New Demon on the Block (Devil May cry Fanfic!)
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New Demon on the Block (Devil May cry Fanfic!)
Goddess nX 2011-07-28, 12:09
Well guys, I DO love to write, and I LOVE Devil may cry. I've probably played All the games so far multiple times, learning glitches, combos, etc. But enough about that, on to the FANFIC!
Chapter one
Chapter two
Chapter three
Chapter three is up!
Chapter one
- Spoiler:
- "Dammit!" Yumi called out. Looking behind her, thousands of demons were giving chase. All different shapes and sizes. All set out to do one thing, bring her back to hell. The only problem was, Yumi didn't want to go back to hell. She wanted to live freely, she couldn't deal with that life. Living in the demon world, Watching as humans were turned into demons themselves. She wasn't even a full demon!
After using the portal to escape, she found herself being chased by hundreds of demons, minutes after she was being chased by thousands, and it was only getting worse, her only option was to get to Central City as fast as she could, the Demons wouldn't give chase there. Because there lied the most powerful entity in the Human world. There lied the son of Sparta.
"Dante!" She yelled, running as fast as she could. Yumi didn't know why she yelled his name, all she knew was that she was almost there. Her dark red hair following her gracefully. Her eyes looking left and right. Instead of her usual blue eyes, they were now blood red. She was sensing for anyone that could help her, and any demons that were trying to ambush her. She could sense Dante, it wasn't too far, she was at the outskirts of the city. "Just a little more!" She smiled, seeing the entrance just a mile away. Her only chance at freedom, away from those horrible demons. Away from everything that's ever happened. She could start a new life.
Then a demon jumped behind her, grabbing onto her legs, Causing her to fall. She violently kicked and pushed, yelling and screaming. "No! No! I won't go back!" she quickly turned around and saw the onslaught of demons rushing towards her. She yelled and kicked the demon as hard as she could. It finally gave up and let go. Yumi quickly scrambled to her feet and began running. Her heart beating as fast as she had ever felt it. She was so close, she could almost touch the brick wall. As she got to the entrance she turned around. The demons nowhere to be seen. She smiled victoriously. Her eyes appearing to their normal blue color. As she turned around to begin her search she felt a sharp pain in her chest. Then her world went black.
What felt like moments later, she found herself in a hospital bed. Almost becoming frightened, she immediately calmed down when a young man graced her with a smile.
"Hello ma'am. How are you doing"
Yumi blinked twice and finally smiled. He didn't look like a demon to her. Which was good. "Y..yes" she stammered. "I'm fine"
The man, who turned out to be a nurse, began writing things on his clipboard. "you're the luckiest woman I've ever met. An arrow pierced through your chest and had just missed your heart by not even a fingernail. You'll be able to leave soon but" he stopped for a moment before smiling again. "we have no record of you, not even one. It's like you don't even exist. Just who are you miss..?"
Yumi looked left and right. Wondering wether to give him an alias or her real name. "Rachel" she blurted out. "Rachel Weatherfield"
The nurse nodded. "I'll be right back miss Weatherfield" He walked out of the room. Disappearing from her sight.
At that moment Yumi quickly stood up and looked around, she found a window and looked down. Two stories high it seemed. That was a perfect height for her to jump down. She climbed out the window and jumped. A surge of wind blow towards her, and the excitement screamed out of her body. She landed forcefully, crating a small crater with her feet. It had seemed that no one noticed, and she jolted out of sight. Into an alleyway. Now she needed clothes. "Great.." she murmured. Staring down at her tattered gown. She turned left, entering a small apartment. She checked if anyone had left their door open, and about two floors up someone had. She walked inside and looked around. The place was small and empty, save for some dirty things on the ground. She opened the closet adjacent to the bed near the door. There were female clothes there, all her size luckily. "What a lucky girl I am!" Yumi smiled.
She pulled out some underwear, bra, some tight blue jeans, matching shirt, and some nice sneakers. The shirt was a tad bit tight as well, but the outfit showed her form nicely. Now she had to find Dante. She quickly left the house and outside. It was then she noticed how warm and beautiful central city was...well, more beautiful than the demon world was. She smiled and decided to walk around, looking for it herself. Her eyes became blood red. Sensing for Dante's demon aura. She could not find it, it was being hidden. Her eyes changed back. Looks like she had to do it the old-fashioned way. "This might take a while" she murmured.
Seconds turned into minutes. Minutes turned into hours. After three she gave up and walked into a restaurant. Where she heard a waitress giving a man with white hair and a strange red coat some smack talk. He looked very charming. Young face, slim but strong body. Yumi wondered why the waitress was yelling at him. The man stood up and walked away. For some strange reason Yumi felt compelled to speak to him.
"Excuse me!" Yumi called out to him from across the street. The man turned around and stopped. Yumi caught up to him and gave him the widest smile she had. Showing her strangely bright white teeth. "Uhm..do you know a man named Dante"
The man looked at her up and down. "Well pretty lady, that would be me" he grinned and grabbed her by the waist. "Now, what's a pretty girl like you want with the famous Dante?"
Yumi became disgusted a little, pushing away from him,but he was telling the truth, a demonic aura filled her senses around him, but it wasn't normal demonic Aura, it was the one of Sparda himself. "Could I..uhh..speak to you someplace private?"
Dante smiled. "Sure, my office is just a couple of blocks away" he began to walk and Yumi quickly followed. He took a very crazy walk filled with alleyways until they began to walk through a Large alleyway. He stopped in front of the building. "Devil May Cry" was what the sign said on top of the door. He opened it. Yumi followed, closing the door behind her. Turning around she noticed a dirty room, the smell of pizza filling her nostrils, and a large desk in front of her. Dante laid back on his chair and planted both feet on the desk, crossing his legs. "So..what is it you wanna talk about?"
Yumi sighed. Now in front of the legendary Dante, she began to hesitate. She may tell the truth, but would Dante believe her? He doesn't have a good track record speaking to demons besides his brother..so she could be screwed. "Can you trust me one hundred percent? I need to know before we move forward"
Dante looked at her awkwardly but laughed. "Sure babe, you could talk about anything with me" He rested his hands behind his head. So casually.
