgrim’s D-Wheel stopped and Me, Yori, Damir, Genou also stopped. Morgrim looked way too calm! I thought that he will be screaming or at least be shocked, but he actually STARTED LAUGHTING!
Morgrim: HAHHAHAH!
Ageha: What’s so funny?
Morgrim: You think that by winning like this, you will end all your problems?
Ageha: What are you talking about?
Morgrim: This is only beginning for your trouble! You may have defeated me, but once all six towers arise, Red Devil will awaken again and there’s nothing you can do about, LIGHT SAVIOR!!!! HAHAHHAH!
He disappeared into thin air leaving behind trace of his crazy laugh. What did he mean by that? Six Towers? Red Devil arise? Does he know how to revive Red Devil?
Ageha: Damir, what did he mean by six towers?
Damir: Six towers are six seals that keep Red Devil imprisoned! If all six towers come into sun, Red Devil will be free!!!
Ageha: That is not good! How exactly are they going to bring those in light?
Damir: I don’t know the details, but I’ve heard that to bring tower out and break the seal, A GOD is needed!
Ageha: God? What do you mean by that?
Damir: A God card! And they have them! You already saw Raviel, Lord of Phantasms! He is one of six Gods!
Ageha: So that means….. That they can already break one seal?
Damir: Not exactly! God isn’t the only thing needed! There are two more thing required!
Ageha: What?
Damir: Blood and innocent human souls!
Yori: That is awful! It means there is going to be innocent people who will get hurt!
Damir: Yes! And we have to stop them! Even bringing one tower into light will bring a lot of pain and with every seal broken…..Red Devil’s strength will increase!!!
Genou: But how are we going to stop them?
Damir: Firstly we need to gether all Light Saviors! Me and Ageha have awoken our powers, but Yori and Genou need to gain them as fast as possible!
Yori: And how are we going to do that?
Damir: The best way to gain power is fight for something you want to protect!
Yori: Something to protect?
Damir: Yes! But now it’s nor time nor place to keep standing here and thinking about that! It’s for best if go back to Ageha’s house!
Ageha: Yes!
We all drove back to my house. Even though I got Red Dragon Archfiend and even learned how to Accel Synchro, nobody seemed any happier about that. Everyone was worried about six towers and Red Devil. Yori seemed to be thinking really hard. He must be thinking of some way how to awaken his powers.
Soon tired we all went to sleep. But before I fell asleep, I decided to go and talk with Yori. I quietly knocked to his door. I heard a nood and I assume that means that I can go in. Yori was sitting on the window and looking at sky. His expression was serious and yet somehow attractive.

Yori: Hi, Ageha. I’m surprised you came to visit me!
Ageha: You just looked quite worried earlier, so I wanted to make sure you are okay!
He slowly climbed down window and came closer to me. Then he took tip of my hair and gently kissed it. My faced turned little bit hot.
Yori: Ageha, you are really kind person! I have never seen someone so kind, strong and beautiful at the same time!
Ageha: You are starting to talk nonsense again! I’m going to sleep! Good night!
I quickly went back to my room and I felt my heart beating and face being hot. What is wrong with me?

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Chapter 17. Crazy duels!

It has been already week since I defeated Morgrim and learned how to Accel Synchro. Since then nothing suspicious or crazy have happened. Damir went back to his grandmother’s house, but he still came to visit every day. Genou and Yori were busy improving D-Wheel that Damir left for him. They have successfully re-colored it and now it is in color of sky.
Since I haven’t gone out for a week now, I decided that it’s time that I go and buy food, since Yori has eaten almost all of it. On my way to shop, I heard that some guy calling my name.