Yumi nodded. "There are demons chasing me"
"Demons?" Dante sat down normally. "That sounds serious, do you know why they are chasing you?"
"They want to send me back to the Demon world" Yumi looked down.
Dante's face became serious. "hey lady..just who the hell are you anyways?" He reached for his sword.
Yumi became scared, she knew about his sword, rebellion. It had slain many demons. Some almost as powerful as her. "Sahreth..Daughter of Makrah, the only demon who can defeat Sparta"
At that moment Dante flipped up and dashed towards her, he was about to cut her head off before she yelled out.
"Wait! Dante! Let me speak please!" Yumi was afraid. She could hold her own against Dante and he almost seemed to know it. He pulled back slightly, still having his guard up. "I asked you to trust me, I don't want to ever fight you, I am not your enemy"
Dante sighed. "I sure as hell can't trust you now. Your father is damn well evil. For all I know he could've sent you to kill me"
"Dante..I'm nothing like my father, I hate him for what he's done. I'm a half demon, just like you"
"what?" came the voice of two females, one with blonde hair, the other with short black hair. Yumi instantly recognized one of them.
"Trish...I thought you were still with Mundus?"
Trish's face was also very serious, sparks from her hand beginning to spark. "There's no way you're a half demon. Your father would never mate with a hu-"
Yumi stopped her. "he was forced to by Mundus, they thought that the only way to defeat Dante and Vergil is to have another half breed who is just as powerful as them. They trained me to kill you, but after my training I escaped. I couldn't do it, I was different. I saw what they did to humans and I couldn't take it. So I escaped.
"but Dante" the other woman began to speak. "she's a high class demon, the only portal she can go through is the one from Yamato..so ho-"
"Vergil" Dante stopped her. He looked forward and saw his brother, along with his sword, Yamato at hand.
"and that's where I come in." he grinned, walking forward and stopping next to Yumi. "She's telling the truth, she had indirectly helped my escape. Mounds putting all of his forces to capture her which had left the prison cells unattended. I had made my escape and had "bumped" into her. Followed her, and went through the same portal she had walked into. The question is. I felt Yamato's power, but now that I have it, it didn't come from Yamato itself" Vergil looked down at her. "Alicia..." he grinned. " is there another sword like Yamato that you have stashed somewhere?"
Yumi sighed, someone using her actual human name. "guess there's no use for my fake names" Alicia smiled. "Yes, there is another sword like Yamato, it is under my possession, only I know where it is, but for the Human worlds safety I will not give it up"
"for the human worlds safety or for you own!" Dante growled.
Vergil raised his hand to quiet his brother. "Was it made in the demon world? And was it made specifically for you?" He studied Alicia's face and she could feel it. As if his eyes were piercing through her heart. She felt compelled to answer his question..and she was actually liking it.
"The sword is like Yamato only in the sense that it can open portals, as a weapon of fighting, it is completely different from Yamato, its main elemental is not ice, but fire. So in a sense it is the same yet completely different" Alicia took a step forward towards Dante. "You have to trust me. If anything I am more like your father. I will take my sword up to fight any demons who threaten the human world"
Dante sighed, looking at trish and his other female friend. "Well lady..trish?"
Lady shook her head. "I really can't trust her, how many demons we've killed that had said the same thing...and your brother Virgil.."
Trish sighed. Putting her hands on her hips, the electricity fading. "Vergil..what are you doing here"
Vergil's smile faded. "I really don't have much to do. Getting out of hell was my only plan"
"You mean to tell me that you don't crave power? That you won't use this girl to your advantage? I'm sorry brother I love ya and all, but you gotta know that I know what you know sometimes" Dante picked up rebellion and twirled it around.
"humph" Vergil surprisingly put his hand on Alicia's waist, she let out a shriek like sound before her lips being enclosed with his. Alicia felt her stomach flutter, before her mind could process what was happening, Vergil pulled back. "That's for saving me..indirectly"
Alicia smiled, she wasn't going to let him win that easily. "Consider yourself lucky I didn't turn around while I was down there, I let you follow me"
Virgil just let out a "hmph" and began to walk away. "Dante, you can trust her, any demon that says different is lying"
Dante nodded. Smiling to his brother finally. "Good to see that you're back. Hopefully I won't need to send you back to hell after that stunt you pulled"
"I let you beat me" Vergil said before walking away.
Dante shrugged, "Whatever floats your boat bro" He turned around and sat down on the chair. He was in the same position he was when he had gotten there with Alicia.
"Sahreth. Wh-" Trish's voice was overshadowed by Alicia's own.
"Please, just call me Alicia. Alicia Bloodrose" She gave Trish a smile.
"Right..Alicia. You've probably answered enough questions for one day, however I'm still not sitting well with this.." She took a step forward. "Change of heart" Trish looked at lady who sighed and put her hands up in defeat. Walking towards Dante and told him something before walking away. Eying Alicia in the process.
"It's not a change of heart. I've always been like this since I was born probably. It's what they didn't expect"
"And what about your human mother? Do you know her? Know what she looks like?" Trish was pressing for a lot of info. She took a couple of steps back before leaning on the wall, her arms crossed.
"My father barely talked about her. All I know is that she has blue eyes" Alicia sighed, "like myself"
"Well, that cuts it down to a couple of million people" Dante joked.
Trish just gave Dante a glare. "anyways. For now we will just assume that you are telling us the truth. Which would mean that Vergil trusts you. Did you ever meet him before?"
Alicia sighed again. Rubbing her temple. "Yes, multiple times. But that was a long time ago. Two years maybe. He looked worn down. Beaten maybe. I tried to help him. I encouraged him, telling him that he will be fine, that one day he would escape" At first he always told me not to talk to him or just ignored me, but after a while he saw some truth to my words. It was then when my father caught on that I was visiting Vergil a lot. So he cut off my privileges. I never heard from him again until now"
"I find it odd that my bro would fall for a lady like you. Especially since he hates half demons" Dante sighed. Placing his two pistols, ebony and ivory. On the table.
"Yeah..I'm with Dante. Something is fishy here" Trish shook her head. Turning to Dante. "I gotta go, will you be okay with her? Alone?"
Dante laughed. "Yeah I'm good. As long as she don't try anything we'll be just fine"
Alicia smiled. "Thank you for trusting me once again, even if it's small" she bowed her head in respect. Still standing in the same position she was in when she had walked into "Devil May Cry"
Trish nodded and walked out through the door. Leaving the two half demons alone.
"Well? There's a couch. Over there." Dante pointed to the couch on his left. It was a large leather couch. "there's some food in the fridge if you'd like anything to eat, just warning ya, there's only pizza" he grinned.
Alicia bowed once again. "Thank you again for the hospitality" she walked over to the couch and sat down. Her hands on her lap. She looked around, it was quiet, except for some music playing through an old jukebox. There was stairs to which Alicia figured was the bedrooms and bathrooms. For once she actually felt safe. However just like Vergil, without her sword she cannot reach the limits of her power. Unlike Vergil, she can tap an enormous amount of energy and was still powerful than most demons at this state. She would just have a lot of trouble fighting.
"I'm all for chitchat, but I'm getting really bored here" Dante sighed. His phone rang, he kicked the desk and the phone was launched into the air. He caught it with one hand and picked it up with the other. "Devil May cry, what's the password?"
Alicia watched as Dante listened to the man, she strained to hear what the man was saying, apparently demons were at a steel factory causing havoc. Dante told him to stay put, he was on his way. "Wait.." She asked. "You're leaving me here?"
Dante sighed, picking up his two pistols and holstering them. Then picking up his sword. "you know how to fight? I can't be babysitting you all day"
Alicia nodded. "but I have to pick up my stuff, it's in the outskirts of the city. Only I know where it is, and if it's in the wrong hands then..well that's not good now is it?"
Dante nodded, walking out and getting on his motorcycle parked right in front. Alicia quickly hopped on. The motorcycle revved and launched itself forward. Alicia held tightly for dear life. Before she knew it she was out of the city and speeding on grass. They drove a couple of miles forward before Alicia ordered him to stop.
They stopped in front of a small shack with multiple rocks surrounding them. The shack was deserted, and there was nothing inside of it. There wasn't anything within a mile radius. "Are you sure it's here?" Dante asked, leaning on his bike and grinning.
Alicia once again rubbed her temple. "yeah it's here. I know it for a fact" she sighed. Putting her hands on her hips and looking left and right. Frustrated.
"Ya know, you look sexy as hell when you do that" Dante chuckled.
Alicia raised a brow, looking at him. "are you trying to hit on me Dante?" she walked towards a large rock and picked it up with ease. There it was, her sword and custom made I pod and headphones. There was also a custom made pistol inside a holster. Using the same components used to create Dante's twin pistol. However she had one and he had two. Alicia threw the rock to the side and put the I pod in her pocket while putting on the large wireless headset, it looked like something DJ's would use. Except that it was a blood red color. She attached the holster to the right side of her and picked up her sword. At that moment she felt an insane amount of power surge through her body. "Yes.." She whispered. "This is it. Ashura. The most powerful devil arm at this moment" She looked at Dante and smiled. "Let's go"
Dante shrugged, getting back on his bike. Alicia already behind them. He rode back into the city. Both prepared to take down demons. A grin appeared on Alicia's face.
Chapter two
- Spoiler:
- An hour after Alicia had found her equipment, the two got to their destination. A large steel factory. At this point it seemed abandoned. However as they met with the young man who had called Dante earlier. He looked like he had seen a ghost, and to be quite frank Alicia didn't blame him. Humans weren't used to seeing demons, let alone death.
"Are they still in there?" Dante asked, his sword now attached to the back of his coat.
Alicia barely payed any attention, she was shuffling through her playlist on her I pod. This would be her first actual combat. Her blue eyes finally looked upwards to see that Dante was already walking inside the factory. Her eyes changed to bloodshot red as she followed, putting on her earphones. The large muffs covering her ears, however it was built specifically in a way that allowed her to hear her music and the world around her. They were almost indestructible and most importantly, no wires.
The two walked into the factory. There was no light whatsoever. The door closed behind them and they were left in the darkness. This would be troublesome if they were humans, but they weren't. They could see just fine, even when it was pitch black. There was no sound emanating either. "Looks like they know we're coming" Dante scoffed.
"Yes. An ambush maybe?" Alicia wondered if the demons could sense their presence.
They walked for a moment longer before entering a brightly lit room. There were machinery everywhere.
And lots of bodies.
"well, it is an ambush. These bodies were placed here on purpose" Alicia almost saw it immediately. There was a large blood trail that led from another room right to the spot they were standing. She could hear the growls of demons.
"I kinda figured that out already babe" Dante's eyes scattered left and right, up and down. They were definitely surrounded. "well then..let's rock!" He grabbed his twin pistols, ebony and ivory, and began twirling them. He then pointed them at the demon in front of them.
From what Alicia saw there were at least eight of them. She grinned and pulled out Ashura. A red glow emanating from the tip which slowly moved down all the way to the hilt of the sword.
"hah" she let out an almost erotic but powerful sigh. With her other hand. She pressed the button for her I pod. Her loud, metal music booming through her headphones. She quickly inserted her I pod in her front pocket and got into a defensive position.
The demons roared. Most of them looking like large, dismembered dogs with limbs attached in odd places. Their speed was incredible, but they had underestimated their prey. Dante and Alicia were not humans.
"Oh! You're definitely staying in the air buddy!" Dante yelled as he charged upwards toward the first demon dog he had seen. Firing what seemed like hundreds of bullets. The dog being pushed back. It's body riddled with bullets but it barely seemed to phase it. Dante quickly switched out his pistols for his trusty sword. Rebellion. Slicing and dicing multiple demons that tried to blindside him.