???: Look, look, look! Isn’t that Ageha Takahashi?
I turned around and saw bunch of my old classmates. The one who talked was one of class biggest troublemakers – Mark. Then there were two of his friends Tom and Allen and two girls, who once tried to be my friends just to get money from me – Lisa and Laura.
Mark: I thought that you were suppose to be dwelling in orphanage!!!
Ageha: I never even was there! I came to live on my own right from the beginning!
Mark: So what are you now? A hobo!!!
They are started laughing loud. I already forgot how it is when someone is making fun of you like this. But they always have been like this. They haven’t changed even a bit!!!
Ageha: Oh, you’re so funny! I almost pissed at myself. And I see that you are just a big of a jerk as you were before!
Laura: Don’t you dare to call Mark a jerk, you bitch!!!
Ageha: I do whatever I want!
Mark: You’re just pathetic! You always were and you always will be!!! Nobody needs you and nobody will ever love you!!!
Ageha: No…I….
Tom: You can’t even say anything to defend yourself!!!
Allen: So pathetic!
Mark: Weak!
Lisa: Stupid!
Laura: Hobo!
Suddenly Mark was hit by someone so hard that blood started flowing down his nose.
Yori: You little scumbag, DON’T YOU DARE TO SAY THINGS LIKE THAT ABOUT AGEHA!
Yori was furious!! I have never seen him so angry. I wouldn’t be surprised if he killed everyone in that bunch now.
Mark: Who the hell are you?
Yori: Me? I’m good friend of Ageha’s and if you have any complains about her you will have to face me first!
Mark: Hahhaha! As you wish! Then let’s duel!!
Yori: With pleasure!
They both quickly took battle position, ready to duel.
Yori, Mark: Let’s duel!
Yori: If I will win this, then you will kneel before Ageha and beg for forgiviness!
Mark: I won’t let you win!! If I win then she’s going to be our slave!!!
What’s with people these days? At beginning Morgrim wanted to make me a slave! Now Mark wants me as his slave! This is starting to get annoying!
Yori: I’ll go first! Draw! I summon Quillbolt Hedgehog in Defense position, set a card face-down (Scrap-Iron Scarecrow) and end my turn!
Mark: My turn! Draw! I summon Chaos-End Master in Attack position! Chaos End Master attack Quillbolt Hedgehog!
Quillbolt Hedgehog is destroyed and sent to graveyard.
Laura: Go Mark!!! He stands no chance of winning now!!!
Mark: I activate Chaos End Master’s effect. When this monster destroys another monster by battle, I can Special Summon level 5 or higher monster with 1600 or less ATK from my deck. I Special Summon Turret Warrior in Defense position.
Laura: You’re unbeatable, Mark!!!
Honestly, that girl is annoying.
Mark: I tune level 3 Chaos-End Master with level 5 Turret Warrior to Synchro Summon – Colossal Fighter! I end my turn!
Yori: My turn! Draw! If my opponent controls a monster and I control no monsters, I can Special Summon Unknown Synchron from my hand! Next, if I control a tuner monster I can Special Summon Quillbolt Hedgehog from my graveyard.
Laura: Those weak monsters can’t defeat Mark!!!
Yori: When a monster is Special Summoned from graveyard, I can Special Summon Doppel Warrior from my hand. Now, I summon Level Warrior in Attack position.
Ageha: Here it comes!
Yori: I tune level 1 Unknown Synchron with level 2 Quillbolt Hedgehog, level 2 Doppel Warrior and level 3 Level Warrior. Clustering wishes will become a new shining star! Become the path its light shines upon! Synchro Summon! Take flight, Stardust Dragon!
Mark: That monster is nothing against Colossal Fighter!
Yori: I set a card face-down (Cosmic Blast) and end my turn.
Mark: It’s my turn! Draw! By the way, I forgot to mention Colossal Fighter’s effect. It gains 100 ATK for each Warrior-type monster in my and your graveyard. There are 4 warrior-type monsters in our graves so Colossal Fighters ATK is equal to 3200. Colossal Fighter attack Stardust Dragon! Colossal Punch!
Yori: I activate Trap – Scrap-Iron Scarecrow! It negates one of your attacks per turn and as a bonus, I can reset this card!
Mark: That card won’t stop me for long! Next turn, I’ll destroy you! I end my turn!
Yori: There won’t be no next turn for you! It’s my turn! Draw! I activate Spell - One for One! By discarding one monster in my hand, I can Special Summon level 1 monster from my deck! I discard Quickdraw Synchron and Special Summon Stardust Xioalong!
Mark: Another weak monster!
Yori: I summon miracle tuner monster – Majestic Dragon!
Mark: Miracle?! It really is a miracle how weak that monster is!!! Hahaha!
Yori: I tune level 1 Majestic Dragon with level 1 Stardust Xioalong and level 8 Stardust Dragon. Gathering starlight will enlighten a new miracle! Become the path its light shines upon! Synchro Summon! Arrive in light, Majestic Star Dragon!
Mark: What? How?
Yori: Easy! Now activate Majestic Star Dragon’s effect! Once per turn I can negate one of your monsters effect and if possible apply it to Majestic Star Dragon! I negate Colossal Fighter’s effect and apply it to Majestic Star Dragon.
Mark: Impossible!
Yori: Majestic Star Dragon attack Colossal Fighter! Shooting Blaster Sonic!
Colossal Fighter is destroyed and Mark’s life points drop from 4000 to 2600.
Yori: During my End Phase Majestic Star Dragon returns to Extra Deck and Stardust Dragon is summoned from my graveyard.
Mark: It’s not over yet!
Yori: I’m afraid it is! I activate Trap – Cosmic Blast! When Dragon-type Synchro monster is removed from field, I can inflict damage to my opponent equal to its ATK!
Mark: NOOO!!!
Mark life points drop to 0.
Yori: Now! I demand an apology for Ageha!
Mark and his gang didn’t listen to Yori and ran away as fast as they could.
Yori: Hey, come back, you bunch of cowards!
Ageha: It’s okay! I don’t need their apology!
Yori: Eh?
Ageha: I’m happy that you stood up for me!
Yori: Always glad to help! How about a kiss as reward?
Ageha: Idiot! Don’t say stupid things!
Yori: Hahaha! You never change! But that’s what I like about you!
My face turned little bit red. Honestly, that Yori always seems to surprise me!
???: You! You are perfect!!!
Ageha, Yori: Huh?
Some guy with weird white hair appeared out of nowhere.
Maxy: My name is Maxy and you two are perfect for my cast!!!
Ageha, Yori: Cast?
Maxy: Yes! The way you support each other! The way you fight for each other is brilliant!
Ageha: What is he talking about?
Yori: I have no idea!
Maxy: Please, come to my cast this Saturday! Here! Take this card! It is an entrance ticket to my studio! I will be waiting for you there! BYE!!!
He left just as suddenly as he appeared, leaving us standing with weird and yet cute card, he gave us. Little Snow Tiger.
Ageha: I wonder what was all that about?
Yori: Who knows? Should we go there?
Ageha: We don’t really have anything better to do now anyway!
Yori: True! Maybe it’s something interesting.
When Saturday came, I and Yori went to Maxy’s studio. It was actually quite a big building! I wonder if that Maxy guy is actually well known. At the exit there was pair of guards. At beginning they wouldn’t let us in, but when we showed them card, they let us it.
Maxy: Oh! You have arrived! Wonderful!
Ageha: Um, what is going to happen now?
Maxy: Something interesting!
Suddenly two guards came a grabbed me tight!
Ageha: What? Let me go!!!
Yori: Let her go, you scumbags!
Maxy: Don’t worry! They will her go, once you win in duel against our champion!
Yori: Champion?!
Maxy: Yes! You are going to duel!
Yori: And what if you refuse?
Maxy: Then I’m afraid your little girlfriend here is going to be hurt!
Ageha: I AM NOT HIS GIRLFRIEND!
Yori: I’ll duel! And I will WIN!!!
Maxy: Excellent!
Yori and Maxy went into some kind of weird looking door, while those gorilla guards pulled me to some kind of arena. It was full of people cheering and screaming. Down in arena was Yori and some kind guy even bigger then gorilla guards named Greig. I hope that Yori can win this duel!
Yori, Greig: Let’s duel!