Alicia had three demon dogs charge after her. She laughed and with a flick of a wrist, long fire swords appeared out of no where, Charging towards the demons. One was sliced in half as the other burned. The last one had disappeared. Alicia grinned. Not paying attention to the dog. She sheathed her sword and pulled out her I pod. Switching her music to something slow and serene. Her instincts made her twitch for her pistol. She pulled it out and aimed behind her. Firing two bullets without even looking. There was a yelp of a dog before it dropped to the ground. "Stupid demons..always trying to attack from behind"
Dante grinned, he was stained with demon blood. However the bodies were beginning to disappear. They had quickly defeated the demons with no trouble whatsoever. They just had one problem
"Dante" Alicia said, closing her nose. "You reek of horrible demon stench. Is this what always happens?" The red haired half demon now had her headphones around her neck. The music turned off, as if on cue. She quickly put away her gun. Not to give Dante the wrong impression, she had to make it seem like he was in control, or else the trust can turn sour at a moments notice.
"Yeah" he murmured, walking away from the bodies. He rested his sword on his shoulders, still having a grip on them. "Well time to go back. Morrison is gunna pay me later"
Alicia wondered who Morrison was. For the moment the two made eye contact. That's when Alicia noticed his gray eyes. They were just growling at her. They were seductive. It was like she could just float in them, in a sea of gray.
"What?" came the voice of Dante. Who slapped her out of her trance-like state.
"Oh" Alicia quickly shook her head, as if it was going to shake away those eyes. "Why were there so much? I thought there was usually a few here and there. We've just fought off a pack of dogs, so to speak"
"Eh" Dante shrugged. "It's normal. It's usually three or four dumbasses who think they have a chance or a pack of some "demon animals" bent on making me well..fish food" he chuckled, which caught Alicia off guard. She didn't think it was funny at all.
They got back to Devil May Cry just as the sun began to set. Once inside was when Alicia noticed more of the shop. There were ornaments, trophies most likely of his kills, random demons plastered along the left side of the wall. There was also a pool table next to the couch. It looked like it hadn't been used in a while, as the balls were spread around randomly. Alicia quietly took her seat on the couch. The only thing that bothered her was that Dante didn't even bother to take a shower. If there was one thing Alicia hated the most, it was people with Awful hygiene. "God dammit Dante, you smell like shit. Could you take a shower?"
Dante laughed. "only if you say please" Still, he went up the stairs and disappeared.
Alicia sighed. Taking a whiff at her clothes, she needed a shower as well. "And a change of clothes" she murmured. However, she had no clothes. She couldn't buy them that's for sure, and Dante wouldn't condone stealing. "!@#$" another sigh pursed through her lips. "Looks like I'll have to ask him for-" Alicia cut herself off as she stared at the desk. Her eyes widened as she stood up and took a step forward to look at the stack of papers.
"Bills.." A stack of bills were on the table. Which meant one of two things for her. Dante didn't have any money at all, or he refused to pay his bills. Both very stupid.
With a sigh, Alicia plumped herself down on Dante's chair, she noticed a picture of a beautiful woman and instantly recognized the figure. It was Dante and Virgil's mother. She had been dead for a long time. Yet Dante kept a picture of her for his memory. Alicia smiled, moving away strands of her hair from her face. Slowly her hands moved towards the left side of her. Dante's twin pistols were on the table. However, before she could touch them a hand grasped her own.
"Don't ever touch my babies again" came Dante's voice.
"You havent paid your bills" Alicia quickly responded, standing up and walking towards the pool table. She leaned back on it and rested her hands on top of it. "How long are you planning to stay he-" When Alicia looked at Dante she was stunned. His short silver hair was dripping, and he had on a new pair of pants, albeit same color as the one he had just taken off. He wasn't wearing a top. Which showed his chiseled body. It was perfect. Formed abs which were visible..and his face. It had sort of this cocky yet cute type of face. It was rounded and almost complimented his eyes.
"Somethin ya like?" he smiled, looking up then down at Alicia.
Alicia wondered if he was thinking the same thing as her, but it quickly washed away from her mind. "I don't have any spare clothes" Her mouth blurted out before her brain could comprehend what she had just said. "For uh..to sleep and go out"
"And you want me to buy em? As you can obviously see, I'm not in the best position right now babe"
"Ugh" Alicia rolled her eyes and walked up the stairs. "you at least have a spare towel?"
Dante grinned and offered his, which made Alicia disgusted. "Please tell me you have another towel!" She pleaded.
Dante laughed. Yeah babe, just get in there and I'll hand it to y-
Dante was cut off by a shoe smacking him in the face. "You damn pervert!" Alicia yelled. Starting up the stairs after she came down to hit him with her sneaker. "Just give it to me now!"
"ouch that hurt lady" Dante faked his sarcasm, which was extremely obvious to Alicia. "You're not getting anything unless you say it nicely" The joke also came with another shoe in the face.
Alicia sighed. "Can you please hand me a towel?"
"There we go, now that wasn't so hard now was it?" Dante was making his way up the stairs as well. He walked past Alicia and into his room. Moments later he came out with a pink towel.
Alicia almost chuckled, Dante groaned. "Don't ask where I got this" he murmured. Shoving it in Alicia's arms and walking back downstairs.
"Wha? what the he-" Alicia stopped for a moment, Dante seemed to actually be upset. She looked at the towel, it was quite old, but still in mint condition, there was a stain on it..blood? Alicia couldn't tell, but she shrugged and took the towel anyways. Heading inside the bathroom.
The bathroom was quite small. A sink with a mirror, a toilet, and a bathtub all lined up. It only took one step to get from the sink to the bathtub. The bathtub itself was wide enough for her 5'6 frame to actually lay down, but now wasn't the time for relaxing that much. She sighed. Taking off all her clothes, then resting her sword, Ashura and her pistol on the ground as well. She looked at herself in the mirror and almost marveled at her own body. If Dante and Virgil were built like gods, then she was a goddess. She had a perfect hourglass figure. Nice long red hair. Very pretty face that was also borderline cute. Her ocean blue eyes, perfect skin. Great lips. Alicia gave the mirror a wide smile. Showing her glowing white teeth. "Men would go head over heels for me" she thought. Although Alicia wasn't the one to have an ego. She was sure to be the prettiest human alive.
And then it hit her once again. She wasn't human...well fully human at least. Her eyes turned bloodshot red once again. All her senses becoming heightened. She frowned. Hearing the soft breaths of someone behind the door, Dante. "God dammit Dante!" She yelled out. "Would you stop!"
"Alright alright" yelled Dante on the other side of the door. Alicia couldn't help but laugh at Dante's antics. It was certainly a refreshing twist to the horrible and crude humor of the demons.
Turning the hot water on reminded the Red haired beauty of how much she had missed human water. It was clean and new, she inserted her feet first, feeling the hot water refresh her toes, then the rest of her feet. It was too hot, so she lowered it a tad bit and turned the handle for the cold water. The water quickly warmed up and less steam departed from the bathtub. Alicia finally entered the bathtub.
"Oh..that feels good, she let out a little moan. It had been so long since she had felt water like this. Grabbing the bar of soap, she quickly began washing herself off, humming to Chopin's romantic piano. Alicia respected classical music. It was music that defined the 18th and 19th century for humans, and still lives in the 21st century. It always amused her, and calmed her down at times.
Then she came crashing down to the tub. Groaning and grabbing her head in pain. She felt immense throbbing in her head. Images began to appear. And three numbers appeared. 300. "G..get out of my head!" She yelled. More images appeared.
Then a voice. It was kind, soothing, and very feminine. "Alicia" it said. "You know the path"
Alicia groaned, but finally the pain subsided, leaving her wondering just what the hell happened. "Second time...damn it.." Her voice sounding very weak. "Out of all the days..why today!"
The rest of the day was uneventful for the two. Alicia was basically forced to clean the clothes she had just worn, while Dante gave her a shirt and pajamas, both too big for her to wear, however she had no choice. She found herself sleeping in the guest room. Which was a comfortable size. It featured a bed and a window, that's all she needed for now. There was a problem, however. She could not sleep. Hours flew by and still she could not sleep. "Dammit" her voice crackled through the darkness. Sighing, she stood up and walked towards the window, staring at the moon. It was large and bright. "Beautiful"
"I guess this world does have beautiful things" Alicia took two steps back from the voice and reached for Ashura on the bed, but the voice grabbed it and appeared in front of the window. Alicia was shocked, her breathing increased and her heart fell, but finally sighed when the moonlight shined on the persons face
"Virgil" She gave a smile and raised her hand. "I thought it was someone else..could you please hand me Ashura?"
Virgil looked similar to Dante, except that he never really smiled and had his hair spiked up instead of Dante's downed hair. He also wore a blue trench coat. Personality wise, Alicia noted that he never liked guns and preferred sword battles, Virgil also seemed more intelligent than his twin brother, which made her wonder why he was so ignorant when the topic came to humans. Virgil unsheathed the sword and grinned, which caused Alicia's heart to once again sink. "This power is amazing" He tilted his head slightly, his eyes penetrating Alicia's once again. "Is this a twin sword of Yamato?"
Alicia shook her head, in reality it was, but if he were to figure this out, and figure out the true power of the swords when they were combined, not only could it destroy the Human world, but he would become the most powerful demon and no one can literally stop him. "If it was. I'm pretty sure you would have known about it. Besides this sword was just recently created for myself. Not for you"
Virgil looked at the sword. It's red aura slowly appearing. Alicia held her breath. If he put enough of his own energy into Ashura, then Yamato would surely react as well.
However this was not the case. Virgil sheathed the sword and threw it back to her. "I know you are lying, I can sense Yamato's presence, but now I can also sense Ashura's presence. The two swords are related"
Alicia gritted her teeth. "So then why did you give it back to me? Knowing that this sword can give you that extra power?"
Virgil grinned. "I know nothing of the sword, it would be unfortunate if that weapon of yours had..certain disadvantages"
"Are you still trying to destroy the human world?" The thought had been lingering through her mind, if he did then he would become her enemy. She was sure Dante would not sit well with it.
"As much as I would love to. At this moment no. There are other things on my mind. Besides, I do need the Human world at the moment" Virgil leaned out the window. "Look for your mother Alicia, she is still alive, and she's closer than you think. Make haste, you aren't the only one who's looking for her"
"What! Vergil what do yo-" She could not finish, as Virgil disappeared into the darkness.
"Shit...Mom.."
Chapter three
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- Alicia could not stop moving, could not stop fidgeting. Her mother was in trouble. A mother she knew nothing about. She didn't even know what she looked like. Frustration became apparent. "Dammit" Alicia sighed. Watching as the sun began to rise. Making it's way upwards. Alicia looked at her clock. 6:50am. Another sigh pursed through her lips. Dante was still sleeping. "I'll wait just a little more"
Ten minutes later Alicia found herself in Dante's room, leaning on the wall with her arms crossed. She found herself staring at him. Although he didn't sleep like a normal human being with comforters on top of him, he did sleep soundly. It made Alicia smile a little. Knowing that in his mind. Everything was fine, everything was safe.
"Got a reason for standing there Alicia?" Came Dante's voice. It surprised Alicia and she almost flinched.
"How long have you been awake?" She asked with a hint of fear in her voice. Why was she feeling so scared.
Dante groaned and sat up on the side of his bed. Scratching his short silver hair. He then began to stretch a little before answering. "Long enough to know there is something on your mind. What is it"
Alicia wondered if she should tell her about Vergil. Which made her pick up Ashura and stare at it. "Vergil was here"
"Heh, my brother must love me then" Dante gloated.
"It wasn't for you. It was for me. He said my mother was in danger, and that I need to find her fast. He said "she's closer than you think" I don't know about you, but Vergil is holding something back from me. He seemed annoyed. Which means something has happened to my mom, or something else is bothering him."