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Chapter 18. Gladiators!

Greig: This is going to be a Turbo Duel, if you don’t mind, boy!
Yori: It doesn’t matter to me as long as you let Ageha go free at end!
Grieg: That won’t be that easy, boy!
Yori: What?
Grieg: You will have to win to get the girl back. If not she will become gladiator here!
Yori: I won’t allow that!
Some people brought out two D-Wheels. One looked plain, but other was looked like it has been brought right from hell. Yori got the plain one of course, but it looked like he doesn’t care.
Greig: Riding Duel….
Greig and Yori: ACCELARATION!
Obviously Greig took the first corner with that monster D-Wheel.
Greig: I’ll go first! Draw! I summon Gladiator Beast Laquari in Attack position, set a card face-down (Defensive Tactics) and end my turn!
Yori: My turn! Draw!
Yori and Greig have 1 Speed Counter now.
Yori: I can send one monster card from hand to grave to Special Summon this monster. I discard Quillbolt Hedgehog to Special Summon Quickdraw Synchron from my hand. Next I activate Quillbolt Hedgehog’s effect. If I have a tuner monster on field I can Special Summon it from my graveyard. I summon Level Eater in Defense position.
Greig: What can these weak monsters do?
Yori: You’ll see! I tune level 5 Quickdraw Synchron with level 2 Quillbolt Hedgehog and level 1 Level Eater. Clustering hopes will evoke a new horizon! Become the path its light shines upon! Synchro Summon! Dash foward, Road Warrior!
Greig: Now this is something!
Yori: I activate Road Warrior’s effect! Once per turn I can Special Summon Level 2 or lower Warrior or Machine-type monster from my deck. I Special Summon Speed Warrior in Attack. Now, Road Warrior attack Gladiator Beast Laquari! Speed Slash!
Greig: I activate Trap – Defensive Tactics! This turn my “Gladiator Beast” monster cannot be destroyed by battle and battle damage is reduced to 0. And this card instead of being sent to graveyard is sent at the bottom of my deck!
Yori: I set a card face-down (Limit Reverse) and end my turn!
Greig: My turn! Draw!
Yori and Greig have 2 Speed Counters.
Grieg: I summon Gladiator Beast Reptiari in Attack position. Now, Gladiator Beast Laquari attack Speed Warrior! Flame Ring!
Speed Warrior is destroyed and Yori’s life points drop from 4000 to 3100.
Greig: Next, I activate Gladiator Beasts Laquari’s effect. At end of Battle Phase if this card attacked or was attacked, I can return it to Deck to Special Summon “Gladiator Beast” monster! I Special summon Gladiator Beast Murmillo! When Murmillo is Special Summoned by effect Gladiator Beast monster, I can destroy one monster on field. I destroy Road Warrior!
Road Warrior is destroyed and sent to graveyard.
Yori: What?!
Greig: I set a card face-down (Gladiator Beast War Chariot) and end my turn!
Yori: My turn! Draw!
Yori and Greig have 3 Speed Counters.
Yori: I summon Synchron Explorer in Defense position! When this monster is Normal Summoned, I can Special Summon 1 “Synchron” monster from my graveyard with its effects negated. Next, I activate Trap – Limit Reverse! It allows me to summon 1 monster from my graveyard with 1000 or less ATK in Attack position. I Special Summon Level Eater!
Greig: Synchro Summon again?
Yori: I tune level 5 Quickdraw Synchron with level 2 Synchron Explorer and level 1 Level Eater! Clustering wishes will become a new shining star! Become the path its light shines upon! Synchro Summon! Take flight, Stardust Dragon!
Greig: A dragon? Nice to see something else except those pieces of junk! Hahaha!
Yori: Grrr! Stardust Dragon attack Gladiator Beast Laquari! Shooting Sonic!
Gladiator Beast Laquari is destroyed and Greig’s life points drop from 4000 to 3300.
Yori: I end my turn!
Greig: It’s my turn! Draw!
Greig and Yori have 4 Speed Counters.
Greig: I summon Gladiator Beast Holomus in Defense position and switch Murmillo into Defense. Next, I activate effect of Speed World 2! By removing 4 Speed Counters I can inflict 800 damage to your life points for each Speed Spell in my hand! I have one (Power Baton).
Greig has 0 Speed Counters and Yori’s life points drop from 3100 to 2300.
Greig: I set card face-down (Sakuretsu Armor) and end my turn!
Yori: My turn! Draw!
Yori has 5 Speed Counters, Greig has 1 Speed Counter.
Yori: Stardust Dragon attack Gladiator Beast Holomus! Shooting Sonic!
Greig: I activate Trap – Sakuretsu Armor! It destroys your attacking monster!
Yori: I activate effect of Stardust Dragon! By removing it from play I can negate activation of effect card that destroys monster and destroy it.
Greig: I don’t think so! I activate Counter Trap – Gladiator Beast War Chariot! While I control “Gladiator Beast” monster, I can negate activation of your effect monsters effect and destroy it!
Yori: No way! Stardust Dragon!
Greig: So pathetic! Your girlfriend there will be forced into gladiator fights and yet you can’t do anything to help her!
Yori: I will get Ageha out of this mess for sure! I summon Shield Wing in Defense position and End my turn!
Greig: My turn! Draw!
Greig has 2 Speed Counters, Yori has 6 Speed Counters.
Greig: I release Gladiator Beast Murmillo to summon Gladiator Beast Spartacus in Attack position. Now Gladiator Beast Spartacus attack Shield Wing! Gladiator Axe!
Yori: I activate Shield Wing’s effect. Up to twice per turn, if he would be destroyed by battle, he isn’t!
Grieg: I activate Spartacus effect. At the end of Battle Phase when this monster attacked or was attacked, I can return it to Deck to Special Summon “Gladiator Beast” monster. I Special Summon Gladiator Beast Octavius and end my turn!
Yori: My turn! Draw!
Yori has 7 Speed Counters, Greig has 3 Speed Counters.
Greig: You should just give up, boy! You can’t do anything to save your girlfriend anymore!
Yori: I WILL SAVE AGEHA! I WILL NEVER LET HER DOWN!
Yori looked so determinated and serious. He honestly wants to help me.
Yori: I activate Speed Spell – Angel Baton. It allows me to draw 2 cards and later discard 1 (Quillbolt Hedgehog).
Greig: You think you can still win?!
Yori: No. I KNOW that I can win!
Greig: What?
Yori: I activate Speed Spell – Dragon Arise. If I have 7 or more Speed Counters, I can Special Summon a level 7 or higher Dragon-type Synchro monster from my graveyard. Its effects are negated, ATK becomes 0 and it is removed from play at End Phase of this turn. Rise again, Stardust Dragon.
Greig: Hahaha! 0 ATK! What can it actually do?!
Yori: You’ll see that! I activate another Speed Spell – Vision Wind! I can Special Summon level 2 or lower monster from my graveyard. I Special Summon Level Eater. Next, I activate effect of Speed World 2! By removing 7 Speed Counters I can draw 1 card.
Yori’s Speed Counters become 0.
Yori: Now, I summon tuner monster Unknown Synchron in Defense position. I tune level 1 Unknown Synchron with level 1 Level Eater! Gathering wishes will call out a new speed's horizon! Become the path its light shines upon! Synchro Summon! The Power of Hope, Synchro Tuner, Formula Synchron!
Ageha: When did he learn that?
Yori: Seeing Ageha and Damir Accel Synchro made it clear for me, how to do it!
Greig: Accel Synchro? Are you out of your mind! That kind of thing doesn’t exsist!
Yori: I think it does!
Suddenly blue aura surrounded Yori and on his arm a red, glowing mark that looked like an eye appeared. It was the same thing that happened with me and Damir!
Yori: CLEAR MIND! I tune level 2 Formula Synchro with level 8 Stardust Dragon. Gathering crystals will form together new star of hope. Bring forth new miracle! ACCEL SYNCHRO! Spread your wings, Star Crystal Dragon!
Greig: What?! Impossible!

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Post  Gorz 2011-08-23, 00:27

Ageha-Chan I miss your fan fic. Please come back D:
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Well, I wanted to stop writing this, but since somebody actually wants me to continue it! XD

Chapter 19. Powers?!

Yori: Star Crystal Dragon attack Gladiator Beast Octavius! Crystal Sonic!
Gladiator Beast Octavius is destroyed and Greig’s life points drop from 3300 to 2600.
Yori: I end my turn.
Greig: My turn! Draw!
Yori has 1 Speed Counter, Greig has 4 Speed Counters.
Greig: I activate Speed World 2 effect. By removing 4 Speed Counters I can inflict 800 damage to you for each Speed Spell in my hand. I have two (Power Baton; The End of Storm).
Yori’s life points drop from 2300 to 700.
Greig: Next, I summon Gladiator Beast Equeste in Defense position, set card face-down (Mirror Force) and end my turn.
Yori: It’s my turn! Draw!
Yori has 2 Speed Counters, Greig has 1 Speed Counter.
Yori: I summon Road Runner is Defense position! Next I activate Speed Spell – High Speed Crash! If I have 2 or more Speed Counters, I can destroy one card I control and 1 other card on field! I destroy Road Runner and Gladiator Beast Equeste.
Gladiator Beast Equeste and Road Runner are destroyed and sent to graveyard.
Yori: Star Crystal Dragon attack Greig directly! Crystal Sonic!
Greig: I activate Trap – Mirror Force! When my opponent declares attack, I can destroy all Attack position monsters you control.
Yori: I activate effect of Star Crystal Dragon! By removing this card from play, I can negate activation of your Spell or Trap card and destroy it!
Greig: So stupid! Removing your monster from play!!!
Yori: That’s not it! At End Phase Star Crystal Dragon is revived! I end my turn!!!
Greig: Wha?! Grrr. My turn! Draw!
Greig has 2 Speed Counters, Yori has 3 Speed Counters.
Greig: I summon Gladiator Beast Secutor in Defense! This is end for you, boy! Next turn I will have enough Speed Counters to inflict damage to your life points and you have already passed the safety line! Hahaha! I end my turn!
Yori: Well, I guess I’ll have to end it now then! My turn! Draw!
Yori has 4 Speed Counters, Greig has 3 Speed Counters.
Yori: I activate Speed Spell – Defense Buster! If I have 2 or more Speed Counters, I can switch 1 monster into Attack position! I switch Gladiator Beast Secutor into Attack position!
Greig: NO!
Yori: Star Crystal Dragon attack Gladiator Beast Secutor! Crystal Sonic!!!
Gladiator Beast Secutor is destroyed and Grieg’s life points drop to 0.
Greig’s D-Wheel stopped and for a moment all stadium went quiet from shock. But soon they started to cheer for Yori.
Maxy: Ladies and gentlemen, welcome your new Gladiator champion – YORI!!!
Yori: Keep talk to yourself! Release Ageha, NOW!!!
Maxy: Of course! Whatever my champion wishes!
Gorilla’s that were holding me, guided me down to Yori, who quickly grabbed my hand and pulled me out of this crazy stadium.
Maxy: Wait! Champion can’t leave the….
Yori: I have no intention of being your puppet! Go and find another idiot to play your game.
Yori looked quite irritated about this entire thing. Was he really that worried about me?
Ageha: Yori! Thank you for helping me!
Yori: It’s only natural that I’d help you!
Ageha: It’s good that you learned how to Accel Synchro! Now we are one step closer to defeating Shadow Riders and Red Devil.
Yori: Yes. And now when this is over, let’s go home!
Ageha: Okay!
At my house, Genou and Damir were waiting for us to return. Mostly for me to return, because they were hungry!
Damir: Where exactly were you two?
Yori: Some crazy gladiator stadium. They got Ageha and I had to save her as her loyal knight in shining armor!!!
Ageha: Don’t get carried away! Anyway, the important thing is that Yori learned how to Accel Synchro.
Damir: That’s great news! What power does Yori possess?
Ageha: Clear Mind!
Yori: By the way, don’t I and Ageha suppose to have some powers like you?
Damir: Yes, but I think it will take time until we discovered them!
Yori: I bet mine will be really cool! Like lazers coming from eyes!
Ageha: I really doubt that you’ll have any power like that!
Damir: I can check and see what kind of powers had previous Light Saviors!
Ageha: There’s a book that says that?
Damir: Yes. For normal people it’s just a story book, but for us it carries important information about Light Saviors.