Dante looked around. Which made Alicia quickly wonder what he was looking for. Her question was soon answered when she saw him stand up, walked to his desk and pick up his amulet. "Well" He started. "Can't really help ya there"
The red haired demon's plans came to a screeching halt. She needed him. Having no clue around the city was not going to help her find her mother. "Dammit Dante! I can't look around the city myself! I'll get lost! What if the demons capture me? Then this.." Alicia raised Ashura in front of her. "If they get their hands on this then it's going to be a huge problem for you and for your brother Vergil"
Dante walked towards her and smiled. "I was just joking. Sheesh you're so damn serious. Lighten up"
"You barely know me.." Alicia murmured. Walking back to her room and grabbing her used clothes. She had washed them yesterday and had found that the heater in the back of the room had done it's job and dried the clothes. "We have to leave as soon as possible" she called out before closing the door and beginning to get dressed. "Mom..." Alicia felt panic in her heart. The day had just begun and it was turning sour very fast.
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"We should check the market district now. If anything she could be living there" Dante said, his motorcycle roaring into a stop.
"That's no good..if demons are looking for her then-"
"then they won't be stupid enough to look for her in their demon forms" Dante interrupted Alicia which caused her to become a bit angry at him.
"you said yourself that demons were dumbasses"
"Most demons" Dante corrected her. "We might not even be dealing with low class demons" he grinned. "and if that's the case then this is gunna be a lot more fun then I thought it was"
Alicia sighed. "Someone needs to put you in your right place"
The motorcycle sped through the city streets. The gust of wind fell great for Alicia, her red hair flying back as they neared the 100mph mark. Then Dante made a couple of turns and stopped.
Buildings upon buildings were standing right before them. Skyscrapers and large buildings, there were houses a couple of blocks down, meant for the filthy rich of course. "man I hate being here" Dante murmured. Parking his bike on the right side of the street. Alicia looked up at the parking sign, then at her I pods clock. He was allowed to park there...ten minutes from now. "ah what the hell" she shook her head, putting her I pod inside the backpack that she had found back at the house. Inside there were her headphones which she had taken out and placed them around her neck. Quietly she began walking next to Dante. He was wearing the same red coat from yesterday. His twin pistols in his holster while his large sword was being carried on his back. Alicia however looked like a normal human being. Minus her medium sized sword Ashura being carried around in it's sheath. "That number 300..it has to mean something.."
"Well, we've tried the address of 300, so it's not that...are you sure that was the number that you've been seeing"
Alicia sighed. She felt as if she shouldn't have told him everything. "Yes im sure Dante" Alicia looked up and looked at the street names. She had no idea why.
"Babe, this is going to take forever unless we have something to go on"
Alicia kept walking. Her gut feeling told her she was getting close. "deity street, tri street.."
Pain shot up through her head once again. She yelled as her body became limp like last time. Images appearing in her head. Buildings..no a house, it had a red top and was painted blue. The numbers in front of the door. 00.
"Hurry" the voice said. "there isn't much time" Alicia took that as her mothers voice. She sounded just like her. Although a little older.
"Alicia!" Dante yelled at her. Rushing towards her. He had stopped before. Thinking she was changing but after seeing her get up. A large truck was headed her way at very fast speeds. "Look out!"
Alicia wondered what terrible thing was happening that he had to yell. Looking up she saw a large truck heading in her direction, just mere seconds away. Her hand fiddled with Ashura, but in a split second she decided to jump away. The truck nearly missing her.
"Why..why the hell didn't that truck stop?" Alicia panted. She watched as the truck came to a screeching halt. Then reverse backwards.
"Looks like you were right about one thing Alicia" Dante said, walking towards the truck. "Demons are dumbasses"
Alicia could smell it as well. The stench of demon in the truck. It finally stopped and both Dante and Alicia got into their defensive stances. "eight..maybe nine?"
"nah, probably eleven" Dante grinned.
Alicia let out a sigh. Her pupils glowing red. The trucks back began to open slowly and out jumped some humanoid Demons. Large horns, red skin, but large. One of them looked very human however. Sporting a business suit and slick black hair. "well well well. Looks like we're in the right area" the mans voice boomed. "Since you're here Saraheth"
Alicia tightened the grip on her sword. She counted at least twelve demons including him. "Who are you and how do you know my name"
Dante on the other hand snorted. "really now?" he raised his arms up exaggeratedly. "I thought we was gunna have some fun. I've been itching to take some of you guys out already.
The suit man laughed. "Looks like the son of Sparta does have a sense of humor" his eyes burned red like Alicia's. "But we have no interest in you at the moment. There is something else we have to attend to"
"like her mother? Sorry man. But that does become my business, and I really hate when my business doesn't get finished. Hurts my job and I get less pay, and that makes me angry. Then I search for you guys and rip your damn skulls out of it's place to cool off. Got it?
Alicia knew one thing. Dante's sense of humor was terrible at worst. Laughably terrible at best. At least he was sticking up for her. Something that she didn't think he would do. "what do you want with my mother. You can't use her to force me back down" Alicia said. It stung her a tiny bit, but there were some truth to her words. She barely knew her mother and yet here she was, trying to protect her. How? She didn't know.
The demons around the suited man began to Change. Turning into big hideous monsters. Hungry for flesh. "Well well, I keep forgetting to introduce myself, not that it matters since you'll die. You can call me Marv" he laughed. That maniacal laugh that made even Dante cringe.
"god damn that's one annoying ass laugh"
"Agreed, we've talked enough anyways" Alicia charged at the suited man first while Dante handled the other demons. "Now demon let's see if you can keep up with me!" Alicia yelled.
Marv laughed. Watching as Alicia unsheathed her sword and tried three slashes. Each time he dodged the attacked with ease. A swift punch to the nose pushed Alicia back. Her nose already dripping with blood.
"Hmm? I thought you were supposed to be as strong as your father. Maybe he was wrong"
Alicia charged forward with rage. Her red pupils enlarging. "ill make you eat those words!" Ashura begin to glow. "ghosts swords" began to appear around her, then was lit on fire. She slashed forward. The swords charging at Marv. He grinned. His left arm turning into a large demonic one. Instead of fingers he had three large claws. Slicing the swords away. At the moment he noticed that Alicia was not behind her.
"You're finished!" Alicia had launched herself into the air and was coming down. Her sword lit up in flames. She brought it down on the demon.
And missed completely. The demon had also seemingly disappeared. Alicia turned her head left and right before sensing him behind her, she quickly turned and had her sword in front of her to block the impending attack. However Marv's demonic claws pierced through her skin. He pushed the sword towards her right shoulder. Alicia yelled in pain as she felt him kick her stomach with incredible force. Causing her to roll and tumble a couple of feet down the street.
Alicia struggled to get up. Her vision was blurred, struggling to see that Dante had already finished off the demons and was taking on Marv. She felt a hand go on her and quickly turned her around. It was Vergil.
"You look like..for the lack of a better word..shit"
Alicia opened her mouth to speak but he stopped her.
"Before you ask. Your mother is fine. But our most important task is in front of us"
"Vergil..whoever this guy..he's powerful" Alicia coughed out. She mentally blamed herself for underestimating her opponent.
"I see..so you haven't unlocked your full potential yet" Vergil stood up and walked towards Dante and the demon. Dante seemed to be having some trouble but Marv had already lost his suit and was now just in a white button up shirt and tattered pants.
"Marv" Vergils voice boomed. The two stopped fighting and Dante jumped back towards his brother.
"cmon verg, it was getting interesting!" Dante complained. Vergil just shot a stare at his younger brother.
"Vergil. What are you doing here?!" Marv spoke with a hint of uneasiness. "I..I thought you were still in the demon world!"
Vergil put a hand on his sword. "You think I was going to be stuck there forever? I had escaped when you fools went to chase after her. It was as simple as I expected and I must thank you for being complete idiots. Maybe I was wrong, maybe my brother isn't the stupidest demon in the world"
"hey verg, do you want me to put you back down there? Huh? You know I'd think they'd throw a party just for you and I'm pretty sure there's room for two" Dante seemed offended by his brothers response. In which another glare was given back by Vergil.
"You have got to be the most annoying being in the universe" Vergil said in a low monotone voice.
The demon gritted his teeth. "Mundus will not be pleased at all. However.." he grinned. His large teeth beginning to show. "Taking you back for Mundus will show my loyalty to him. And maybe higher power!"
The demon charged at both Dante and Vergil. Vergil pushed Dante back and pulled Yamato from it's sheath. "Begone!"
Alicia groaned as she struggled to stand up. Holding onto her right arm where her large wound caused from her own sword. She held Ashura tightly. Blood dripping down to the cold steel. Something ticked in her head, and Alicia's mind went Blank as her pupil grew to such an extent. The red had completely taken over both eyes. "Marv!" Alicia's voice was a lot colder. Her appearance began to change. She became taller. Her body covered in some type of black and red metal. Ashura began to change aswell, The sword becoming a large, blue and red, double bladed scythe.
Marv stopped in his tracks and froze. The two brothers also stopped. Only Vergil was left in awe.
"N...no.." The large demon could only spit out. He quickly turned around and began running. Then froze again as the large arm fell off. The missing area from the demons arm began to spray blood, the demon itself yelling out in pain before it was cut into pieces. Alicia appearing as the chunks began to fall apart.
Dante stared in awe at what just happened. It took Alicia five seconds to take him out, and they had been fighting for at least five minutes. "And why couldn't you just do that huh?" He asked her. "you should've just stood back and let me handle everything"
Alicia gave Dante a look and pointed Ashura at him "Son of Sparta" her voice was a lot lower pitched than it usually was. It sounded..demonic, as if another voice overlay her usual voice. "Do not mock me"
"well" Dante grinned. "watcha gunna do about it Hun?"
"Dante enough" Vergil spoke up. Obviously annoyed at his brothers antics. "Alicia" he turned his head towards the half demon. "I believe you were here for something else"
The devil formed Alicia put her left hand on her shoulder. Her armor like skin disappearing and giving her back her normal human form. However the cuts and bruises were still there. Including the large gap on her shoulder which had came from her own sword. She seemed a lot more pale. "Vergil. Take me to her"
Vergil shook his head slightly before turning his head to walk. He obviously didn't like having someone order him around. Or care that Alicia was on the brink of collapsing.
Dante helped Alicia walked. Even after the small confrontation they just had. Her breathing increased as they walked down the street. The red roofed house just mere seconds away. Alicia became nervous. Unsure what to do or say when she met her mother. Emotions hadn't caught up with her yet, but she knew it was only a matter of time before she actually broke down. Or something similar.
"how's it feel? You're finally gunna meet your mother" Dante seemed to say it with a tinge of regret.
Alicia couldn't feel Dante's or Vergil's pain. They had lost their mother and she was finally about to meet hers. "I..I'm.." Alicia didn't know what to really say. "I'm sorry.." she was finally able to croak out.
"Dont be. It wasn't your fault" Dante didn't look down at her, just looked forward. His body tensed, as if demons were hiding. Waiting for the three to drop their guard.
Then Alicia felt something wet hit her face. Thinking it was the sky she looked up, but there were no dark clouds for rain. She then felt another one. She looked at Dante and noticed it was coming from his face. Tears? 'I can't believe it. A devil..crying?' she had never seen one cry before and had always thought she never would until now. However no more tears ran down.
They finally stopped in front of the house. Vergil knocked on the door twice. Dante cautiously moving Alicia up to the door. The door began to unlock from the inside and Alicia's mind began to quickly go through everything that just happened. She ran through her memories. Since she was a little girl, training to become the most powerful demon in the world. Having no voice of power until she had matured. Becoming strong, intelligent, useful. Not knowing her mother, thinking she was dead this whole time.
Until now. The door opened slowly. Alicia was forced to squint to see who was inside, but the figure stepped out. It's blue eyes to meet her own. Just a tad bit taller than Alicia. The female figure had black hair with streaks of red. Her face as youthful as hers. Her smile seemed to brighten Alicia's own.