He took out some old looking book and placed it on table.
Damir: Let’s see! Clear Mind had power of incredible intelegence in dueling.
Yori: Meaning?
Damir: Meaning that one who posseses Clear Mind never lost in a duel!
Yori: Cool! And what about Burning Soul?
Damir: Burning Soul said to possess most unique and powerful ability. It has lead many Burning Soul possesers into darkness and rarely which Light Savior who posseses Burning Soul kept its natural kindness.
Ageha: What?!
Yori: What kind of power had Burning Soul?
Damir: It’s said here, that he/she could make duel monsters become real and alive!
Ageha: Impossible!!! Something like that can’t be real! It has never happened to me before.
Genou: Why don’t we check if it really works or not?
Damir: Yes, we should check! Maybe there’s a mistake in book.
Yori: But let’s go outside!
Ageha: Why?
Yori: Just in case it’s true! I don’t think Red Dragon Archfiend could fit in this house!
Ageha: That power thing is nonsense!
We all went outside in my yard and I activated my duel disk. I took out card of Red Dragon Archfiend and looked at it carefully. There’s no way that I could possess such power!
Ageha: I’ll prove that this power is a lie!!!
Yori: Yes, but Ageha to actually you have to try to make it real!
Ageha: I understand that!
I concentrated on Red Dragon Archfiend and imagined it becoming real. Mark of fire appeared on my arm and started glowing red. Was this a sign that I can actually do it?
Ageha: Rise in sky, my soul – Red Dragon Archfiend!
At same second Red Dragon Archfiend appeared in sky and he was…. Real!!!!! Actual breeze came from flap of his wings and I felt warmth coming from his body.
Yori: It’s real!!!
Red Dragon Archfiend slowly landed not too far from me and looked at me carefully. He was beautiful, prideful and strong. I stepped closer to my dragon.
Genou: What are you doing? Don’t go closer to him! That dragon is dangerous!!!!
I ignored what Genou said and went even closer to Red Dragon Archfiend. He looked down on me and bent his head lower so that I could reach it. I carefully and slowly reached out my hand to touch Red Dragon Archfiend. He didn’t resist or show any expressions that would make me think that he doesn’t want me to do that. I gently touched Red Dragon Archfiend face. It was really warm and nice.
Yori: He didn’t resist!
Suddenly Red Dragon Archfiend lifted me up with his hands and flapped his wings.

Damir: WHAT?!!! AGEHA!!!
Ageha: It’s okay! He won’t hurt me!
Red Dragon Archfiend flew up high up in sky with me in his arms. Even though I have always been afraid of high places, I wasn’t scared now. Red Dragon Archfiend made me feel save. He was saying to me that he won’t hurt. After little while he flew down again and let me go. Damir, Yori and Genou have gone completely pale.
Ageha: What are you guys so scared about? It’s Red Dragon Archfiend! He wouldn’t hurt me!
Yori: I’m glad that he wouldn’t!
Genou: But we have a little problem now!
Ageha: What?
Genou: How can we get back Red Dragon Archfiend back in card? We can’t just keep him out! He is too big.
Ageha: I don’t know that!
Yori: Maybe take card out of duel disk.
Ageha: It’s worth a try. Sorry, Red Dragon Archfiend.
Red Dragon Archfiend bowed his head, telling me that he understands. I took his card out of duel disk and Red Dragon Archfiend disappeared just as fast as he appeared. My arm stopped glowing too.
Ageha: This ability is quite cool actually.
Damir: Um…guys! We were seen!
I looked and saw that Dragan was standing in middle of road with shocked expression on his face.
Ageha: Oh boy!
Dragan: WHAT THE HELL DID JUST HAPPEN HERE?

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Hair color: Black
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Family: Mother, Father, Older sister
Main Deck: Elemental Hero
Ace Monster: Elemental Hero Shining Flare Wingman
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Post  Gorz 2011-08-25, 17:31

Lol. Glad you came back Ageha. Me and my sister and even thecicada love your fan fic. We even voted for you in the Best Writer area of the forums. Very Happy
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Post  Ageha13 2011-08-26, 04:15

@Gorz Thanks! I never knew that such thing exsisted! XD

Chapter 20. Rise of Chaos!

Yori: This is bad!!!
Genou: Guys, that’s not the only problem.
Genou pointed at silver haired guy, who didn’t look shocked at all.
Ageha: Dragan! You see that was…
???: It was test for new dueling system that I made recently!
Dragan: But it looked real! Real wind appeared and Ageha was actually lifted up in air!
???: That was an illusion too! Right, Ageha?
Ageha: Y-Yes! I mean come on! How can Red Dragon Archfiend be real?!
Yori: Yes! Just as Ageha said! It’s impossible!
Dragan: I guess that’s true. But that’s an amazing illusion!
Ageha: A-Anyway, since you’re here, why don’t you come inside?
Dragan: Sure. I needed to talk to you!
Ageha: Of course! I just need to talk to …. New technology inventer here! Yori, Genou! Why don’t you lead Dragan inside?
Genou: Sure!
Silver haired guy came closer to me.
Ageha: Thank you for helping us, but…
???: Don’t worry! I’m a Light Savior just like you!
Ageha: How did you know that I’m a Light Savior?
???: Duel Spirits told me!
Ageha: Duel Spirits?
???: Yes, just like you, I have special powers. As Burning Soul you can make monsters become real, while I as Shining Spirit can talk to duel spirits.
Ageha: I see.
???: As far as I understand, you’re not the only Light Savior here.
Ageha: Yes. Yori and Damir are Light Saviors too and it’s possible that Genou is Light Savior too.
???: That’s good. If all Light Saviors gather, we have chance of stopping Red Devil!
Ageha: You know about all that?!
???: Yes, but as for now, I’ll take my leave!
Ageha: Wait! Aren’t we suppose to stick together?
???: Don’t worry! I will come back soon. See ya!
Ageha: What is your name?
???: Kaiza!
With that the new met Light Savior left. I went inside to see what Draragon wanted.
Ageha: So what brought you back here?
Dragan: I came with news! Not good ones. I thought that you should know that.
Ageha: What happened?
Dragan: Our hometown has been taken over some duel gang named Shadow Riders!
Ageha, Damir: SHADOW RIDERS?!!!
Dragan: Yes! They have stolen all the best cards and taken them to themselves. If they see someone dueling then they instantly beat them up!
Ageha: That’s terrible!!!
Dragan: Yes! And I came here to ask your help. I want to make duel gang that could beat Shadow Riders. Will…
Damir: That’s a great idea! We will all help you!
Dragan: Really?
Damir: Yes! Our goal is to destroy Shadow Riders anyway!
Ageha: Maybe we should ask Kaiza to come too.
Yori: Kaiza?
Ageha: That’s the guy earlier on street! He is same as us!
Yori: Really? That’s perfect! Let’s ask for his help then!
Genou: But how can we get in touch with him?
Ageha: He said that he will come back, but I don’t know when.
Dragan: Then let’s wait until he shows up and then go and get rid of those Shadow Riders!
Ageha: Yes! But today let’s all go and rest! Dragan you can stay at my house today!
Dragan: Okay!
We all went to our rooms to rest. I fell asleep quickly since summoning Red Dragon Archfiend somehow drained my strength.
Next morning I woke up because someone was knocking front door. I quickly went to open it and saw Kaiza.

Kaiza: Yo! I heard you need my help!
Ageha: How….
Kaiza: Duel spirits told me! Since this case concerns me as Light Savior, I’m going to help you!
Ageha: Thank you very much!
Kaiza: But I want to duel that Genou guy first!
Ageha: Why?
Kaiza: I want to check if he is a Light Savior!
Ageha: I’m not sure if….
Genou: I accept your challenge!
Ageha: You are awake already?
Genou: Yes, I heard knock so I came to check.
Kaiza: Let’s go outside then, shall we?
Genou: Yes!
Genou and Kaiza confidentily stood across each other with their duel disks ready.
Kaiza, Genou: Let’s duel!
Kaiza: You can go first!
Genou: Okay! Draw! I summon Blackwings – Zephyros the Elite in Attack position. I set two cards face-down (Blackback; Icarus Attack) and end my turn!
Kaiza: My turn! Draw! When my opponent controls a monster and I control no monster, I can Special Summon Cyber Dragon from my hand. Next, I summon tuner monster Krebons in Attack postion!
Genou: I activate Trap – Icarus Attack! By tributing one Winged-Beast type monster I control, I can destroy two monsters you control. I tribute Zephyros The Elite to destroy Cyber Dragon and Krebons.
Blackwings – Zephyros The Elite, Cyber Dragon and Krebons are destroyed and sent to grave.
Kaiza: I wanted to finish you in one turn, but oh well. By removing 1 Dark monster and 1 Light monster in my graveyard from play I can Special Summon – Black Luster Soldier – Envoy The Beginning from my hand. Black Luster Soldier attack Genou directly! Sword of Envoy!
Genou’s life points drop from 4000 to 1000.
Kaiza: I end my turn!
Genou: I won’t give up so easy! My turn! Draw! I activate Trap – Blackback. It allows me to Special Summon “Blackwing” monster from my grave with 2000 or less ATK, but I cannot normal summon this turn! I Special Summon Blackwings – Zephyros The Elite! Next, if I control a “Blackwings” monster I can Special Summon Blackwings – Gale The Whirlwind from my hand.
Kaiza: Now we’re talking!
Genou: I activate Gale’s effect. Once per turn I can half ATK of one of your monsters! I halve ATK of Black Luster Soldier! Now, Zephyros The Elite attack Black Luster Soldier!
Black Luster Soldier is destroyed and Kaiza’s life points drop from 4000 to 3900.
Genou: Gale The Whirlwind attack Kaiza directly!
Kaiza’s life points drop from 3900 to 2600.
Genou: Now I tune level 3 Blackwings – Gale The Whirlwind with level 4 Blackwings – Zephyros The Elite! Darkened gales, become the wings which will soar to heavens! Synchro Summon! Spread your wings, Blackwings – Armor Master! I end my turn!
Kaiza: Now it’s starting to get interesting! My turn! Draw! I summon Sangan in Defense position and end my turn!
Genou: That defense won’t save you! My turn! Draw! Blackwings – Armor Master attack Sangan! Black Hurricane!
Sangan is destroyed and sent to graveyard.
Kaiza: I activate Sangan’s effect! When it is sent from field to graveyard, I can add one monster with 1500 or less ATK from Deck to my hand. I add Junk Synchron!
Genou: I end my turn!
Kaiza: It’s my turn! Draw! I Special Summon Cyber Dragon from my hand!
Genou: Another one?!!
Kaiza: Yes! Next, I summon tuner monster Junk Synchron in Attack position. Now I tune level 3 Junk Synchron with level 5 Cyber Dragon. Rise your sword avenging knight! Protect light that shines upon this world! Synchro Summon, come forth – Avenging Knight Parshath!