"Alicia..you've made it" the figure said. It's voice seeming to resonate around the area. Wonderful and pure.
Alicia was holding back her tears and the two brothers noticed it. She looked at Dante, then Vergil, who both gave her nods of approval. She turned back at the woman.
"M..mother?" She asked hesitantly.
The figure smiled even wider. "I've never been able to formally introduce myself honey" Her voice so passionate. "Sarah Bloodrose"
Alicia couldn't hold it back. Even before the name. Before the voice. She knew this was her mother. Her tears flew down her cheeks. Sobs beginning to increase. She grasped her mother in her arms. Embracing her. Crying. That was her emotion. One emotion she had never used before. An emotion that was locked up and suppressed in her body. Until now.
"I have heard..your father began a Civil war with Mundus.." Sarah said lowly.
And then she was brought down to earth. "S..shit.." Alicia sobbed.
Even hell destroyed her one moment.
Chapter three is up!
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Bump, for obvious reasons.
No one likes DMC?
No one likes DMC?
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Zero2Hero 2011-07-29, 12:33
Devil May Cry is awesome. I'll read this Fan Fix! I didn't know girls would be interested in DMC.
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Im very Interested in DMC
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Zero2Hero 2011-07-29, 13:39
Wow, that was a lot to read. Luckily it was interesting, so it felt short, but it really wasn't. Nice Chapter 1, it was very well detailed. One question though, will we be seeing Patty in your Fan Fiction?
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Roxzen 2011-07-29, 13:50
Mhm, good stuff there.
I don't normally read fan-fic, but yours make me want to read them again. (^_^)=b
I don't normally read fan-fic, but yours make me want to read them again. (^_^)=b
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Zero2Hero 2011-07-29, 14:05
Yeah, I really don't care about Fan Fictions either. It was DMC, so I couldn't resist. Plus, she had to bump it, and I felt kinda bad. My conscience is too strong for me to let no one read the Fan Fiction. It was truly good though.Roxzen wrote:Mhm, good stuff there.
I don't normally read fan-fic, but yours make me want to read them again. (^_^)=b
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Goddess nX 2011-07-29, 15:54
Zero2Hero wrote:Wow, that was a lot to read. Luckily it was interesting, so it felt short, but it really wasn't. Nice Chapter 1, it was very well detailed. One question though, will we be seeing Patty in your Fan Fiction?
Of course! And if you've played DMC3 you'll see a surprise appearance by some of your favorite weapons (Agni and Ruda anyone?
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Zero2Hero 2011-07-29, 15:59
Wow, you're really into DMC. You got me excited for your Fan Fiction!
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Goddess nX 2011-07-29, 20:42
Edited first post. Chapter two is up
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Zero2Hero 2011-07-29, 20:59
Chapter 2 was excellent. 10/10
You picked the perfect way to end it, as it keeps the readers wanting more.
Well done.
You picked the perfect way to end it, as it keeps the readers wanting more.
Well done.
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Goddess nX 2011-07-29, 22:08
Haha thanks. I think Chapter 3 is pretty interesting. Youll see when it comes out
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Zero2Hero 2011-07-29, 22:09
How many chapters do you have planned out so far?
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Goddess nX 2011-07-30, 09:37
I plant to write out 27 Chapters. I wanna flesh out my characters story and her mother a lot. Shes not what she seems 
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Zero2Hero 2011-07-30, 13:30
Sounds good to me. And this is coming from someone who doesn't care about Fan Fictions. XD
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I do like the game & the anime but what i do not like is reading a painful wall of textGoddess nX wrote:Bump, for obvious reasons.
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Yami-Malik 2011-07-30, 13:45
Nice story, im rly likin it even tho ive never seen much of DMC 9/10
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Zero2Hero 2011-07-30, 13:53
Seeing a lot of test is very intimidating, but not when it's good test. XDAbyss Knight wrote:I do like the game & the anime but what i do not like is reading a painful wall of textGoddess nX wrote:Bump, for obvious reasons.
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CCStormgust 2011-07-31, 07:29
i tho don't like what they did to the original character in dmc 5
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Zero2Hero 2011-08-03, 11:51
Don't get me started on that game.Abyss Knight wrote:i tho don't like what they did to the original character in dmc 5
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Goddess nX 2011-08-04, 06:05
I wont judge DMC 5 yet until I see some gameplay. 
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Goddess nX 2011-08-08, 17:31
Chapter three! Its here!
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Zero2Hero 2011-08-08, 17:51
Just finished it. Another great Chapter, but this one was Action Packed!
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Goddess nX 2011-08-08, 18:51
Thanks Hopefully im getting better
Hopefully im getting better
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I enjoy action, so I would have to say that you're getting better. XD
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Goddess nX 2011-08-12, 09:58
Bump. Anyone else read this? 
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Zero2Hero 2011-08-12, 10:14
Maybe no one saw it on the recent topics. Just PM the people who read the other chapters.
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Potus-Mat 2011-08-12, 11:29
I just read all three. I like it and all, but somehow, I have trouble fearing a demon named Marv.
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Goddess nX 2011-08-12, 12:09
Not really his name. They take up human forms and use Human names when they're in the human world. Hence the reason why he called Alicia by her demon name.
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Potus-Mat 2011-08-12, 13:23
Oh. Alrighty then. Just work on proper pronouns and it will be ready to be published.Goddess nX wrote:Not really his name. They take up human forms and use Human names when they're in the human world. Hence the reason why he called Alicia by her demon name.
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Goddess nX 2011-08-12, 13:44
I don't think I'll publish it. Copyright issues and stuff. Its just a hobby I like to share
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Potus-Mat 2011-08-12, 13:51
I suck at compliments almost as much as I suck at sarcasm...Goddess nX wrote:I don't think I'll publish it. Copyright issues and stuff. Its just a hobby I like to share
Anyway, let me try again:
You write (type) the erotic scenes in a passionate and sparing way that most writers can only dream of. Was that too specific, too offense, too long-winded, or was that an acceptable compliment?
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