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Chapter 21. Spreading shadows!

Kaiza: Now, I activate Avenging Knight Parshath’s effect. Once per turn I can change battle position of one of your monsters. I switch Blackwings – Armor Master into Defense, set a card face-down (Fires of Doomsday) and end my turn!
Genou: My turn! Draw! I summon Blackwing – Vayu The Emblem of Honor in Defense position and switch Armor Master in Attack position. Next, Blackwing – Armor Master attack Avenging Knight Parshath! Black Hurricane!
Kaiza: What’s the point of doing that? Avenging Knight Parshath’s ATK is higher.
Genou: Oh there is! When Armor Master attack monster, I can place 1 “Wedge” counter on that monster.
Kaiza: I activate Quick-play Spell – Fires of Doomsday! It allows me to summon 2 “Doomsday tokens” in Defense position.
Genou: I end my turn!
Kaiza: Watch now carefully, Genou! You will have to learn this! My turn! Draw! By removing Doomsday token I control, I can Special Summon D.D. Sprite from my hand. Next, I tune level 1 D.D. Sprite with level 1 Doomsday token! Fairy spirits will gather to see birth of new hope! Synchro Summon! Arise in light, Synchro tuner - Fairy Spirit!
Genou: Synchro Tuner? Could it be? Accel Synchro!
Kaiza: I activate Fairy Spirit’s effect! When this card is Synchro Summoned I can add level 3 or lower monster from graveyard to my hand. I add Sangan! Now I’ll show you how to be a true Light Savior! Watch carefully!
Genou: Okay! Show me!
Kaiza: I tune level 2 Fairy Spirit with level 8 Avenging Knight Parshath! Shimmering light of fairies will gather. Enlighten darknest for those who are lost!
A warm yellow aura appeared around Kaiza. A red mark which looked like little spirit appeared on his arm! He truly is a Light Savior!
Kaiza: SHINING SPIRIT! ACCEL SYNCHRO! Enlighten the sky, Shimmering Light Dragon!
Genou: WOW!
Kaiza: Next, I summon Gellenduo in Attack position and activate Shimmering Light Dragon’s effect! By removing from play 1 Fairy-type monster in my graveyard, I can negate effect of one of your monster until end of this turn!
Genou: Oh no!
Kaiza: I remove from play D.D. Sprite to negate effects of Blackwings - Armor Master! Now, Gellenduo attack Blackwing – Vayu The Emblem of Honor!
Blackwing – Vayu The Emblem of Honor is destroyed and sent to graveyard.
Kaiza: Shimmering Light Dragon attack Blackwing – Armor Master! Light Mirage!
Blackwing Armor Master is destroyed and Genou’s life points drop from 1000 to 300.
Kaiza: I end my turn!
Genou: It’s my turn! Draw! I activate Vayu’s effect in my graveyard! I can Synchro Summon with him in my graveyard. I remove from play level 1 Blackwing – Vayu The Emblem of Honor and level 7 Blackwing – Armor Master! Darkened gales, become the wings that soar from resolved hope! Synchro Summon! Soar, Black-Winged Dragon!
Kaiza: Interesting! Never saw anything like this before!
Genou: I summon tuner monster Blackwing - Jin The Rain Shadow in Denfense position. Black-Winged Dragon attack Gellenduo! Noble Stream!
Gellenduo is destroyed and Kaiza’s life points drop from 2600 to 1500.
Genou: I set a card face-down (Waboku) and end my turn!
Kaiza: My turn! Draw! Shimmering Light Dragon attack Black-Winged Dragon! Light Mirage!
Genou: I activate Trap card – Waboku! Until end of this turn my monsters cannot be destroyed by battle and all battle damage is reduced to 0.
Kaiza: Good! You’re on the right path! I end my turn.
Genou: My turn! DRAW!
For moment Genou went silent. He seemed to be thinking hard and then suddenly he looked very confident about what he was doing.
Genou: I summon Blackwing – Jetstream The Blue Sky in Defense position! Next, I tune level 1 Blackwing – Jin The Rain Shadow with level 1 Blackwing – Jetstream The Blue Sky to Synchro Summon, Synchro tuner Blackwing – Sunrise The Flare.
Ageha: Could it be that he knows how to Accel Synchro already?
Genou: I tune level 2 Blackwing – Sunrise The Flare with level 8 Black-Winged Dragon! Black Feathers will soar through sky! Come out from depths of dark storm!
Just like it happened with other Light Saviors, Green aura surrounded Genou and red glowing mark that looked like wings appeared on his arm!
Genou: LIGHT BODY! ACCEL SYNCHRO! Soar through sky, Black Storm Dragon!
Ageha: Amazing! Two Accel Synchro monster on field!!!
Genou: But my dragon is stronger! Black Storm Dragon attack……
Suddenly Damir ran out of house right in middle of duel.
Damir: STOP!!!
Genou: What? Why?
Damir: Light Saviors cannot fight each other with their ace monsters! That can lead to bad end!
Kaiza: Damir is right!
Genou: Then why did you challenge me to duel if we can’t each other properly?
Kaiza: I wanted you to awaken your powers! We will need strength of all Light Saviors to stop Shadow Riders.
Genou: I see. Let’s count this as draw then!
Kaiza: Yes. Ageha, we should go soon.
Ageha: I’ll go and get Dragan and Yori.
I woke up Dragan and Yori, gave everybody breakfast before long road and got my duel disk ready. Damir set up our D-Wheels since they are only transport that could get us to Seapuru Town. Dragan and Kaiza had D-Wheels too of course.
Soon we all were on our way to Seapuru Town. We rode silently without saying a word. After about 2 hours we reached Seapuru Town. Everything looked terrible. Few houses were burned and all around was nothing but chaos. There were no people on streets except some weirdos in cloaks but I assume those are underdogs of Shadow Riders.

Dragan: Oh my God! It has gotten even worse now!
Ageha: We must stop this!
Yori: Hey, what’s that?
Ageha: Where?
Yori: There! In middle of town!
He pointed at place where middle of town was. Smoke was coming from there and I could hear some weird singing.
Damir: Those are most likely Shadow Riders! Let’s go and see what are they doing, but let’s try not to get in their sight!
Ageha: Okay!
We all quickly sneaked closer to town center. I could see at least twenty Shadow Riders gathered in big circle while singing some weird song whose words I didn’t understand.
Damir: Oh, no! They’ve found it!
Ageha: Found what?
Damir: Place where first tower that sealed Red Devil is! See that circle! That’s where tower is!
Ageha: We must stop them!
Yori: But how?
Kaiza: Defeat them all in duel obviously!
Dragan: Look, they all split up!
Damir: Ritual to unseal tower in long and can’t be done in one day! They will continue this thing later!
Ageha: This our chance to stop them!
Kaiza: It will be faster if we split in groups of two!
Yori: Agreed!
Damir: Okay then. Yori will go with Genou, Kaiza with Dragan and Ageha with me! Any objections?
Ageha: None at all! Me and Damir will go straight, Yori and Genou go to left, Kaiza and Dragan go to right!
Kaiza: Okay! Good luck everyone!
With these words everybody went to direction I showed them.
Me and Damir quietly sneaked forward looking carefully to see some Shadow Riders.

Damir: Look, there are two!
Ageha: Okay, let’s challenge them.
Shadow Rider 1: Hey, look! Those two are not citizens here!
Damir: Indeed we are not. Duel us!
Shadow Rider 2: As you wish we’ll make it a Tag duel then.
Ageha: As you wish!
Shadow Rider 1: But this won’t be an ordinary duel.
Damir: What do you mean by that?
Suddenly blue flame surrounded us and everything around grew dark.
Ageha: What the….?
Shadow Rider 1: You’ll see!


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Post  Gorz 2011-09-09, 15:55

Loving it Ageha.
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Post  Lovelace 2011-10-04, 19:20

I still think Yori is N.
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Post  Ageha13 2011-10-06, 08:58

Sorry to announce it but this fanfic will be stopped due school, me quitting duelling and not much people being interested in it.
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Post  Johnny Raptor 2011-10-24, 21:49

Ageha13 wrote:Sorry to announce it but this fanfic will be stopped due school, me quitting duelling and not much people being interested in it.

Not to get all Kamina all up on this, but... your sig tells me you should do otherwise. You'll be able to find balance, trust me on that. =p

If the problem is lack of interest, try not to care. I whine about that a lot, but I still keep posting. Heck, I'm about to do the crazy thing and put it on FF.net for the Yaoi Readers of that site to take my stuff the wrong way. XD

In short:

Never give up, no matter what!

Follow your sig, and *Keep on Burning Soul!* as Masaaki Endoh's Clear Mind says. XD
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Post  Ageha13 2011-10-25, 05:23

I don't write Yu-Gi-Oh fiction anymore! It bores me! If I start writing this thing again then there are 2 possible outsomes:
1) It becomes completely boring and actionless (which it already kind of was due all card games)
2) It will become completely unrelated to yugioh. Meaning it will turn from fan-fic into fiction


Also, I never said I'm giving on writing itself. I'm still writing story and I have them posted on internet.
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Post  Johnny Raptor 2011-10-25, 06:50

Ageha13 wrote:I don't write Yu-Gi-Oh fiction anymore! It bores me! If I start writing this thing again then there are 2 possible outsomes:
1) It becomes completely boring and actionless (which it already kind of was due all card games)
2) It will become completely unrelated to yugioh. Meaning it will turn from fan-fic into fiction


Also, I never said I'm giving on writing itself. I'm still writing story and I have them posted on internet.

Iirc, but being completely unrelated to Yu-Gi-Oh! isn't a bad thing. Surf on FF.net, you'll find most fics are 0% Duels, and more of... well... Yaoi... ._.

But anyhoo, I was droppin' by more to say that it's good, and you could take a stab at finishing it when you're free. =p
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Post  Ageha13 2011-10-25, 07:08

Unfornetly, the problem is that my time packed. Studies, school projects, other story, language learning.
If you guys really want to read my fics so bad, read them on deviantart.

P.S. I don't write neither Yaoi or Yuri
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Post  Johnny Raptor 2011-10-25, 08:15

Ageha13 wrote:P.S. I don't write neither Yaoi or Yuri

If I implied that you did so, I'm sorry. o_o;
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